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Task II- It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is

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{IELTS} Task 1: line and bar chart of monthly temperature and precipitation

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Ielts You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to

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The use of the internet has brought many problems.

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Flagler College 2020 Make History Essay

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GKS/KGSP Essay Study Plan Language (BEFORE and AFTER you come to Korea.)

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Implementing same national curriculum for students until entering college - GRE Issue

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GRE issue; Over the past year, our late-night news... Memorandum from business manager of TV station

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Ielts Task 2: advantages and disadvantages of economic development.

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Writing task 1: The chart below shows the propotion of profits made from seven most viewed movies

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Are boarding schools (students can live there during the term) an excellent option for children?

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Studying applied ethics in sports - Personal Statement for Erasmus+ Scholarship MAISI

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Today, TV channels provide man's sport shows more than women's sport shows, why? personal opinion?

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Can Disney World Florida Protect Your Family and Remain "the happiest place on earth"?

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IS IT IMPORTANT TO OWN A HOME ?

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : HOUSES VS APARTMENTS

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Write sentences to answer the questions: about a teacher

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GRE Argument; Organization engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A

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IELTS - Graph people who are 65 and over in Japan, Sweden, American

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Whether people should choose high paid jobs that they dislike or low-paid jobs that they enjoy.

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IELTS- Task 2: Selection of students based on their qualifications

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It is argued that railways are taking over roads as the most important transport

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss.

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Ielts task2: computers are considered to be the most crucial and noticeable invention

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Due to unemployment should students learn the work skills instead of studying?

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GKS Undergraduate Scholarship 2020 Personal Statement Philippines

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Controversial information should be kept as secret or not.

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Ielts Task 1: The table given depicts forest area in six distinct regions in 15 years from 1990

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