A wheelchair is needed, not only for disabled people but also for the elderlies. A rapid growth of older inhabitants happens in developed country. on the other hand, most of the disabilities in that state come from the poverty, injuries and conflict society. Wheelchair gives a bigger occasion to the sufferers to run their lives, to be more independent, and discover the world as other people do. Unfortunately, the tight spaces, slippery surfaces, width of doorway, and steep slopes issues arise and create a new problem. Home is one of some difficult places to use a wheelchair, because it should be specifically designed to ease the disability. The interior modification can be done to a few sides at home, such as lower the sinks and mirrors, higher the toilet seats, lower counters and shelves and also switches.
A wheelchair is needed
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older inhabitants => older people
Wheelchair gives a bigger occasion
to thefor sufferers to run their lives=> a realistic chance
The interior modification => the modification of its interior
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