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|SOP for Parsons School of Design, M.P.S in Communication Design
3 - Hi Holt, thanks so much for the feedback! I have revised my SoP to more align with the prompt...
Graduatejonamon - Nov 14, 2023jonamon - 6 hrs ago
|writing task 1-line graph : The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies
NEW - The given line graph depicts how much waste was produced by three different companies from 2000 to 2015. Overall,...
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|Causes, effects and solutions in waste and rubbish pollution
4 - Apart from that, I can see that you used advanced vocabulary and the structure is good but as mentioned...
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|ielt p2: causes why people like online meeting than meeting directly and solution for it
NEW - It is said the numerous teenagers nowadays like socialising by technology than meeting others face-to-face. The reasons for this...
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|GKS - Study plan. One year of Korean language course
4 - I Joined study groups and hired a personal tutor online to practice the language. I listen podcast about korea...
Scholarshipmolly1303 - Nov 26, 2023ductam06 - 11 hrs ago
|Advice for a statement of purpose for a master in robotics at EPFL
NEW - I'm writing a statement of purpose to apply for an MSc at the EPFL. The guidelines given by...
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|UCLA Theater, Film and Television Supplemental Essays - Life Challenge Essay
NEW - Hi! I was hoping to receive some feedback on my life challenge essay for my first year UCLA Film...
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|Balancing my life priorities - UBC Application: Tell us about who you are.
NEW - Please comment on my application essay for UBC Engineering, the question is "TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE. HOW...
Undergraduateakmaster101 - 2 days ago -
|Traveling to work - writing task 1: Pie chart
2 - The summary overview is missing from the actual discussion. That is the first paragraph that kicks off all task...
Writing Feedbackthytyn - Nov 29, 2023Holt - 2 days ago
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] The effect of professional sports on children
2 - You should not have began to present your personal opinions about the discussion in the first paragraph. That would...
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|Ielts: is using technology a bad trend ?
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|UBC SAUDER PERSONAL PROFILE QUESTION
2 - This sounds like a very concise presentation of the problem that you faced as a co-CEO of the school...
Undergraduateseniorstudent - Nov 29, 2023Holt - 2 days ago
|The graph about the percentage of tourits visiting different countries in 2010
2 - Try to clarify the type of graph next time. There are several graphs used in the task 1 essay...
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|Statement of purpose for MSC mechatronics at ETH review; the sop has word limit of 1000 words.
NEW - Seeing my old grandparents struggle with daily chores like cleaning, cooking or even getting items lower to the ground...
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|Common App-The contagious influence of smiles
2 - You have too many references for the Smile reference. Bring it down to 2 examples. Keep the perspective of...
Undergraduatepawan_pai02 - Nov 28, 2023Holt - 2 days ago
|UBC Personal Profile - What is important to you? And why? "Photography"
3 - @Holt Hi, is there a way to private message you on here? Not here, but you may email: email@example.com...
Undergraduateyooogiis - Nov 6, 2023Mav47 - Dec 3, 2023
|IELTS WRITRING TASK 1: The chart below shows the amount spent on six consumer goods in four European
NEW - The bar chart illustrates the expenditure of people in Britain, France, Italy and Germany on six different products. ...
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|GKS-G 2024 Personal Statement | GMBA ASPIRANT |
3 - First of all, Thank you sir/madam for your corrections. I will use your suggestions and yeah I am not...
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|writing task 1: The chart shows the information about salt intake in the US in 2000.
NEW - the bar chart illustrates the amount of salt that males and females in six age groups used in the...
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|WRITING TASK 2: IN MANY COUNTRIES AROUND THE WORLD, LIFE EXPECTANCY IS INCREASING
NEW - There is evidence that the increase in life expectancy has appeared globally. Whilst a variety of drawbacks of this...
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|Looking for critiques on USC Cinematic Arts (Animation) Personal Statement!
NEW - Hey there, I'm applying to the animation and digital arts major, and I know it's short notice but I...
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|Writing task 1 - The percentage of households with cars
NEW - The bar chart shows the percentage of households with cars in a European country between 1971 and 2001. Summarise...
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|The line chart illustrate fish and meat consumption (grams) in HCM city from 1979 to 2004-WRITING 1
NEW - the line graph gives information about how many grams of fish and meat were consumed in a week by...
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|SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience and achievements
NEW - problem statement:- "Tell about your expectation for the SECCLO programme, career aspirations, relevant experience and achievements, maximum 500 words"...
Undergraduatechol - Nov 30, 2023 -
|Document about your academic and research background, career goals, academic interest and program
NEW - Growing up helping my parents fill the charts with students' scores, I stumbled upon the first data science lesson:...
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|Quitting Basketball - Common App Essay
3 - I've met many new amazing, interesting, and beautiful people who I will remember for the rest of my life,...
Undergraduatemaxn - Nov 28, 2023ductam06 - Nov 29, 2023
|HEALTH DISPARITIES AND EQUITY - NEED
NEW - ~Need writing feedback on research paper on health disparities and strategies for health equity. Please list 3 weaknesses within...
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|Writing task 1 - Process of growwing and making products from pineapples
NEW - The picture below shows the process of growing and making products from pineapples. Summarize the information by selecting and...
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|Reforming the United States Prison Industry
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|Write an essay about the negative impacts of social media on teens
2 - Where did you get this information? Cite your source. This is authoritative information that you are providing so...
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