gop 1 / - Nov 10, 2012 #1The graph shows the writing activity of four writers throughout their lifetime while 50 marks led them work to publication.It can be seen clearly that all writers had started career at them 20s. The Sci-fi writer is the first who started publication at his mid-twenties. Moreover, there was a decline under published scale, plugging the low of 20marks at his 80s considerably before he died at 100. According to Academic 1 whose had started his publication in 40s, after that never went published. Similar pattern is repeated in Academic 2 whose had started published mid-forties and they died in 100s as the same as Sci-fi and 90 approximately.Whereas the shorter period of publication had Novelist, starting publication at 60s, and rose steadily to his 70 after plummeted to the first low of 48 writing activates. Moreover his was the one who died while his works were not duplicated.I appreciate all correction which you will make.many thanks
skop 3 / 6 Nov 12, 2012 #2I agree, it is a bit confusing .It will great if you will add the graph .Best
dumi 1 / 6,925 1592 Nov 12, 2012 #3It can be seen clearly that all writers had started career at themthe age of 20s .I hold a different opinion about usage of "it can be seen". I think there is no harm in using this phrase because here you are discussing your observations on a graphical interpretation. It sounds as good as saying " It is shown that..." or " It shows ...": )
