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IELTS:1 - 'wish you the best in the city' A letter to a friend


hadi1981 25 / 44  
Jun 5, 2012   #1
A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
- give contact details for when you are away
- give instructions about how to care for your pet
- describe other household duties
Write at least 150 words.

Dear John,

Firstly, I appreciated your acceptance of taking care of my little Kitty cat when I spend my annual vacation outside. I already confirmed my flight booking on 8th of June at night.

My neighbor will get you from the airport and will drive you to my home, in addition to give you the little Kitty that will be with him until you reach.

I kept everything for my cat in my house, it's special food and the private water for it. So you can find everything in it's room next to the balcony.

You have to prepare it's food three times daily and to shower it every other day, otherwise if you notice any strange thing about it you can call the veterinary, Imad, phone number 555 7891 1, and ask him for help.

By the way, I'd like to ask you to take care of my small garden in the balcony as it needs to be irrigated every day in the morning.

Hopefully you'll feel comfortable in my house which has everything you and my little Kitty need.

I wish you the best in the city, and hope to see you soon.

Best wishes,

Hadi

BachChaconne2 1 / 96 19  
Jun 5, 2012   #2
Dear John,

Firstly,I appreciated your acceptance ofThank you fortakingagreeing tocare ofwatch my littleKitty cat whenwhile I spend my annual vacation outsideam away on vacation . I already confirmedM y confirmed flight bookingis scheduled to depart on 8th of June at nightthe evening of June 8 .

I had enough time to edit one paragraph. Overall, I think it's an adorable letter. However, you did not provide contact details for when you're away. Aside from that exclusion, I enjoyed reading your letter.


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