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A work that can give minimum salary should be obtained by people who remain jobless


kobayakawa07 8 / 13  
Aug 13, 2016   #1
Some people believe that unemployed people should be made to work for their welfare/benefit payments. Others, however, see this as cheap labour.
Discuss the possible advantages and disadvantages of making unemployed people take any job.
Do you believe that making unemployed people work is a good idea?


Some parts of society argue that work that can give enough salary should be obtained for people who do not have any job. While others claim that they do not appropriate to get good payment as they are less expensive labour. In this essay, I believe that giving good work for unemployed humans is excellent idea since it will decrease the number of crime. However, the firm where they work will lack of budget.

Declining crime level of such a region is one of positive effects that can be obtained. If people have no idea to get welfare payments, they can become thief. Then, this phenomena will disturb rest of society. For example, according to police report of United States of America in 2013, there was correlation between number of crime and number of unemployed people. The number of crime fell down at 30 per cent. Such figure followed by decreasing the number of unemployed people in such an area.

In addition, many companies which hired unemployed people will be closed. This happened because the companies cannot give enough salary to all labour which are included ex-unemployed people. Those firms' budget will experience unbalance between income and outcome which the outcome is greater that the income itself. For instance, research from University of Texas reveals that virtually half of companies in Texas stopped their production in 2003 due to unbalance budget. Such a fact occurred since local government forced them to hire unemployed people.

To sum up, while some people claim that job which can give welfare payments should be made for unemployed people, others argue that policy will make many firms to close their activities. On the other hand, I believe that making unemployed people work is perfect idea since it will make the number of crime to decrease significantly.

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lucas xavier 1 / 1  
Aug 14, 2016   #2
Hi kobayakawa07, here are some advice I would like to give you. If you have any question, feel free to ask ;)

Some parts of the society argue that work that can give fine salary should be obtained by people who do not have any job while others, however, claim that these jobs are dishonourable.

In this essay, I will declare that giving good work to unemployed humans is an excellent idea since it helps decrease the number of crime though lack of budget could be a big problem.

Declining crime level is one of the positive effects that can be obtained.

You should get rid of this sentence: If people have no idea to get welfare payments, they can become thief.

For example, According to a police report (...) and of unemployed people: When the number of crime fell down (by) 30 per cent, the number of unemployed people in such area decreased.

Nevertheless, many companies which hire unemployed people can be closed because the companies cannot give enough salary to all labourers.

Those firms' budgets are likely to experience unbalance between income and outcome when the latter is greater than the former.

For instance , a research (...) reveals that virtually, half of the companies in Texas stopped ...

It was researchers' belief that such fact occurred since the local government forced them to hire unemployed people

In conclusion, while some people claim that jobs which can give (...) policy will make many firms put an end to their activities. In my book, I believe that making unemployed people work ...


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