I agree with the statement that young people should spend time traveling before beginning their university studies, so that young people can have more life experiences that allowed them to prepare their future. Often time, the elders think that the youth should work harder on their initial year, especially on their first year of college; however, form my point of view, I believe the youth should You state your view clearly in the beginning, but it will better for your intro to follow this approach; Hook: a sentence catch readers' attention; Background: restate the prompt; write thesis statements which will be explain in body paragraph.
cumulatebe cumulative their life experiences by traveling to different countries. Throughout the movie If you can catch me and the my personal experience, you can see the reason why I agree with the statement.
The move If you can catch me took place at LA, protagonist was born in a fortunate family; however, things had started to change since he was only sixteen years old. His mother
deforceddivorced with his father and the his father couldn't (could not) afford his college fees, so the protagonist decided to leave his home. He had becamebecome an illegal polite and havehas been to many different countries, he learned a lot ofmany different cultures that the teenagers who were same ages as him don'tdid not know. By the end of the movie, he went back to the college, and became a teacher who taught Human Geography. This movie is one of the reason why I believe it is a good thing to spend time traveling before the start of the college studies. You cannot predict what will happen in your future life.
The other example is my personal experience. Before
i I went to college, i I planed a lot of work to do during my summer vacation after I graduated. One day, mom asked me to go on a business trip with her, and I went with her. Therefore, I went tovisited in France with her, I realized that a fashion designer's life iswas not as good as I thought it is. Two months later, as I getgot back to get ready for my college studies. As a result , I understand so many concept and knowledge that you cannot learn at school. By that time, i I believe that it is always good to travel before the beginning of the university studies.
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So as you can see, the movie If you can catch me and my personal experience shows that going out for a trip before the university studies being is a good opportunity to Here, in conclusion paragraph, you should restate the thesis statements and give your own opinion or suggestion.
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