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Is it worth to promote tourism? It has many negative effects on the country and society


dinartika19 37 / 67 6  
Aug 22, 2016   #1
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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to

How true is this statement? What can tourist do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?


In the past century, the number of tourist increased to the countries where the travelers go to. At many places, we can easily find people from another countries which were once just locals. I think it has bad impact on these countries.

Firstly, tourism can promote local culture. Because of tourist, local citizens try hard to improve their place, such as make a unique festivals and innovate local food, so other visitor can enjoy their trip and locals can get money from it. However, when they go to sightseeing around looking the culture, it does not mean any problems happens to the local citizens habits. Sometime, visitors bring their habits and culture to the countries they went to. For example, Nowadays, there are so many pub and cafe selling alcohols in Yogyakarta, although the Yogyakarta inhabitants do not drink alcohol. It is just one example, there are many others such as drugs and prostitution.

On the other section, environment also get a big impact of tourism. When tourist season come, many people will gather in one favorite destination, and the destination will become very crowded so congestion are everywhere on the road. Other environment problems are water supply, littering, pollution, and sewage production.

The best solution is make ecotourism in some places. The visitor not only come as a tourist but also can give good impact by helping local citizens keep their nature and culture safe. The other aspect is how goverment make good policies for tourist such as pay fines for littering or use minimum and maximum people who can enter the historical sites so it can reduce the damage of the sites.
ekalamarsyari11 72 / 108 9  
Aug 23, 2016   #2
the number of tourists increased ....
At many places, we can easily find found people from another countries country

a unique festivals and
for general meaning you should write in plural noun
unique festivals

it does not mean that any problems happens to the local citizens habits.
i'd like to write
it does not mean that any problem might happen to the local citizens habits.

Sometime, visitors bring their habits and cultures to the countries where they wentcome to.

For example, NowadaysIn the present days ,
although the Yogyakartalocal inhabitants do not drinkconsume alcohol.
It is just one example, there are many others such as drugs and prostitution.
Moreover, there are other negative influence such as consuming drugs and doing prostitution


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