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There are many ways to know about other countries - neither only by watching TV programmes nor films


thutyedaniel 32 / 38 17  
Apr 7, 2015   #1
Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and films about it than by actually visiting it.
How true is this statement? Is there anything you can learn about another country by visiting it that you cannot learn by watching programmes and films about it?


Introduction:

In this day and age, there are many ways to know about other countries. For this reason, several people argue that one of the best ways to learn about other countries are watching television programmes and films without visiting it. This is because they just stay at home to do it. However, others think that people should visit to other countries to learn more about native habit of foreign countries. Therefore, I would argue that learning about other countries by visiting is rather than just learn by watching television shows and movies.

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irhame 52 / 50 25  
Apr 7, 2015   #2
you repeat countries 5 times
you can change it to state or nation
Windachan 13 / 18 5  
Apr 8, 2015   #3
... or films without visiting at the place is the a way to learn about different nations It is because thisas being effective option for people to learn.

... to learn more about their cultures, their histories, and their languages.
NhatKhang 2 / 5 1  
Apr 8, 2015   #4
In the title, there is something wrong. It should be "neither ...nor"
AinunAlfatih 15 / 14 8  
Apr 9, 2015   #5
Some suggestions for your writing :

1. The main benefit of learning about other nations by watching television programmes and films is much more convenient for people(From my perspective, it is not appropriate if you write "people" as it means that all of the people feel much more convenient watching television programs, whereas in the reality just numerous people which feel that. I suggest you to use "numerous people" or "some people")

2. Also, this way has an important impact on people quality of life.

3.I strongly believe that people better travel to destination than watching shows and movies. Lets try this sentence: It is imperative that traveling to particular places is the best way to learn about it than watching shows or movies.


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