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IELTS Task 2 : People in poorer countries are buying cars. What are the problems? Any solutions?

4 - Hi grintdevereaux30, I have some suggestions, and please correct me when I make some mistakes. this is your introduction In...

Writing Feedbackgrintdevereaux30adip - 04:58am
More and more people in developing countries are purchasing cars for the first time.

NEW - Car is tertiary sector in people's lives. Yet, it will become the primary need of some people in developing countries. This phenomenon...

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In my opinion, managing and maintaining interpersonal relations is the most important skill nowadays

8 - Hi Payal, it is a sample introduction of mine. However, I'm sorry if this obtains some mistake. Such a fact is...

Writing Feedbackpayal1982adip - 04:04am
An essay about how to write a good paragraph

5 - The supporting paragraph answers the question of what, why, when, where, and how about the topic of the paragraph. "Many parents in...

Writing Feedbackhuyenndmadmoiselle - 02:54am
In many countries of the world few people earn extremely high salary

4 - To begin with, drawing high salary is on a par with the development of the country. To have a health...

Writing Feedbacksinchanamadmoiselle - 02:53am
IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.

7 - The first sentence of the Intro won't impress the examiner, since such phrase too commonly appears when IELTS students are trying...

Writing Feedbackkantyjangeddies - 12:54am
Too many cars create problems and the State, also even society should work to solve this

6 - Hello Risty, It is my first time to give a feedback in Essay forum. Perhaps, it will help to make better...

Writing FeedbackRisty01mahdinurianto25 - Yesterday
Scholarship Essay - Contribution to Diversity; I did not let any of obstacles I met to get me down

4 - Hi Anne! You've gotten some good feedback so far with ideas on how to make your essay less wordy. I definitely am...

ScholarshiplemarPHiddengrace - Yesterday
Test 1 TOEFL. Summarize a reading and listening passage.

4 - Hi Gabrielle, below is my take on your essay. First of all, as this is a summary of something that you...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandcojustivy03 - Yesterday
First trial of IELTS writing test sample (Task 1) before the real IELTS

7 - You got a point there, Ivy. My biggest obstacle is to transfer the concept from my mind into the proper words in...

Writing Feedbackabstracismabstracism - Yesterday
'Princess Anne will be a great fit for me' - SOP for UMES Physical Therapy Program!

5 - Hi Danielle, as I read through your essay, I must say that you are able to create a straight forward and well...

GraduatedaniLjustivy03 - Yesterday
Whether it should be compulsory for high school students to wear uniforms or not - it's the question

4 - Hi MInh, its very good to read more of your articles here on EF and personally encourage you to write more often...

Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99justivy03 - Yesterday
More people in developing countries are purchasing cars.What are the problems and possible solution?

4 - Hi Mekar, I notice that you have received some comprehensive feedback and remarks here from the EF contributors and I hope they...

Writing Feedbackmolly16justivy03 - Yesterday
IELTS Task2: Children are forced to study even their leisure time. Is that a good practice?

4 - Hi Tang, welcome to EssayForum :) I can see that you have gathered very comprehensive feedback from EF member and contributor....

Writing FeedbackFreeman_ps1983ichanpants89 - Yesterday
IELTS: People do unhealthy activities. Why and give solutions.

4 - Hi Keely, it is really nice to see that finally the moderator in this forum release your account from suspension. I reckon...

Writing Feedbackkantyjangichanpants89 - Yesterday
The younger children need some help from their parents to complete their homework efficiently; IELTS

5 - I would like to say thank you for appreciating my feedback above. It is nice to see the fighting spirit of yours...

Writing Feedbackjobymonpjichanpants89 - Yesterday
Essay about Four elements of good writing

2 - Hi Huyen, if your essay is a revision from the previous draft, it is suggested to post below our comments. If you...

Writing Feedbackhuyenndichanpants89 - Yesterday
IELTS: SHOULD PARENTS HELP CHILDREN WITH THEIR HOMEWORK OR NOT?

6 - Yes sorry. I saw now that i spelled it wrong. And thank you...

Writing FeedbackDaniel1998Daniel1998 - Jul 28, 2016
Immigrants from rural to urban areas: Effects and Solutions.

4 - As for the principal (...), I would contend that both society and environment of the two most obvious subsequences (=> it's quite...

Writing Feedbackgiangnt248huyennd - Jul 28, 2016
Test 1 TOEFL promotions: based on seniority or on performance?

3 - Hi Gabriel, here's my take on your essay. - In an enterprise, ( don't forget your punctuation marks ) everybody...

Writing Feedbackgabrieloandcojustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
Having an outstanding career and satisfying family life are the main desires of all human beings

3 - Hi Mahdi, here's my take on your essay; - Enjoying life is our principal intentionTo enjoy life is one of main...

Writing Feedbackmahdinurianto25justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
The protection for endangered animal species and your opinions.

8 - Hi Nguyen, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF and you can be rest assured that we will be here...

Writing Feedbackgiangnt248justivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
The table shows the the demand for bananas and coffee in 5 countries over a 6 year period

6 - thank you for the feedback @huynhngocminh99 appreciated....

Writing FeedbackKaterina0686Katerina0686 - Jul 28, 2016
Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment.Why is this happening ,and what

7 - Hi Rudi, its great to read your words of appreciation towards our craft here on EF and we will definitely be here...

Writing Feedbackrodiwojustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
"Applying for a masters in management as an accounting student" - Statement of Intent

5 - Hi Sebastian, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF, you don't have to worry so much on the word count,...

GraduateMelbUndergradjustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
Learning gave me direction and purpose

5 - Hi Juan, no worries at all if you forgot the prompt, well, it is definitely helpful for us to review the essay...

ScholarshipJuanSebastianRjustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
IELTS TASK 2.Q.INCREASE AIR TICKET PRICE TO REDUCE AIR TRAFFIC

4 - The salad days of third millennium has seen Although there are few arguments in favour , I am of the opinion that...

Writing Feedbackjobymonpjeddies - Jul 28, 2016
Letter of recommondation for Law School's scholarship

7 - Hi Minh, thank you for appreciating our work here on EF. It definitely boost our confidence whenever we receive great words of...

Letterspizzatrasuajustivy03 - Jul 28, 2016
ielts- should we provide children in rural communities with more schools or computers

7 - hai on the contrary with the view of many commented above, I think you have written a fairly good essay with excellent...

Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99jobymonpj - Jul 28, 2016
"Blessed is the influence of one true, loving human soul on another" - my father influence on me

3 - Hi Danielle, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family, you have come to the right platform to learn different things...

UndergraduateMochachiijustivy03 - Jul 27, 2016