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Whenever something becomes too much for me, my mother is there calming me


mema 1 / -  
Jan 5, 2015   #1
I want for help
Correct grammar English rules in this paragraph please.

Everyone has at least a person in life that admire. The person who is really special in my life is my mother.
She is very affectionate, loving, She is a big hearted , She instills tremendous amount of courage and confidence in us . on the other hand she is honest I always trust her and ready all the time to solve our problems. I wish I had the same kind of patience, capability of handling any situation.

I admire her because she is a very intelligent,Besides has many talents that I don't have. She tells me she is proud of me the always . Indeed Whenever something becomes too much for me, she is there calming me.

Finally i love and respect my mother for all these reasons, and for a lot more. I can find new friends to replace old ones, but i can't find another mother.
Lady Elle 5 / 8  
Jan 5, 2015   #2
Everyone has at least one person in life that we admire.

She is very affectionate and loving.I think loving and has a big heart is synonymous

Also, you have to note that the word next to a period should always be a capital letter such as (The girl is beautiful. She has a long blonde hair.

When describing something, write it like this (My favorite colors are red, blue and green.) NOT (My favorite colors are red, blue,green.)
lynn1997h 3 / 37 4  
Jan 5, 2015   #3
As a whole, use stronger words and for the grammar and syntax stuff, say your essay out loud and then you will notice how some things sound funny

Such as the "that" rather than a more appropriate "they" in your first introductory sentence.


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