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|Balance - UBC Tell us about who you are.
UndergraduateChroma - 6 hrs agoChroma - 3 hrs ago
|Overcoming setbacks. UBC personal profile essay : TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE
2 - The problem is that YOU HAVE TO REWRITE THIS ESSAY FROM SCRATCH. Read the prompt and then review your...
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|Living in a foreign country can cause serious social problems
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|Unsatisfied with my capabilities - how would your friends/family describe you
2 - Well, this is a good attempt but, the problem is that everything is from the first person point of...
UndergraduatePeezsTW - 18 hrs agoHolt - 16 hrs ago
|An emerging young adult - UBC Essay Application: Tell us about yourself
2 - Why is that so? Offer an example of your "adulting" skills in terms of being a responsible and...
UndergraduateJaydenzhang0928 - 19 hrs agoHolt - 16 hrs ago
|The diagrams show the flooding area and two solutions to cope with that.
2 - Please work on creating more understandable sentences for your essays. In this particular essay, you truly have a problem...
Writing Feedbackgreencoconut - Nov 16, 2021Holt - 20 hrs ago
|CHILDCARE BY AN EXTENDED FAMILY OR PARENTS?
2 - Reviews for essays based on IELTS band descriptors are done in a private capacity already. Right now, we only...
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|"The environment is no one's property to destroy..." personal statement essay
2 - You do not need the words of others to impress your ideology regarding the environment upon the reviewer....
Scholarshipalbayyinahp1304 - 21 hrs agoHolt - 20 hrs ago
|Networking Is Being With The Right Person - Chevening Networking Essay
2 - I am reviewing your essay upon instructions from the forum moderators. Focus on your professional networking skills and...
ScholarshipLeo007 - Nov 16, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago
|Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology
Writing FeedbackWintermarchen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago
|Motivation letter for Ph.D. in Max Planck School of Cognition (Cognitive Psychology & Neuroscience)
2 - You have the ability to control the content of your personal statement, based on what the prompt requirements are,...
Lettersnie007 - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago
|Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)
2 - The prompt restatement + opinion is incorrect. It does not contain the original reference points for the topic basis....
Writing Feedbackirvan - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago
|IELTS 1 - Next year developments in an airport are illustrated in the maps provided
2 - Please get out of the compressed idea presentation per sentence mindset. The more information you try to add to...
Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Nov 22, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago
|The chart below show the average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals
2 - We do not rate the essays based on the IELTS considerations for free. For sectional scoring and assessment, you...
Writing Feedbackhana146 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - 22 hrs ago
|Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Energy Systems Engineering
2 - This letter is very unprofessional. It does not contain the wording and phrasing that a high level college professor,...
Letterswaihwake - Nov 25, 2021Holt - 22 hrs ago
|Mandatory history courses for students? Relying on the outcomes of the past events is not useful.
2 - This phrase made your opinion statement less than convincing. You are uncertain of your opinion in a set...
Writing Feedbackfarzanehhh - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|The graph shows the amount of money earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002
2 - Incorrect writing format. You cannot use the task 2 essay format for the task 1 essay. The task 1...
Writing FeedbackCheeseQuang - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|IELTS Task 1: the information taken from a report on the energy consumption in the USA since 1980
2 - In reality, your summary sentence is not changed enough to be considered an information restatement on your part. This...
Writing Feedbacklingwang - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders
2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...
Research Paperselilucero13 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY? Knowing my limits
2 - Knowing your limits refers to actually finding out what your limitations are and how you got around it. It...
Undergraduatemo6562 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|These days people in some countries tend to live a lavish lifestyle
2 - Use of a memorized phrase will be a score deduction in the TA section. Avoid using place holder...
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|The consumption of sugar based drinks is on the rise. How to tackle this problem?
2 - Incorrect. These are the writer's personal opinions, which are not referenced at all in the original...
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|It is argued that schooling from early age would be ideal for the children' development
2 - While the prompt restatement and opinion is not grammatically accurate, it is still understandable enough for an ENL. Your...
Writing Feedbackhanguyen79 - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|Motivation Statement for MS Game and Media Technology in Utrecht University
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|SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS FOR MASTERS IN MANAGEMENT AND ENG OF ENERGY & ENVIRONMENT
2 - You can strike this totally from the presentation because it does not offer any insight into your motivation....
Scholarshipnere - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|"A suitable candidate" - Could you help me out with the Stipendium Hungaricum (Scholarship) essay?
Scholarshipkartoshatatosha - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago
|" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?
2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...
Writing FeedbackHoang Trieu - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?
2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....
Writing Feedbackbaudgy - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne
2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...
Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion
2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...
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