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2 - Mohammed, a letter of intent is similar to that of a motivation letter. It is better known in the...
ScholarshipMchassanjHolt - 02:45pm
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NEW - i am submitting in a master program in Goldsmiths and i just finished my personal statement, Can you please...
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7 - In that case yes. Mention it because it adds to your credibility as a dedicated student who earnestly wants...
ScholarshipLucaHolt - 02:38pm
|Reflect on a time in the last few years when you felt genuine excitement learning about something.
6 - Hi Chizaram, here is my piece for you. Hope it will satisfy your purpose.I had only 7 years when...
Undergraduatechizy7Ahmadi015 - 02:36pm
|Children are better to spend their golden age by seeking knowledge and not earning money
2 - First off, I really like the points that you've made but I think you can maybe organize it to...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaayjung17 - 02:23pm
|Chevening Networking Question
4 - Ali, I think you should put the quote about Chevening at the start of the essay. Making it an...
Scholarshipshadow7Holt - 01:32pm
|Say Yes to Saying No by Melody Jung
3 - Thank you so much! I really appreciate it:)...
Undergraduateyjung17yjung17 - 01:17pm
|''Leadership is the capacity to translate vision into reality'' - Chevening question
3 - Thank you Chizy7 for taking time and going through, I will definitely incorporate your good comments....
ScholarshipAhmadi015Ahmadi015 - 11:34am
|Chevening Scholarship essay: LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION
3 - Hey, thank you Holt. Indeed, it was really helpful. Now I can improve my essay more effectively...
ScholarshipHero_odHero_od - 11:20am
|Princeton Supplement prompt 5..help needed
2 - Shivani, I like the quote that you chose. The overall narrative of the essay directly relates to the quote....
Undergraduateinav321Holt - 11:04am
|Effects of modern forms of communication such as email and messaging
3 - This feedback is going to be short though, here is my thought about this paragraph. Good luck with improving...
EssaysHuynh AnhActivelung - 10:49am
|My village and its customs that changed my life!
7 - Okay. Let's pick up the paragraph from the following:
...getting married at the early age. When she got better, my...
Undergraduateinav321Holt - 10:34am
|WRITING TASK II - MONEY IS THE ONLY MOTIVATION OF WORKER STAY AT THE SAME WORK
3 - Hello kiki23! Here is my feedback as to your writing. Hopefully this will strengthen your paper later on.
Writing Feedbackkiki23Activelung - 10:11am
|'I had to travel 24 kilometers daily from my home town to my school'; LEADERSHIP and INFLUENCE ESSAY
12 - Thank you Justivy03 for your feedback!...
ScholarshipLARLAR - 09:23am
|What knowledge, skills and abilities do you hope to gain as a result of participating in this progra
4 - I do really very grateful for the outstanding corrections you help me with to make my essay sound as...
Scholarshiplondon1988london1988 - 09:22am
|Smokers should find other places to smoke, thus have respect to non-smokers
2 - Russel, I am not sure what you mean by the constant use of the word "respective". It does not...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaaHolt - 08:17am
|Writing Task II_Children are Encouraged to Have Paid Work
2 - Husnul, your discussion is not very well developed. Your first paragraph takes on the form of a defense in...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19Holt - 08:09am
|Every Human being is a leader in his own right. Chevening Leadership & Influence Question.
4 - Please review my final Draft: Napoleon Hill once stated, "Dreams are not...
Scholarshipshadow7shadow7 - 08:06am
|Ideas on Scholarship essay - your plans for the future.
9 - A leading problem of 21st century is world pollution. The environments are getting affected due to the behavior of...
ScholarshipNethiyaaNethiyaa - 08:01am
|The Nuclear Reactor Safety major. Study plan for a scholarship
2 - Hello there,I think i would be a better understanding if you could illustrate it with diagrams.Thanks.Regards....
ScholarshiptatrumxuboomNethiyaa - 08:00am
|Children development and Tv - essay for ielts task 2
3 - Abdullah, your thought process is very good. You show a clear understanding of the prompt and you are able...
Writing FeedbackmegamediHolt - 07:57am
|Surgical and Interventional Science - Chevening Scholarship essay ( university courses )
4 - I spent a long time (...) senior surgeons manipulate subtly use the long stick-like tools ......
ScholarshipSal70000shadow7 - 06:44am
|Money is the only reason why people rely on a same company for a long time
2 - generally speaking, it is good essay but it has some mistakes. For example, introduction is not good that you...
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19megamedi - 05:56am
|Proving that it's me who belongs to the future leaders or influencers - Chevening Scholarship
4 - Hi arian, thanks for your comment in my essay
In one of my past job experiences in the women's empowerment...
Scholarshiparian IBMPT991 - 05:34am
|How many books have been read at Burnley by men and women?
6 - hi lola ^,^i would give you some feedback >>>put picture graph that you explain then readers can understand what...
Writing FeedbackLola12eve01 - 03:00am
|What was the environment you were raised? Describe your family and explain how the shaped you today
2 - Anthony, the essay is good and almost on the mark in terms of discussing the kind of environment and...
UndergraduateAnthonyVardaroHolt - 02:59am
|Admissions Essay, "My Fathers Killer"
5 - Hi! I have some advice for you!Losing my father was the most difficult thing I have ever had to...
UndergraduateDomjoliverkiki23 - 02:58am
|"Existential angst" Common App: Prompt 2
2 - Yueh, this is a very well written essay. You have obviously given a lot of thought to the kind...
UndergraduatechloeheuyHolt - 01:42am
|Leadership is a skill that can be developed through life experiences. Essay for Chevening
3 - Hi Ruslan,
thank you for your warm advise. I need much more revise to get this essay done.
Should I focus...
Scholarshipmorenoabemorenoabe - 01:18am
|Occidental College; a vital stepping-stone in focusing my interests and shaping my view of the world
2 - Camille, I am a bit confused here. Are you trying to transfer schools or change majors ? The majority...
UndergraduatecamshragesHolt - 01:16am