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IELTS task 1 - Woodward University Map


M3L1 26 / 6 11  
Nov 5, 2015   #1
The maps show the changed of Woodwards University spatial during 1985 until now. Overall, it can be seen that the university has altered most of the layout at present, demolished some establishments and replaced them with some others regarding to the necessity, much different from 1985's.

On the north west, there was a library and IT center which has been moderate expanded to the south compared to the old one. Follow the footpath, they built Science Laboratories and Lecture Theater on the north east. In contrast, on the 1985's map showed, there were physics block and chemistry block following the biology block and small car park at the same position.

However, on the south west, the bigger car park had been changed into shuttle bus terminal, which used less space than car park. On the south east, admin building was reconstructed a slightly above the past, it reduced in the length but expanded in the width. That position left a lot of open space in front of it. The road had gone, it has been changed into footpaths, which designed directed to buildings.




eddies [Contributor] 25 / 1,195 459  
Nov 9, 2015   #2
The maps showShow the changed ofthe development of Woodwards University spatialduring 1985 until now. Overall, it can be seen that the university has alteredsome changes inmost of thethelayout of buildings connected one another at present, while certain development in public services is introduceddemolished some establishments and replaced them with some othersregarding towith the regard to the necessity, much different from 1985's.

As you can see, I have made a slight improvement in an opening paragraph. Hopefully you could notice the changes.

there was a library and IT center which has been moderate expanded to the south compared to the old one

The outward appearance of the the library and IT center lying in the northwest of the map has been further expanded to the shuttle bus terminal.

Follow the footpath, they built Science Laboratories and Lecture Theater on the north east.

A footpath connecting the Science Laboratories and Lecture Theater leads to the north east of the map

In contrast, on the 1985's map

Well, if I were you, then I'd merely focus on the changes. This means that today's development has more chances to be discussed.
Ra_fhli 22 / 17 8  
Nov 9, 2015   #3
Hi Meli, here my advice for you so as to enhance your writing.

The maps showS the changed "Alteration" of Woodwards University spatialduring From 1985 until to 2015. Overall, it can be seen that the university has altered become most of the layout at present, demolished some establishments and replaced them with some new buildings regarding to the necessity {of the academicians} , much different from 1985's.

Hope It Helps


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