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8 - You were able to take my points for correction and apply it to this revised version. Good work. You...
ScholarshiprsydndHolt - 1 hour ago
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4 - The poem actually got worse after you edited it. It is still speaking in confused tones, tries to put...
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8 - The revised essay works. It contains all of the necessary information for the reviewer to consider your application. While...
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3 - @Holt thanks for review. It is my first time.. I'll try to make changes as you told. Hopefully you'll...
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4 - There are a number of things that you could have done to turn this into an 8 essay. First...
Writing FeedbackbumblebeeHolt - 10 hours ago
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8 - When you are asked to give a potential solution to the problem such as "What can be done to...
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28 - @Holt A problem that is really annoying, My supervisor is not help me well. anyway thank you so much...
Research PapersAnjana Deviwave525 - 11 hours ago
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5 - Please remember that you are supposed to give constructive criticism and helpful advice to student in the original thread...
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6 - @ainunazwaria Hi, thank you for your comment. But about the built or was built, I was trying to use...
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15 - @Holt Thank you 😊 so much Holt The poem is a winner I feel for I feel grateful for...
PoetryPeaches07Peaches07 - 15 hours ago
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6 - @Holt Thanks Holt, I am going to edit it now as per your instructions. I will update once I...
Scholarshipeiriashhareiriashhar - 15 hours ago
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8 - Revise the whole essay to discuss your accounting background and interests in relation to the prompt requirements. Focus the...
ScholarshipSilver92Holt - 16 hours ago
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9 - @Holt Hi holt, Thanks for your revising tips. I will incorporate your advices into the final draft and...
GraduateIanthexxIanthexx - 18 hours ago
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6 - Hi Jonathan, Here are my thoughts on your paper 1. The length.I think you should only keep...
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4 - I am sorry to say this but the essay that you wrote does not fall within the KGSP prompt...
Graduateanne09Holt - 20 hours ago
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2 - Eshan, the direction of your essay should take on a comparative look as to why you believe that Broward...
UndergraduateKoenigseggseggseHolt - 23 hours ago
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2 - Deepain, the first thing you have to do with this essay is shorten the length. This is too long...
GraduatedeepainHolt - 1 day ago
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20 - @Holt Yes I do understand. I will definitely follow the rules and also try my best to help my...
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4 - @Holt Well noted, thank you...
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4 - If you would just remove the reference to the "living species" and the humor will be well placed. I...
UndergraduatesalsabluerHolt - 1 day ago
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6 - Hi Pham, welcome to Essay Forum. I really hope you can harness this medium as well as possible. ...
Writing Feedbackkalynakbarmappiare - 1 day ago
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4 - Hi Ana, I understand that we want to prove our candidacy with details. But given that the adult...
Graduatepb1013Ianthexx - 1 day ago
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11 - @debby89 I found a mistake, you have written with a GPA of 3.41 on sale of 4 (89%). I...
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6 - Prasanth, the proper paraphrasing of the prompt depends solely on the way that you understand the topic for discussion...
Writing FeedbackprasanthbabHolt - 1 day ago
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7 - @Holt thank you sir.. will do that...
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2 - Beth, the quantitative research will be based upon the methodology of your research. How do you plan to gather...
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6 - Nic, don't worry, just keep your presentation simple. Stick to what you know and what you understand. As long...
ScholarshipNitivatHolt - 1 day ago
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NEW - Self-introduction for KGSP 2017 Dear KGSP Team, I would like to introduce myself for KGSP 2017. My...
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4 - Hi Sehat, I have read your writing. I am gonna try giving you a few suggestions. Honestly, your first...
Writing Feedbacksehatdinatiakbarmappiare - 1 day ago