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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2, talk about marriage age limitation in which at least 21
2 - Putri, there are so many problems with the way that you wrote this essay that I cannot figure out...
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|[Task 1] The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France
2 - Gang, I would like to applaud your analysis of this essay. Save for a very minor oversight in the...
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|[IELTS Task 1] The main reasons for study among students of different age groups
2 - Peter in terms of a summary overview, you could have had a better presentation if you had actually indicated...
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|"A lot of people want to get married at later ages. Why is this trend popular ?"
3 - Hi Tram, I have read your essay closely and try to give you a few suggestions for finalizing this....
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|Gap year between school and university - IELTS
3 - Thanks @Holt However, I want to ask you about this sentence "Others believe that traveling after high school...
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|Women make better parents than men ? Discuss
2 - Atakan, this is not a comparison and point of view essay. This is a straightforward personal opinion essay. So...
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|Practice IELTS Writing Task 2 - Advantages or Disadvantages of Information Technology Development
5 - I have totally misunderstood the question and here it is my 2nd attempt, I greatly appreciate for any comments....
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|[task 1]Surveys conducted in 1982 and 2002 show what motivate students to choose a school in the UK
4 - @LadyOfClockwork You utilizes a variety of words which interprets the overall survey very well. Like "shed light on"...
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|The program at the University of Winnipeg is suited for my goals.
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|Is it possible for a country to be economically progressive while having a clean environment?
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|My points of view to the open offices.
3 - @Holt Thank you very much. I read the article here. ( time.com/4590401/open-office-productivity/ ) And then I try to...
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|[Task 1] The changing rates of crime in Newport city over nine years
7 - Hi Liza, your observations and descriptions are correct, but I think you may miss some features which are worth...
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|[ Task 1 ] The number of cars made in three countries in 2003, 2006, 2009
5 - Hi Kaylee, I appreciate the structure of your essay because it is quite easy to follow. However, I think...
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|Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Modern life is easier than life in the past.
2 - Utsav, your brain was running a mile a minute when you wrote this essay. You thought of so many...
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|[IELTS Writing Task 1] The consumption of fish and different kinds of meat between 1979 and 2004
3 - Thank you for your comment. I really find it useful, especially the comment about the choice of words. But...
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|Burgeoning economic growth effect. Problem and solution essay.
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|THE AVERAGE ATTENDANCE OF TOP-LEVEL SOCCER LEAGUES
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|Cases of discrimination job candidates due to specified gender; Ielts 2
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|Do the drawbacks of video games (unhealthy lifestyle, distraction from study) outweigh the benefits?
4 - @YuAnne I have read your essay and @akbarmappiare feedback and I agree; your essay is quite good but...
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|Should Grades Define Your Intelligence?
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|Essay for Chevening Leadership question; applying for a masters degree scholarship grant
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|Failed at Australia Award Scholarship with below statements
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|OPINION ABOUT SHOPPING ONLINE
4 - @YuAnne THANKS, I GOT IT @Holt THANKS FOR YOUR ADVICE. USING OPPOSITE OPINION LIKE A LEVER. I LIKE...
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|Practice IELTS Writing Task 2 - Benefit and Drawback of Computer Games
3 - Hello Mr Habib, in this moment I am going to offer a few suggestions for improving your essay so...
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|What goals do you have for yourself, including both personal and professionals goals?
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|Poor countries are helped by young people from wealthy nations.
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|IELTS Writing task 2 - Overpopulation problem and how to solve it
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|[IELTS TASK 2] How human activites effect animals life and solutions suggested
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|[IELTS] Schools are no longer necessary because of the Internet... Agree or disagree?
4 - Hello YuAnne, Your essay is good, you wrote it with topic sentences, which made your essay clear. I think...
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|Performance Bell Curve; archaic practice causes unfair employee evaluation
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