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I have to write an essay on both "The Storm" & The Story of an Hour"

mrsArias 1 / -  
Oct 28, 2009   #1
I have to write an essay on both The Storm & The Story of an hour by kate chopin exploring the options each woman might responsibly exercise in order to break free of the limits that social intitutions impose on her.

this is what i already had wrote but i dont think it makes any cense!!!

The Story of an Hour took place back in 1894 where woman didn't have any say if they were married. When a woman was married they had to obey their husband and do what their husband said to do. Louise who was married and her married name became Mrs. Mallard had a heart condition. For that reason her sister Josephine & her husbands friend Richard had to find the correct way to tell her that her husband Brently Mallards was in the list of "killed" from the Rail Road disaster.

When Louise was told that her husband was killed she wanted to be alone she went to her room to be alone, she didn't want no one to follow her. She stood facing the open window, she sat on a comfortable, roomy armchair, with the sadness taking over her she dug deep into her soul. She notice things that she never paid any attentions too realizing that they can be gone from one minute to the next. She felt an emptiness in her soul because her husband was now gone. He was a good man to her, he loved her. As she stood there thinking about all the good things that her husband did for her.

She also realized that she had no one to obey, she was free. She could of done anything she pleased with her life. She was he own boss. He sister desperately calling out her name and asking her to open the door because she could made her self ill. Now Louise knew she wouldn't make her self ill she asked her sister to go away that she was fine. Now that she was ready to walk out and start a new free life, her Husband walks trough the door and she dies of a hear deseas, of joy that kills.

EF_Sean 6 / 3,491  
Oct 28, 2009   #2
This is mostly a plot summary of "The Story of an Hour." You don't need to summarize the story, as it is quite short, and your teacher has undoubtedly already read it. Instead, you should decide what you want to say about the story, and then provide evidence in the form of quotations from the text to back up your points.

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