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How a wind turbine will be built and where it is located


ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 30, 2016   #1
The diagrams illustrate how a wind turbine will be built and where it is located. A wind turbine consists of a steel tower, a blade, a wind sensor and a generator. Those are connected to computer system. Wind plants are established in beaches.

Wind turbine is designed to generated energy from wind. Therefore, it is built by set up a steel tower which has three blades made of fibreglass or wood in its top. On the same part, it is completed by wind sensor in order to measure wind speed and direction. As the blades are moved by wind, generator produces 1.5 megawatt electricity. The direction and angle of wind then adjusts with the blades.

The wind plants can be built in to areas closed to coast. One can be located in the depressions while it can produce maximum wind energy if it is set in the hill. The location should be free where the landscape will not spoil the wind turbine. Therefore, a domestic turbine such given by the diagrams can generate 100 kilowatts electricity.




Beauty17 56 / 88 5  
Aug 30, 2016   #2
Haloo @ekalamarsyari11 i am so exciting read this essay more than it gives me more informations and knowledge about one of alternatives energy such as wind plant. Your english in this essay is good even i have not found yet your mistake.. keep practice and break a leg..

I am waiting for your next essay :)
Thank youu
Cheers
azmi23 17 / 28 3  
Aug 30, 2016   #3
hi! what a writing! i just would like to give some suggestions and a few corrections

For maximum result, Wind plants are usually established in beaches.

Wind turbine is designed to generated energy from natural wind power . Therefore, it is built by setting up a steel tower (...) of fibreglass or wood inon its top.

... it is completed bywith wind sensor in order to ...
As the blades are being moved by wind, generator ...
The direction and angle of wind then adjustswith the blades.

The wind plants can be built in toon areas closed to coast.
Therefore, such a domestic turbine suchwhich is given by the diagrams can ...
RAY93 35 / 186 136  
Aug 31, 2016   #4
... consists of a steel tower, a blade , a wind sensor ...
Those are connected to A computer system. Wind plants are established in beaches. = despite of this sentence which gives incomplete and less proper information [you should just introduce about potential places to plant that turbine], you already gave a well introduction.

Wind turbine is designed to generated energy from wind.
... by wind sensor in order to measure wind speed and direction[direction is not something to measure. Thus, you better say = to measure wind speed and alter the direction or angle] .

... generator produces 1.5 megawattof electricity.

The wind plants can be built in to areas closed to coast.
The location should be free where the landscape will not spoil the wind turbine = incorrect information. a good location which is in the sea is good since it will not spoil the landscape.

despite of some suggestions which i give in your writing, i find that you did a quite good job here. keep writing


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