Can you please review the letter for me?
Topic - Write a letter to a book shop manager about a book you're looking for, ask him to find the book and send it to you.
I am Rims S, pursuing MS in Computer Science in Sydney University of Technology. I am writing this letter requesting you to arrange a book that I could not find in the university campus branch last week.
Last week on Monday, I visited your store to buy the latest edition of "Theory of Computation" by George Tourlakis. Unfortunately, I could not see the book enlisted in the store's catalogue. When I enquired further, I was informed by a salesperson that the book is available in the George Street branch of your store. As I am new to the city and not quite familiar to the transport system, it would be very helpful if you can ensure the book is brought to the campus branch. When the book is ready, please call me at +61 123 456 789 or you can send me an email. I'll collect from your store. Alternatively, if you deliver to the student's hostel, that is even better.
Hope to hear from you soon,