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The world's energy consumption in 2010


thutyedaniel 32 / 38 17  
May 7, 2015   #1

The chart below shows the world's energy use in 2010



The pie chart shows information with regard to the percentage of energy consumption and provides a global breakdown of renewable energy use in the world in 2010. At first glance, it is evident that even though people use some renewable energy, they tend to consume fossil fuels more than these shapes.

According to the pie chart, it reveals that petroleum is the biggest source of the world's energy at 39 per cent. Then, the total contributes between natural gas and coal saw more than two fifths of energy resources. Base on this trend, people are fiercely dependent on using those energy supplies.

Moving to a more detailed analysis from the pie chart illustrates that the energy consumed by people is nuclear electric power at 8 per cent and renewable sources at 7 per cent, whilst renewable sector consists of some energy sources. The consumption of renewable sector for biomass and hydroelectric power saw 53 per cent and 36 per cent respectively. Finally, the total consumption of geothermal, solar, and wind at 11 per cent.



intiaiqbal92 13 / 13 2  
May 7, 2015   #2
Hai Cute, your writing is really nice, however I have some suggestions for you :)

Let's try this one,

The chart gives information regarding the energy use and parts of renewable energy in 2010 and is measured in percentage. In general, it can be seen from the chart that petroleum was the most energy that people used and there were various energy sources within renewable energy.
Hettymsk 9 / 9 9  
May 20, 2015   #3
Oh Hi my roommate @thutyedaniel!

I would like to give you some suggestions :

1) it is evident that even though people use some renewable energy , they tend to consume fossil fuels more than these shapes. ===> It is evident that even though some people use renewable energy , others still have the tendency to consume fossil fuels more than others.

2) it reveals that petroleum is the biggest source of the world's energy at 39 per cent . ==> it reveals that petroleum is the most used source of the world's population which is 39 per cent.

3) Then, the total contributes between natural gas and coal saw more than two fifths of energy resources . ==> Then, the total use of natural gas and coal is two fifths of the energy consumption.

4) Based on this trend, people are fiercely dependent on using those energy supplies.

5) Moving to a more detailed analysis,from the pie chart illustrates that the energy consumed by people isin nuclear electric power is at 8 per cent and renewable sources is at 7 per cent, whilst renewable sector consists of some energy sources (please state the example of renewable energy)

5) whilst renewable sector consists of some energy sources. The consumption of renewable sector for biomass and hydroelectric power saw 53 per cent and 36 per cent respectively . (you can put the last part of previous sentence as the beginning of the next sentence ) ==> Whilst the consumption of renewable energy consists of biomass and hydroelectric power are stated at 53 per cent and 36 per cent respectively

Overall, your writing is very good. but I hope my suggestion will be helpful for you ^^ XOXO.


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