IELTS-Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths

Question :
Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?

Answer:
Introduction
in many parts of the world, there is now greater equality between women and men. However, there are many professions can be done by males than females due to it is required great strengths and physical stamina, and therefore I agree with the statement.

Thanks.

.... you should not forget the basics even during practice sessions. Start sentences with Capital letters! :D


In many countries, men and women enjoy equal levels of freedom.


... here you have grammar errors.
However, there are certain professions that require particular strengths and capabilities and therefore they would be best suited with a particular gender.

Dear Dumi,

Thank you for your valuable comments and I will re-write again.

Thanks