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IELTS: Worldwide water usage in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo


BOMAT_IRA 29 / 40  
May 4, 2014   #1
The graphs show information about water use globally and water consuming by people in two different countries.

Overall, the charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry, and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.

As per the information, in 1900, around 500 km3 of water was used by the agriculture sector globally. For industrial and domestic water consumption stood at around one fifth of that amount. In 2000, global water use for agriculture head increased to around 3000 km3, industrial water use had risen to just under half that amount, and domestic consumption had reached approximately 500 km3. The populations were 176 million and 5.2 million respectively. Water consumption per person in Brazil at 359 m3, was much higher than in the Congo only 8 m3.

A closer looked at the overall, global water rose significantly between 1900 and 2000, and then agriculture accounted for the largest proportion of water used. We can also see that water consumption was considerably higher in Brazil than in the Congo.



dumi 1 / 6,927 1592  
May 6, 2014   #2
The graphs show information about water use globally and water consuming by people in two different countries.

One image is a graph and the other is a table - so you need to introduce them separately;
The graph provides information on global usage of water by different sectors while the table presents data on water consumption per person in two different countries.

Overall, the charts compare the amount of water used for agriculture, industry, and homes around the world, and water use in Brazil and the Democratic Republic of Congo.

.... this is my suggestion for your overview;
Overall, the water was mostly used by the agriculture sector and least used for domestic purposes . Brazil being more populated and having more irrigated land, the water consumption per person has been much higher compared to Congo.


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