Comparison between Thousand Splendid Suns and The Book of Negroes

kanav92 1 / -

Jun 8, 2010 #1

I am comparing both the books and my thesis statement is A thousand Splendid Suns and the Book of Negroes show that at one one point women had to struggle to gain a good education, avoid sexual exploitation and gain equality to men.

my 1st paragraph is comparing the hardship faced by Mariam and Aminata for a good education.
2nd paragraph is about how women are sexually exploited in both books
3rd paragraph is about men who play superior roles.
Now my question is i need a good introduction.
Can someone please help me.

jadetang 4 / 11

Jun 8, 2010 #2

how about make a instruction of introducing the backgrounds of these two book ?

EF_Kevin 8 / 13052

Jun 10, 2010 #3

A thousand Splendid Suns and the Book of Negroes show that at one one point women had to struggle to gain a good education, avoid sexual exploitation and gain equality to men.

Go deeper into the particular observation you are making.
I think this thesis is too simple. Can you say something more precise? It's okay if you narrow the focus the list a little bit. This is way too general, I think. Do you know what I mean when i say you should go deeper into the particular observation you are making.