mema 1 / - Jan 5, 2015 #1I want for helpCorrect grammar English rules in this paragraph please.Everyone has at least a person in life that admire. The person who is really special in my life is my mother.She is very affectionate, loving, She is a big hearted , She instills tremendous amount of courage and confidence in us . on the other hand she is honest I always trust her and ready all the time to solve our problems. I wish I had the same kind of patience, capability of handling any situation.I admire her because she is a very intelligent,Besides has many talents that I don't have. She tells me she is proud of me the always . Indeed Whenever something becomes too much for me, she is there calming me.Finally i love and respect my mother for all these reasons, and for a lot more. I can find new friends to replace old ones, but i can't find another mother.
Lady Elle 5 / 8 Jan 5, 2015 #2Everyone has at least one person in life that we admire.She is very affectionate and loving.I think loving and has a big heart is synonymousAlso, you have to note that the word next to a period should always be a capital letter such as (The girl is beautiful. She has a long blonde hair.When describing something, write it like this (My favorite colors are red, blue and green.) NOT (My favorite colors are red, blue,green.)
lynn1997h 3 / 37 4 Jan 5, 2015 #3As a whole, use stronger words and for the grammar and syntax stuff, say your essay out loud and then you will notice how some things sound funnySuch as the "that" rather than a more appropriate "they" in your first introductory sentence.