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UVA quirk Essay about to turn in help

NEW - Please offer advice and criticism, not just grammatical error, should I scrap this? Do you feel like it fully...

Undergraduatedaniel6shin - 31 mins ago -

Personal Statement for university International Relations Program

4 - Very detailed and bold, I liked how you integrate your personal achievements. However, (other than your first paragraph) the...

Graduateterminal28 - 1 day agodaniel6shin - 57 mins ago

Composition 101 Informative Essay (no outside sources allowed - writing about stress management)

NEW - Preface: I decided to write about informing others on stress management, due to the amount that I feel...

Writing Feedbackeuphoric33 - 1 hour ago -

"Father's business" - chevening scholorship review

3 - Dear Holt, Thank you for your kind suggestions, of course i will make corrections on thoes points you...

ScholarshipRaheem - 3 hours agoRaheem - 2 hours ago

Essay about Leadership and influence for Chevening - Brasilian student

5 - My new essay, I hope to count on your correction. Thank you so much. Soon after finishing my...

Scholarshiplany83 - Oct 5, 2018lany83 - 3 hours ago

Academic goals essay, below 250 words briefly explain why you have chosen XYZ University and goals

NEW - (Academic goals essay: Briefly state why you have chosen XYZ University for your degree and specify what you hope...

GraduateHawkeye967 - 6 hours ago -

Fresh off the Boat and Me - US College Essay (Harvard)

3 - Thank you for the feedback! The idea was supposed to be how my background inspired a passion/ talent which...

Undergraduatenesasux - 1 day agonesasux - 7 hours ago

University environment is a representation of our world.

9 - Thank you so very much for clarifying that for me. I just wanted to be "safe" rather than "sorry"...

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018terminal28 - 7 hours ago

Recruiter for overseas agencies - Chevening Network

5 - thank you dear, please i rephase it can you check? Being a recruiter for overseas agencies for more than...

Scholarshiprou - 1 day agorou - 8 hours ago

Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others ...

NEW - economic growth's impact on people's wealth and health some people say that economic growth is the only way...

Writing FeedbackRandhawa294 - 9 hours ago -

'I can't take it anymore I want to quit!' Common App Essay for University of Michigan

2 - Hannah, the personal growth in this essay is almost an afterthought in the discussion. When you read the essay,...

Undergraduatehec2019 - 21 hours agoHolt - 10 hours ago

A scenario in which you have needed to show leadership, how you approach this and the outcomes of it

5 - Henry, regardless of whether it is for Chevening or Mastercard, you cannot use such academic based references as the...

Scholarshiphenry15 - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago

An impact (college application); Cite any cases in which you thought and/or made attempts in ways...

2 - Mohammed, this is a very interesting presentation that you should try to further develop by indicating how old you...

ScholarshipMoody - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago

A professional baseball player

NEW - Famous, Talented and Rich A professional baseball player is many people's dream, it is not about sport only...

Writing FeedbackRafiq313 - 10 hours ago -

Tax awareness and law clinic - CHEVENING ESSAY ON LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE

5 - Oluwasikemi , you can't just keep listing your leadership and influencing activities in this manner. While I can see...

ScholarshipSike2yi - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago

I'm a Russian journalist who is applying for Chevening Scholarship this year

4 - Kristina, I am going to be completely honest with you here and tell you that this is not a...

Scholarshiplerour - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago

My commitment to Academics - Chevening Networking

3 - Tosin, this essay does not signify a currently working network on your part. While I understand that you could...

ScholarshipSolace - 1 day agoHolt - 11 hours ago

I am the master of my fate and I am the captain of my soul. Business Analytics Master SOP

3 - Komal, since you have indicated 2 highly different, unrelated career paths in this essay, you must find a way...

Graduatekomziiie - 2 days agoHolt - 11 hours ago

AASSupporting Statements. How did you choose your proposed Course and Inst. M. Accounting ANU

4 - Thanks for the inpust komziee and Holt @Holt, yes Holt, I'd definitely revise my essay. My problem is...

GraduateSeskussaa - 2 days agoSeskussaa - 13 hours ago

Nha Trang - DESCRIBE A WELL-KNOWN DESTINATION YOU HAVE VISITED

5 - @lahoaithu I don't really find this essay interesting in a creative manner. You are just narrating your experience there,...

Writing Feedbacklahoaithu - 1 day agoHolt - 13 hours ago

The desire to surround myself with wise people made had impact on my leadership and influence skills

3 - Awab, all of these information can be summed up into your character as a leader within one paragraph. The...

ScholarshipAwab - 1 day agoHolt - 13 hours ago

Contributing to Community - MIT Supplemental Essay

NEW - I decided to volunteer at the hospital At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of...

Undergraduatejjw1711 - 15 hours ago -

Sports can be bridge to peace and understanding between countries and societes

2 - Tran, you have a good prompt paraphrase but your response to the question is missing. What is your measured...

Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - 1 day agoHolt - 16 hours ago

Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

2 - Minh, your motivation letter is too long and is not really qualified as a motivational letter because you wrote...

Scholarshipminhkstn - 2 days agoHolt - 17 hours ago

God help Zimbabwe - help with my chevening leadershing and influence essay

7 - @Holt below is a revised version of my story Having kicked off my early childhood in the rural...

Scholarshipmillion talent - Oct 10, 2018million talent - 17 hours ago

Living with your parents, the advantages

NEW - reasons why living with your parents is good for you Being self-sufficient person is a right choice but...

Writing FeedbackFaradina - 18 hours ago -

Leadership means that you keep learning all your life, gain experience and pass it to others

5 - @Holt appreciate your new revision of my essay answer (sure, but the thread must be made Urgent first)....

Scholarshipzaidon - 1 day agozaidon - 19 hours ago

Violent Video games affect children by psychologically desensitizing them, also trigger aggression

NEW - Should Violent Video Game be Banned? In 1971 Pong, the first Video Game was released 47 years ago...

Writing Feedbackarianataylor - 22 hours ago -

Career Plan for Development Issues - Chevening Essay

NEW - Dear Ms Mary Rose @Holt I would love to hear your opinion regarding my essay, Thanks a lot :)...

ScholarshipAnanta - 1 day ago -

Why I want to study my courses in the UK?

2 - So.......what are the three courses and three universities that you have selected for your studies in the UK?...

ScholarshipRickyT - 1 day agoterminal28 - 1 day ago