|IELTS Task 2 : People in poorer countries are buying cars. What are the problems? Any solutions?
4 - Hi grintdevereaux30, I have some suggestions, and please correct me when I make some mistakes. this is your introduction In...
Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30adip - 04:58am
|More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.
NEW - Car is tertiary sector in people's lives. Yet, it will become the primary need of some people in developing countries. This phenomenon...
|In my opinion, managing and maintaining interpersonal relations is the most important skill nowadays
8 - Hi Payal, it is a sample introduction of mine. However, I'm sorry if this obtains some mistake. Such a fact is...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982adip - 04:04am
|An essay about how to write a good paragraph
5 - The supporting paragraph answers the question of what, why, when, where, and how about the topic of the paragraph. "Many parents in...
Writing Feedbackhuyenndmadmoiselle - 02:54am
|In many countries of the world few people earn extremely high salary
4 - To begin with,
drawing high salary is on a par with the development of the country.
To have a health...
Writing Feedbacksinchanamadmoiselle - 02:53am
|IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.
7 - The first sentence of the Intro won't impress the examiner, since such phrase too commonly appears when IELTS students are trying...
Writing Feedbackkantyjangeddies - 12:54am
|Too many cars create problems and the State, also even society should work to solve this
6 - Hello Risty, It is my first time to give a feedback in Essay forum. Perhaps, it will help to make better...
Writing FeedbackRisty01mahdinurianto25 - Yesterday
|Scholarship Essay - Contribution to Diversity; I did not let any of obstacles I met to get me down
4 - Hi Anne! You've gotten some good feedback so far with ideas on how to make your essay less wordy. I definitely am...
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|Test 1 TOEFL. Summarize a reading and listening passage.
4 - Hi Gabrielle, below is my take on your essay. First of all, as this is a summary of something that you...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandcojustivy03 - Yesterday
|First trial of IELTS writing test sample (Task 1) before the real IELTS
7 - You got a point there, Ivy. My biggest obstacle is to transfer the concept from my mind into the proper words in...
Writing Feedbackabstracismabstracism - Yesterday
|'Princess Anne will be a great fit for me' - SOP for UMES Physical Therapy Program!
5 - Hi Danielle, as I read through your essay, I must say that you are able to create a straight forward and well...
GraduatedaniLjustivy03 - Yesterday
|Whether it should be compulsory for high school students to wear uniforms or not - it's the question
4 - Hi MInh, its very good to read more of your articles here on EF and personally encourage you to write more often...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99justivy03 - Yesterday
|More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?
4 - Hi Mekar, I notice that you have received some comprehensive feedback and remarks here from the EF contributors and I hope they...
Writing Feedbackmolly16justivy03 - Yesterday
|IELTS Task2: Children are forced to study even their leisure time. Is that a good practice?
4 - Hi Tang, welcome to EssayForum :) I can see that you have gathered very comprehensive feedback from EF member and contributor....
Writing FeedbackFreeman_ps1983ichanpants89 - Yesterday
|IELTS: People do unhealthy activities. Why and give solutions.
4 - Hi Keely, it is really nice to see that finally the moderator in this forum release your account from suspension. I reckon...
Writing Feedbackkantyjangichanpants89 - Yesterday
|The younger children need some help from their parents to complete their homework efficiently; IELTS
5 - I would like to say thank you for appreciating my feedback above. It is nice to see the fighting spirit of yours...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpjichanpants89 - Yesterday
|Essay about Four elements of good writing
2 - Hi Huyen, if your essay is a revision from the previous draft, it is suggested to post below our comments. If you...
Writing Feedbackhuyenndichanpants89 - Yesterday
|IELTS: SHOULD PARENTS HELP CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOMEWORK OR NOT?
6 - Yes sorry. I saw now that i spelled it wrong. And thank you...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998Daniel1998 - Jul 28, 2016
|Immigrants from rural to urban areas: Effects and Solutions.
4 - As for the principal (...), I would contend that both society and environment of the two most obvious subsequences (=> it's quite...
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248huyennd - Jul 28, 2016
|Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?
3 - Hi Gabriel, here's my take on your essay. - In an enterprise, ( don't forget your punctuation marks ) everybody...
Writing Feedbackgabrieloandcojustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Having an outstanding career and satisfying family life are the main desires of all human beings
3 - Hi Mahdi, here's my take on your essay; - Enjoying life is our principal intentionTo enjoy life is one of main...
Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|The protection for endangered animal species and your opinions.
8 - Hi Nguyen, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and you can be rest assured that we will be here...
Writing Feedbackgiangnt248justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|The table shows the the demand for bananas and coffee in 5 countries over a 6 year period
6 - thank you for the feedback @huynhngocminh99 appreciated....
Writing FeedbackKaterina0686Katerina0686 - Jul 28, 2016
|Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening ,and what
7 - Hi Rudi, its great to read your words of appreciation towards our craft here on EF and we will definitely be here...
Writing Feedbackrodiwojustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|"Applying for a masters in management as an accounting student" - Statement of Intent
5 - Hi Sebastian, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, you don't have to worry so much on the word count,...
GraduateMelbUndergradjustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|Learning gave me direction and purpose
5 - Hi Juan, no worries at all if you forgot the prompt, well, it is definitely helpful for us to review the essay...
ScholarshipJuanSebastianRjustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|IELTS TASK 2.Q.INCREASE AIR TICKET PRICE TO REDUCE AIR TRAFFIC
4 - The salad days of third millennium has seen
Although there are few arguments in favour
, I am of the opinion that...
Writing Feedbackjobymonpjeddies - Jul 28, 2016
|Letter of recommondation for Law School's scholarship
7 - Hi Minh, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. It definitely boost our confidence whenever we receive great words of...
Letterspizzatrasuajustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
|ielts- should we provide children in rural communities with more schools or computers
7 - hai
on the contrary with the view of many commented above, I think you have written a fairly good essay with excellent...
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99jobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016
|"Blessed is the influence of one true, loving human soul on another" - my father influence on me
3 - Hi Danielle, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, you have come to the right platform to learn different things...
UndergraduateMochachiijustivy03 - Jul 27, 2016