The world around us is not the one we are always dreaming of. It is devided between rich countries and poor ones. There is always an argument about whether wealthy nations should share their wealth among poorer nations.
This is pretty good, but it is even better if you state your opinion in the introduction itself. That would help your examiner to follow you in your desired direction.
The answer is yes but, in a very feasible and controlled way.
.... Ok.... your opinion has come in the first body para... Take this to the introduction and start with the first reason why you say "it is a conditional yes" :D .... Then support this reason with an example :)