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young people's decision have no influence on the future of the nation


dolly 12 / 32 1  
Feb 27, 2011   #1
I gave toefl two days back. It did not go very well as I found the writing section and listening to be much difficult. This was the topic for the writing section.
trenkins 1 / 4  
Feb 28, 2011   #2
Cheer up girl! What did you write about?

My stand on this is that young people's decisions definitely matters, as they are the future leaders of the country. Their current way of thinking and opinions, can say a lot about their character, attitude and moral values. All these affect their leadership, and should be taken seriously.

That is why so much time and effort is spent on educating the younger generation and inculcating the right moral values in them, shaping them into leaders of character. The young people in the country are going to be the working force, bringing the country's economy to greater heights, and their decisions and actions can cause the market in the world to plummet or prosper, in ten years' time.

In addition, with global warming becoming more and more serious, young people's take on the environment can cause a lot of consequences. If they were not to treat this worldwide problem seriously, our environment would continue to deteriorate at a shocking rate, and it would be the next few generation that suffers.

Not sure if this helps!
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,321 129  
Mar 6, 2011   #3
to be much difficult. ---To be very difficult.

Well...

You work very hard here, so... there is no reason you cannot succeed. However, this questions is difficult. It is possible to interpret this question in a few different ways. You should make an interpretation, be clear about it, and stick to it.

What nation are we talking about, anyway?

Young people's decisions have very little influence on the future of the nation, because the nation is owned by big financial interest groups.

When you write, just make sure the paragraphs begin with good PARAGRAPH TOPIC SENTENCES. I cannot emphasize that enough. Google about it. That is the way to write well. :-)


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