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|The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000
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|Write a letter to the person who gave you a great deal of help when you were away.
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|Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
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|Changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers
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