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Write a letter to the local English teacher to arrange some English lessons; IELTS


You are living in an English-speaking country and want to arrange some English lessons to help with your job. You notice an advertisement for an English teacher who lives nearby.

Write a letter to the local teacher. In your letter:

explain where you saw the advertisement say what and why you want to study suggest where and when you would like to study

Here is my writing. Please help me with this. I am not sure its right or wrong

Dear Mr. Johns,
This letter is regarding your advertisement in a Sunday daily newspaper about the English classes you are offering.

I was just looking for this kind of opportunity that I can find a English language tutor near to my house.

I work in one of the local financial trading center. My work involves writing business proposals, arranging meetings and making presentations to our potential clients. I am having trouble in communicating in a formal style of English language. My business letter writing skills are very basic and often I have to take help of my English speaking colleagues to help me with my writing as well as presentations.

I am very excited to find a tutor like you in this locality. I would like to join classes but their is one small issue with my timings. As I mentioned I am working so I am available after 5 O'clock. So any schedule after 5 pm will be manageable for me. I am living near by your block so your apartment will be approachable for me also.

Looking forward to hear from you.

Yours Sincerely,
XYZ

May 22, 2012   #2
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Good luck
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