It was very dificult for me to understand what you were trying to say, well I made the changes in 15 minutes...
Thanks Namia, you are great!
Okay Edward, now if you want to practice, you should type the essay the way Namia typed it. You can add some more sentences, too, and we will look to see where you still have errors. Do you have any questions so far?
...that you are doing
well at home.You wrote a letter last week mentioning
the increased price of goods and the falling value of the ringgit. I was fortunate enough to attend "Save your Ringgit Ses
sion" run by the State Consumer Department yesterday.