poor old farmer in the commune found a bag
The farmer is from the commune, where did he find the bag? What were the circumstances when he found it? The backstory needs to be complete.
He asked a police officer for help
What did he have to do to find the police? Where were the police stationed? Who attended to him when he arrived? What did he tell them as additional information? Was he suspected of stealing the bag then wanting to return it?
On the afternoon of April 15
Mention the time.
70-year-old man is the local farmer.
You need to mention names and additional information to help show the clean intent of the farmer and by comparison, the worry of the money owner.
And the president
Seems like too much of a stretch, this is only local, not national news. I doubt the country's president can be bothered by such simple information in terms of making announcements about it.
I am not sure what sort of help you really need with this paper because you did not supply enough instructions for me to be able to help you. These are the basic changes you can make to the presentation, based on my observations.