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Youngest female airline captain' - 26-year-old Kate McWilliams


Ucha MSN 17 / 26 4  
Sep 27, 2016   #1
As the youngest female airplane captain, Kate McWilliams 26 years old have experienced about 100 journeys around the world. Many people were surprised and impressed with her achievement in young age of 26.

Last year the airplane informed to increase the number of female to be pilot. However, Kate was not the youngest ever female captain when Sarah Henry on the age of 24 joined in the same company.

13th years old was her first time flying on the airplane and she never thought before the she would be a commercial pilot. Starting her carrier, she joined in aviation training Southampton and became co-pilot in May 2011. Nowadays, she is known in the rank of captain after passing the airplane's command program.

bismillah 15 / 29 1  
Sep 27, 2016   #2
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