Hi Irfan, happy to read your writing.
I try to give you some sugestions.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, satellite technology offers photos globally include analysing and forecasting including analysis and forecast, (comma) while radar is observed to radar screen which is gained from the inhabitants' houses.
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all in all, you have good grammar, but trying to use short sentence to make clear meaning. In your sentence, there are two conjuctions, while and which, it makes your readers breathless for reading your hand writing, using comma or dot to tackle this issue. And some double verb is that I have tried to give more optional word. Hoping helpful.