Unanswered [13] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Writing Feedback   % width Posts: 2


'I have a wonderful support system' - Planning and reflections Ashford


missy7779 2 / 2  
Apr 13, 2012   #1
When I first started online here at Ashford, I was really nervous. I was scared on how much stuff I had forgotten. But these last five weeks have really brought my mind back to reality. I am more comfortable now and I kind of understand and know what to expect in my future classes. I have defiantly learned do not be scared to ask questions about anything to your instructor, teachers aid, or your advisor, all of them have been wonderful to me and quick with getting back to my answers. What I have learned or should I say getting my mind refreshed on how to look things up on the internet and learning my nouns and pronouns again. This course has taught me to relax and make sure I read all directions, take notes, and do not hesitate to ask questions if you're in doubt. I will take these steps with me to my other classes. I defiantly need to work on my schedule and getting it set, learn to take short breaks and relax, it is not that bad. I enjoyed getting to know my classmates and instructors. I still have a lot to work on, but if I set my goals and stick with them I will be alright, I have a wonderful support system and am looking forward to my next course.
EF_Susan - / 2,364 12  
Apr 17, 2012   #2
When I first started online here at Ashford, I was really nervous on how much stuff I had forgotten.and feeling intimidated about having been out of the school routine.ButHowever...

I have defiantly? did you mean definitely? learned do notnot to be scared...

Ok, I made a couple of corrections but I think you're on the right track. Because you want to turn in a good paper/letter here, and because of the nature of it; focusing on your improvements as a student, those are added reasons that you must sharpen your grammar and sentence structure. I gave a few examples on how you could enhance your work with different language and I'll bet a thesaurus would benefit you a good deal.

I hope this helps. Take care and good luck :)


Home / Writing Feedback / 'I have a wonderful support system' - Planning and reflections Ashford
Writing
Editing Help?
Fill in one of the forms below to get professional help with your assignments:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳