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How to write a writing task 1 : the table below describes the television viewing figures for sports


Hieu ngyen 1 / 2  
Sep 7, 2020   #1

Sports popular in TV



The table describes the televison viewing figues for sports by country in milion.
It is ovident that lagest viewers are more likely to watch tennis than watch anything else . Otherwise, motor racing has the lowest viewers in the table.

Out of four countries, the number of viewers watching sports are noticeably higher in USA , at 25,2 milion.Most people interested in watch golf, at 21,9 milion.

It can be seem that Canada has lowest viewers watch sports, at 14,5 milion. Motor racing has the lowest viewers, at 12,7 milion in comparison with golf, 25,9 milion

Thank all of you very much

linhngan118 2 / 3 1  
Sep 8, 2020   #2
Hello, thanks for spending time reading my comments
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First, you need to upload the table so that we can have a look at them
And your essay is under words required which are 150 and you will be penalised for using less than that.
Also your essay contains a few typing mistakes such as the word 'ovident' and 'seem'
You need to include more information, figures and make comparison in your body paragraph and overview.
With this essay you would only achieve a band under 5
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Keep practicing and improve your work!!
OP Hieu ngyen 1 / 2  
Sep 8, 2020   #3
Thank you very much for advice





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