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Write a letter to the manager of the football club - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 GENERAL TRAINING


Dipa19 8 / 13  
Sep 6, 2016   #1
You are looking for a part-time job at a football club.
Write a letter to the manager of the football club. In your letter:
-introduce yourself
-explain what experience and special skills you have
-tell him/her when you think you could start


Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Edgar Yunio Dipayana Arane, I am from Solo. I am writing this letter to apply for a part-time job in your club football because I wish to obtain work experience in your club football and I need more money for the necessities of life here.

It has been my experience in the world of football is winning the game of the province, regency, subdistrict got champion one. I have the potential for the forward, and specialists as captain also when there is a match I often to be top scores in the game. On the other hand, I am now a football coach in one of club football, Pelita Solo.

When the best day that I can start to the part-time job. Do I have to come to the club football after the period position of coach it has been done or you have other planning that can suit for me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your sincerely
akbarmappiare 31 / 469 275  
Sep 6, 2016   #2
Hi.
These are my thoughts about your letter.


... Yunio Dipayana Arane, I am , AND COME from Solo. I am writing WRITE this letter to apply (...) to obtain work experience in your club football (Avid repetition) THERE and . ON THE OTHER, I need more money for the necessities of life here FUNDING MY ACCOMMODATIONS .

I have the potential for the forward, and specialists as captain also AS WELL. when there is a match..
On the other ONE hand, I am now a HAVE WORKED AS THE football coach in ...

When the best day that I can start to the part-time job(Make sure you can meet the prompt of the question. You should describe detailed information about when you can start. I suggest you rewrite and make clear information) .

Hopefully, those above can help you
GOOD LUCK Brother


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