|IELTS: Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries
NEW - Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. Explain main causes and effects of this problem suggest...
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|A letter on the reasons why I need a scholarship
9 - This is the revised version... Enjoy as you read. Dear Scholarship Selection Committee, This letter is intended to...
Undergraduatediamantediamante - 09:31am
|Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and t
NEW - "Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad...
|My future perspective and why i deserve the scholarship
NEW - Need an honest feedback on my essay draft below, any help would be much appreciated, Thanks in advance!! ...
|Letter of postponing job appointments
2 - Jay, the letter that you wrote is good. It gets the message across to the reader but has a...
Lettersjaijkrishn12Holt - 02:55am
|The Study Plan for Consulate General of Canada - recommended educational direction
5 - Henry, the essay is still too long and confused in the way you present the information. There is a...
GraduatehenrychenHolt - 02:45am
|Free education - reasoning and consequences of implementing the policy
6 - On the contrary, your score will be better in the GRE depending upon how well you debate the issue...
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|Which market structure is the most favorable to innovation in the Internet economy?
3 - @payal1982 Good night,thank you for reading, I'm also worried the sentences are big not good for the paper, because...
Dissertationswangyiwangyi - Yesterday
|Describe the factors that have most influenced you and your hopes and dreams.
9 - Charlotte, I can tell that you did your best to deliver a totally new essay that would best suit...
UndergraduatecharzbkHolt - Yesterday
|A short essay - of about 500 words in English - giving reasons for applying for the OFID scholarship
2 - Palma, it is imperative for your application that you manage to connect the ideals or objectives of OFID with...
Scholarshippao123Holt - Yesterday
|1. How'd you like to learn about by attending this conference?
4 - Van, based upon the instructions / expectations of the conference hosts, it seems that there is a particular set...
UndergraduatebawimangHolt - Yesterday
|Oracle technical skills, diagnosis expertness and other abilities. MS in Data Science recommendation
3 - Ashwin, first of all, the of the person recommending you must be included in the opening statement in order...
LettersashivashHolt - Yesterday
|U.S. Naval Officer Motivational Statement Essay - Navy's core values in order to protect USA
2 - Alexander, I am wondering if your motivational statement essay came with some guide questions as most military officer school...
LettersCookieMonster666Holt - Yesterday
|The pain of losing friends. Setback/opportunity/challenge - 250 words only.
5 - I knew it. The story that you related does not respond accurately to the prompt. Like I said previously,...
GraduateRashanHolt - Yesterday
|An essay based on your community involvement, contribution to school life and plans for the future
3 - Bala, this essay is actually looking for an explanation of the kind of person that you are when you...
EssaysbalakisHolt - Yesterday
|'the biggest leap of my life' - Fashion Institute of Technology / Fashion Business Management essay
5 - Maya, the only relevant portion of your essay in terms of the prompt requirement does not start until paragraph...
UndergraduatemayakayHolt - Yesterday
|7 billion individuals. What goes Unnoticed in My Life and Why It's Important to Me
3 - Tara, the topic that you chose to discuss is interesting, but turned out to be too broad in scope...
UndergraduateleafuryHolt - Yesterday
|MIT UPDATES- working as a chemical engineer
6 - Diva, I am confused by the declaration that you made in the first paragraph. Who has the BSC from...
UndergraduatedivaloHolt - Yesterday
|Flying all over the world. IELTS Task 2: Should air travel be restricted or NOT.
5 - Thanks for the feedback, I have taken notes. They are of great help....
Writing Feedbacksumanmahajansumanmahajan - Yesterday
|Sleep Disorder Research; Introducing sleep apnea the silent killer.
5 - OK, thanks for the clarification....
Research PapersmagdaczernyTJLuschen - Jan 22, 2017
|NUS Asean Scholarship Personal Statement-Key qualities.
4 - Lim, there are still some major points of correction in your essay that require an increased word count on...
UndergraduatedesinlimHolt - Jan 22, 2017
|GRE Issue Task: The idea to tell students which subject their should study
5 - just remember you need to fully understand the complexities of the issue and show, in you writing, that you...
Graduateshiv_rikyRashan - Jan 22, 2017
|Waterloo AIF- My goals and interest and my reason for choosing Waterloo
4 - Update: Q1: I've always been interested in the practical side of physics in particular regarding electricity. Electricity is...
UndergraduateChibi1Chibi1 - Jan 22, 2017
|'Our personality is the average of the five people with whom we spend most of our time'; GRE Task
4 - @Holt @notmargaux Thank you, for the advice. I understand I was not able to convey my message from...
Graduateshiv_rikyshiv_riky - Jan 21, 2017
|Many different views about the leading role of university education
2 - Jessica, I wonder if you know that your essay is 5 words short of the 250 word minimum requirement...
Writing FeedbackJessica HuangHolt - Jan 21, 2017
|Statement of purpose for MS in electrical engineering in USA, the field of VLSI designing technology
2 - Utsav, there is too much unnecessary information located within your statement of purpose. The normal format of a statement...
GraduateutsiHolt - Jan 21, 2017
|Describing a study experience in pursue of Korean scholarship. Statement on Purpose for KGSP
3 - @Holt thanks so much holt.. for you critics and suggestions .. i will revise it again.. and if there...
Scholarshiptherichathericha - Jan 21, 2017
|"The flow of electron" needs your review : SOP for Graduate Programs in Electrical Engineering
5 - Hasibul, rather than posing a question at the start of the essay, turn it into a statement of fact....
GraduateHjamilHolt - Jan 21, 2017
|IELTS Task 1: How Do U.S. Expenditures Compare With Those Of Other Countries?
3 - Try to group the subjects (4 countries) with minimum two categories (for example the maximum and the minimum expenditure...
Writing FeedbackellisanaHjamil - Jan 21, 2017
|Transfer essay: "I want an intellectually stimulating education at a research-oriented school"
3 - In this case, The approach should be mentioning your career goals with concrete points and how University of Illinois...
UndergraduateskazoHjamil - Jan 21, 2017