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Wind Turbine Generates Energy Power for Harnessing [IELTS - TASK 1]


ruwchii 6 / 18 3  
Feb 4, 2015   #1
The diagrams show a turbine machine for producing harnessing energy from wind and where it places in optimum spots. Overall, it is clear that while it is a simple way to generate energy power by using natural source like wind, its installation will be by far the most difficult in some extent related to its location.

To begin with, a wind turbine consists of two parts; blades and a tower. While the tower is made from steel, the blades are manufactured from either fiberglass or wood. In addition, these parts are connected to a generator which can generate 1.5 megawatts energy power. Also, a wind sensor is installed on the top of generator which can measure the speed and the direction of wind when the blades are turned around by blowing wind. A computer which is nearby the tower can adjust the blades both its direction and its angle based on information from wind sensor.

The wind turbine can be installed in two different places in order to get a maximum result of electricity energy. Firstly, the wind turbine can be placed on the top of mountain where wind blows with maximum strength. In contrast, other turbine can be set up close by coast line. However, it cannot generate more electricity power because the turbine's blades are only twisted by less strength wind. Finally, the domestic turbine which is located on the hill can produce 100 kilowatts of harnessing power.




midorimido 2 / 7  
Feb 4, 2015   #2
While the tower is made from steel, the blades are manufactured from either fiberglass or wood. In addition, these parts are connected to a generator which can generate 1.5 megawatts energy power. Also, a wind sensor is installed on the top of generator which can measure the speed and the direction of wind when the blades are turned around by blowing wind

try different word.

Overall , it is clear that while it is a simple way to generate energy power by using natural source like wind, its installation will be by far the most difficult in some extent related to its location.

I suggest you not to use overall in process. Try using at the first glace
Mann_ms 9 / 20 5  
Feb 6, 2015   #3
Hai..
Allow me to give you some suggestion for your essay.. This is a nice essay.. However, I found a little bit mistake in your writing..

The diagrams show a turbine machine for producing harnessing energy from wind, and where it places in optimum spots

S+V, and S+V don't forget to put comma before AND if after this word followed by S+V

blades and a tower

needless to say that AND we use to connect parallel words and sentences. So, you have to make it parallel in here...

In contrast, other turbines can be set up close by coast line


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