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KGSP University Track - Tourism Business

NEW - Dear Friends I wish I can apply KGSP-G Scholar. This is my personal statement. So please help me if...

Scholarshiprafikatr -

Competitive educational system - MY PERSONAL STATEMENT #2 FOR KGSP

5 - Hi. i have just read your essay and i have some opinion First, i agree with both comments above...

ScholarshiproykimTranduyen - 22 mins ago

I possess qualities of a good leader and I can prove it. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP QUESTION

NEW - Hi! I am currently working on my chevening scholarship application and will like some feedback on my essay responses....

Scholarshipsadiqadama -

There is a myriad of people who believe that physically harmful sports ought to be forbid - IELTS 2

5 - Khoa, the Band 9 essays that you have seen on the internet are examples of work done by English...

Writing FeedbackDang KhoaHolt - 48 mins ago

Describe your favorite form of transportation - bus has many benefits

NEW - Hi,I just started to learn writing a few days ago. Could your guys fix it for me ? Thank...

Writing FeedbackTranduyen -

UofT One Idea Supplementary Essay (similar to the common app essay) - learning from failure

NEW - The question that I decided to answer was: Tell us about a time when you learned from failure. There...

Undergraduatebhcc21 -

IELTS academic writing task 2 Some people say that children should go to school as young as possible

2 - Phoebe, while your opening paraphrase should be commended for its interesting prompt restatement and reproduction of the discussion instructions,...

Writing Feedbackhamie0218Holt - 4 hours ago

IELTS Task 1: The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas

NEW - a brand of coffee and bananas sold in Europe Question: The tables below give information about sales...

Writing Feedbackfaluda -

Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5

3 - Mary, thank you a lot!! I am so happy that I receive your comment on my work, cause I...

Scholarshipjimjimniejimjimnie - 6 hours ago

Have you ever had this question in your mind: "Are you a saver or a spender?"

2 - Tran, is this for an English writing class? It reads like a routine writing exercise to me. One of...

Writing Feedbacktrancucphuong311Holt - 12 hours ago

IELTS Essay Task 2 Public spending on arts is a waste of money, agree or not?

3 - Catherine, there are four ways to approach an extent essay: 1. I completely agree 2. I completely disagree 3....

Writing FeedbackCatherine88Holt - 12 hours ago

IELTS Task 1: Pie charts about Oscar winners by genre in 2003 and 2008

2 - Hang, the first problem with this essay is the number of words that you have written. During the actual...

Writing Feedbackcao1kmHolt - 1 day ago

UBC Personal Profile Answer - 'kindness is a virtue??'?

2 - Bianca, I can sense the definite anger that you had while writing this response. It is alright to vent...

UndergraduatetastpomHolt - 1 day ago

Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?

3 - Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it doesn't...

ScholarshipYuchimeYuchime - 1 day ago

The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time - TASK 1

2 - Mai, while you wrote over the minimum required words, your essay shows a lack of analysis and proper summary...

Writing Feedbacktrung3110Holt - 1 day ago

What shaped you into the person you are today? 2019 college application essay

4 - @cao1km thank you for the feedback, I changed the "if" and "would" part and they still have the same...

UndergraduateMiguelolvera1Miguelolvera1 - 1 day ago

My tours - review my Personal Profile (about myself) for UBC

3 - Hetav in order to bring this essay down to within the word count, you can remove the reference to...

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 1 day ago

Personal Statement for the Masters in Business Analytics at Michigan State University

3 - Thanks a lot for your response. Pointing my 10th and 12th score was to draw a conclusion to...

GraduateBangBomBangBom - 1 day ago

It is an argue whether businesses have to be responsible for their effect on society or not

4 - Nguyen, your essay will fail due to several formatting problems. The first is that you have a redundant opening...

Writing FeedbackSEN2403Holt - 2 days ago

An impromptu speech without any earlier preparation - my response for a problem

3 - Hetav, there is no need, in my opinion, to change anything in this response statement. It is simple and...

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 2 days ago

Request to review personal profile for admission in UBC

5 - Can you please help me with my next question (in new thread please)....

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHetav Pandya - 2 days ago

West Union Building: A metaphor for my life (WHY DUKE ?)

2 - Kartik, it would do your essays well if you stop with the imagery and simply respond to the prompts...

UndergraduatekartiktHolt - 2 days ago

My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship

3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...

Scholarshipahsan_daniyalHolt - 2 days ago

Solving environmental problems: international organization or local government ?

2 - @TrangDiem11 Your essay has a good coherence, but I would like to suggest that you can include a few...

Writing FeedbackTrangDiem11Hetav Pandya - 2 days ago

QuestBridge Miscelleneous Short Questions for college application

3 - 1. You are not talking about an achievement and what it says about you. Rather, you are discussing a...

UndergraduateJainam_ShahHolt - 2 days ago

(IELTS) Purchasing unnecessary - pricey goods by people

NEW - Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and cannot afford. What are the reason...

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CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders

3 - Thankyou @Holt for your insight...

Scholarshipahmdardahmdard - 2 days ago

[IELTS] Children are better off to spend the time on other activities than reading story books.

2 - Suggestions too much times winder topics "Children will have various topics to share" becomes repetitive finding process-learning process, this...

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Hetav Pandya - Sep 23, 2018

THE BRILLIANT FOLLY OF A MAGNET DRIVEN CAR - Amherst Supplement Essay

4 - @kartikt Definitely much better. It's more believable in terms of age requirement and the situation presented is something that...

UndergraduatekartiktHolt - Sep 23, 2018

Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening

5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...

ScholarshipjeffreyjHolt - Sep 23, 2018