Divorce has a huge social, emotional, personalitypersonal , and physical health effect on different children
Usually the adverse effectsinfluences (use synonym) of
Growing up in a single parent home
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"The children who spend their lives in such families/environment" OR
"Living in this type of family may bring children with psychological issues/damage"As mentioned earlier, one of the biggest areas of personality that is affectedimpacted (use synonym) by divorce
Many of these personality changes are due toarisen from (OR based on) a change in the way that a child views himself or herself.
Professor Pickardt argues onover the same point
According toBased on the research, conducted by Dr. Judith S. Wallerstein, a Divorce Researcher and Physiologist,
Once giving a birth, parents are responsible for their kidsthe life of that kid and their most important responsibility is the way that they will raise the children
to raise
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"bring up"According to Dr. Connell researches "Fifty percent of all children
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"Dr. XXX points out that," OR
"The statistics, presented by Dr. xx, revealed that..."Overall, it is a great work. Have fun
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