|Percentage of first-year teacher with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation (Unit 3 Page 36)
NEW - The graph provides information about the percentage of teachers were hired by years of graduation between 2001 and 2007....
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|The range of fresh regular teachers in Ontario - back from 2001 to 2007.
6 - Hi. this is my suggestion.
1. The number of french teacher slightly rose and hit a high point at 70...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16badafebriani17 - 03:04pm
|Writing Task 2: Media for Celebrities or Ordinary People | agree or disagree?
NEW - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationship of celebrities such as actors, singers, or footballers....
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|Discovering art in kindergarten. Entrance essay to art school!
NEW - Disclaimer: this is an essay for a art college I want to go to and not going to say...
|Various of difficulties that people experience when they stay in overseas
11 - Hello Bada :) Let me give you my suggestions :) The bar chart gives information about the various of...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17SarlindaDS_27 - 02:59pm
|Writing IELTS Task 1- The range of fresh regular teachers in Ontario - back from 2001 to 2007.
NEW - Proportion of the hired of teachers in Ontario during 6 years based on graduation years and subject is provided...
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: The Recruitment of Teacher in Ontario
NEW - The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007. Summarise the information...
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|Media give so much attention to celebrities and almost forget about ordinary citizens
3 - Nowadays,media give so much attention to celebrities, such as their lives or relationships. Some people argue, the media should...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16Pramudia27 - 02:54pm
|Kids tend to eat what they like or do want they want to do, without considering the adverse effects
5 - At present, the way of children live lives become unhealthy. They tend to eat what they like or do...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16ifraanisa05 - 02:52pm
|UNIPDU FT D-Letters to Wiwit Krisdiyanti
NEW - Jombang, 24 Oktober 2016Hallo Wiwit Krisdyanti
Hai also wiwit, how I was doing well either.I glad you can send...
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|unipdu FT-D_my homeland letters to Deden
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|Modern forms of communication have had a negative effect on their social lives.
2 - Hi prettyinside. Here are my suggestions for you. I will focus on your grammatical structure and some additional suggestions.In...
Writing FeedbackprettyinsideIvanMS027 - 02:38pm
|Parents should be concerning towards unhealthy lifestyle by overseeing their child's activities
6 - Nowadays, the problems of unhealthy lifestyle has have been faced the child life. In fact, food choices always being...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27ifraanisa05 - 02:32pm
|Describe your interest and experience in your chosen major (300-400 words)
NEW - When I walked into my first computer science class in freshman year, I had no idea I'd fall in...
|It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments
3 - The isolated natural places are attracted scientists and travelers currently. While I accept that there are some advantages of...
Writing Feedbackminhphamqbifraanisa05 - 02:21pm
|A gift which changed my everyday life: the laptop; Chevening - your chosen three university courses
3 - Thank you so much for your help. I am going to make some changes and post it. can you...
Scholarshipangekiitaangekiita - 02:10pm
|The main role of women has changed altogether
2 - -they have left their children in the pre-schools
-children aged under 5 years old took care by their biological mother...
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|Unipdu FT-D letter to tell about my house in Belut, Jogoroto Jombang
NEW - October 16, 2016My new friend,
Ais Salimatus Sa'diyah
On Mancar Peterongan
Hay ais how are you, I hope you're there always be...
|The mass media are fulfilled with different news about celebrities - actors, singers, footballers...
2 - Hi Anna. here are my suggestions for your essay ... news about people who have appeared appear in on...
Writing FeedbackAnna94ifraanisa05 - 02:04pm
|The three university courses choice - Applying for Chevening Scholarship, need help with my essay!
12 - Definitely write about your first choice university at the start. In fact, it would be helpful to your application...
ScholarshipAysha13Holt - 02:02pm
|Writing Task 1 - The percentage of new graduates finding job in Ontario - Line Chart
2 - Hi Ilham,Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1.1st paragraph:
- The line chart graph gives reveals/depicts/illustrates...
Writing Feedbackibe13ichanpants89 - 02:00pm
|The most important section in a student's live (personal statement for CUHK)
2 - Karen, I am wondering if your personal statement for this application has instructions that it should be divided into...
UndergraduatekarenLHolt - 01:57pm
|News objects - celebrities and ordinary people
2 - Hi Beauty17. Here are my suggestions for youI hope it can be helpful for you 1. more prestige to...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17IvanMS027 - 01:47pm
|A slight increase in the recruitment of French language teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007
NEW - The graph below shows information about the recruitment of teachers in Ontarion between 2001 and 2007. Summarize the information...
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|Chevening Essay - Architecture Student (assess if the essay is correctly answering the brief)
2 - Hi ichephe,
you are doing great!
you really have done your research for these essays and I believe you are...
Scholarshipichephechoyhar2002 - 01:44pm
|Modern form of communication such as email and messaging have reduced people time spending
2 - Hello Huynh Anh! I will give you some opinions about your essay.Firstly, you have to write your essay in...
Writing FeedbackHuynh Anhseptiadara29 - 01:44pm
|I was always up to take leadership.... LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION. Chevening Scholarship.
5 - Firuz, always remember to mention the name of your employer in your essay. There is a need to be...
ScholarshipfiguHolt - 01:43pm
|Leadership is the mandatory skill required in the real life experiences - Chevening
4 - Hello Amanda, I want to comment on your essay content.
I like how you explain the introduction then giving examples...
Scholarshipamandarchssichephe - 01:37pm
|Advertisement has great influence in buyers' preferences
2 - Hi ekalamarsyari11. Here are my suggestions for you. I hope it can be useful for you.It should be ->...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11IvanMS027 - 01:16pm
|Go Ahead, Make Up New Word! Summary Ted
4 - Hello Att98! I will give you some opinions about your summary.Paragraph 1:Lexicographer is a job which to write a...
Writing FeedbackAtt98septiadara29 - 01:03pm