A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer.

The diagrams present the components of a wind turbine and where it can be placed. A wind turbine consist of tower, generator, wind sensor, and blades controlled by a computer. The best locations for the wind turbine is in a free landscape area with windy condition. It can be below sea level, on the highland and in domestic area.

The tower functionate as the cantilever of other parts. It is made of steel and constructed high. At the upper point of tower, there is a generator which can produce 1,5 megawatts of electricity. It is equipped with the wind sensor to control speed and direction of turbine, which connected to a computer in a small building not far from it. At the opposite of wind sensor, there is blades which made of fiberglass or wood and rotate when the wind comes then produce the electricity.

The optimum place to install the wind turbines is in the landscape area which is free from any tall buildings and has maximum wind strengths. It also can be located near from houses, called 'domestic turbine' but it only produce the lower output about 100 kilowatts.

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aloha Ashela, here are my suggestions for you:

... of a wind turbine and where it can be placed(you can also say"the optimal place to gain the best output") . A wind turbine consists of tower, generator, ...

Also, It can be below sea level...

The tower functionates as the cantilever of other parts. It is made of steel ...

... there is blades which made of fiberglass or wood and rotates when the wind comes then produces the electricity.

... is in the landscape area which is(reducing adjective clause) free from any tall buildings and hashaving maximum wind strengths. It also can be located near from houses, called (...) the lower output ( about 100 kilowatts) .

I hope it can be helpful
keep writing the best

there is blades = there are blades (plural)

it only produce = it only produces (present tense)

Hi Ashela.
I am pleased to read your writing because you have held the positive progress. Actually, you can diminish your mistake if you need much time to review before you upload. There are a great number of micro mistakes which can be tackled.

However, you will master for this skill.

A wind turbine consistS of A tower, A generator, A wind sensor, and ...
... in a free landscape area with A windy condition. It can be below THOSE AREAS CAN BE SEPARATED INTO THREE LOCATIONS; THE sea level, on the highland and in THE domestic area.

The tower functionateS as the cantilever ...
It is made ASSEMBLED of steel and constructed high. At the upper point of THE tower, there is a generator which can produce GENERATED 1,5 megawatts of THE electricity.

... control speed and direction of THE turbine, which connected to a computer in a small building BEING not far from it. At the opposite of THE wind sensor, there is ARE blades which made CONSISTED of fiberglass or wood ...

... is in the landscape area which is free from any tall ...
... but it only produceS the lower output about 100 kilowatts.

A wind turbine consistS of A tower, A generator, A wind sensor, and blades ...
The best locations for the wind turbine is ... = there are three potential locations while the best site is on a hillside in which it can generate 1.5 mw powers. if it comes those who give less impact to environment, the best location is in the sea

It can be below sea level,[below sea level means it is planted under the sea surface. you can simply say in the sea/seashore/or shallow waters] on the highland and inon domestic area.

*concern about the using of in and on

1,5[be careful on the writing of punctuation on number] megawatts of electricity.

, there is blades[singular/plural issue] which made of fiberglass or wood and rotate when the wind comes then produce the electricity. = when wind comes to rotate it in order to produce electricity

despite of some minor errors and alternative sentence that i suggest, i find that you clearly describe those diagrams which make your essay is quite easy yo comprehend. keep writing