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I really appreciate / I am really appreciating .... so in here you should say;
I really appreciate if you can read this essay and give me some suggestions! :)
Obesity has been disturbingspreading a considerable ... it is becoming an emergency to keepa threat to the peoples' in good health.
"distribute" is an inappropriate word to use for this idea. "distribute" in some cases mean "spreading way" (e.g. He distributed gifts among children) but it's not a term used for talking about diseases, sicknesses or any health conditions. See following examples for using the word distribute;
He distributes news papers (meaning - delivery)
Government distributed dry rations to the people affected by famine (meaning - divide among)
Obesity has been a growing concern for the people for a long time that impose a great threat to their health.