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Young people have no influence on the decisions about the society


sunnycoastwang 1 / 1  
Mar 6, 2011   #1
Young people have no influence on the decisions which determine the future of the society as a whole.

When considering people's points of view about young people have no influence on the future society, there are a variety of opinions to be analyzed. Some people seem to think that young people have influence on society while others tend to young people have no influence on the decision of future society. Although everyone need human rights to represent their thinking, but I think it base on who holds a complete opinion. I have developed own opinion as well. I find young people have no influence on the decisions which determine the future of the society as a whole.

The first reason for my opinion is that young people is not mature to decide matters by themselves. In general, they always make a decision depend on their interesting or tend to a soften way. For example, some junior high students don't want to wear uniform in the school. In addition, they took off their uniform in the classroom to alert their thinking. But I think it not necessary for junior high students. Because students wearing the uniform is not protect themselves but also save time. That's to say, they don't need to waste time to think what they should wear.

My other reason is that adult people can figure out everything from the different angle. In addition, adult practiced much life's experiences during their lifetime. That's why they can think more than young people. For example, my friend asked her father that she want to open a clothes store in the country, but her father disagrees with the idea. Because her father thinks the fashion clothes store isn't suitable for the simple country and it can't earn money, too. The main reason is her father had business experience and he knows other type store is more suitable for the country.

That's not to say, of course, that other points of view are completely without merit. Some people may say young people have influence on the decisions for determining the society of future. Nevertheless, for the reasons I have presented above, I believe that my opinion is the most valid one.

EF_Kevin 8 / 13,335 129  
Mar 12, 2011   #2
When considering the question of whether people's points of view about young people have no influence on the future of society, there are a variety of opinions to be analyzed.-----Practice typing the sentence the way I typed it here. Practice 10 times so that you wll remember the correct grammar. Read it aloud ten times.

Some people seem to think that young people have influence on society while others tend to young people have no influence on the decisions that will af fect future society.

That's to say, they don't need to waste time to think what they should wear. (Right here, add a sentence that tells the reader what this means about whether young people can influence the future.)

My other reason is that adult people can figure out everything from the different angles . In addition, adults practice many skills while coping with life's experiences.

For example, my friend asked her father that she want t if she should open a clothes store in the country, but her father disagreed with the idea.

Practice these sentences 10 times each! :-)
OP sunnycoastwang 1 / 1  
Mar 13, 2011   #3
Thank you for your help. I will practice those sentences for 10 times!!! ^^


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