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|Writing task 1: The percentage of 10-15 year-olds chatting online and playing games.
4 - Red Moon, you must take note that IELTS writing task 1, among other things, tests your ability to specifically...
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|Is Violence the Result of TV, computers, and video games?
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|Persuasive Essay about different issues caused by computers
3 - Kristi, there are several problems with the essay that you are presenting. The most glaring problem is that this...
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|Sport amenities as an optimal method of making the public healthier?
3 - Hi Duc. I am going to give you responds related your contents. I would not focus on your grammar....
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|30 year old returning to college, what broad perspective do I bring to the engineering classroom
2 - @RSG335 Open the essay with the second paragraph instead. That way you create an interesting hook for the reviewer....
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|Phage Genomics Course Entrance Essay; discovery-based science interest - course participating
2 - Cassie, while this is a very interesting essay, it does not actually represent the required information to prove your...
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|The Identity of Postpartum Depression and Treatments Available
2 - Pricilla, you need to separate the first paragraph into your thesis statement and then the start of your second...
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|Parents have a dilemma and are unsure if their children should compete or cooperate with others
3 - Great work, however, as pointed out you have only an answered a half of the question. I suggest you...
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|"Why I have chosen invasive cardiovascular technology"
4 - Gina, the essay has improved a little. However, it is still scattered in the manner that it discusses the...
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|The prevention on health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine.
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|[IETLS writing] In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing
4 - Hi Wang Gang.. I have read your essay closely and found a few improvement you have needed. Turning to...
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|Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer a
3 - Adiya, due to the lack of the prompt instructions regarding the actual topic and discussion style, it it's difficult...
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|A lot of young people spend their time sitting in front of the television at home
3 - I also wrote six paragraphs in my first IETLS writting. The mistake should be avoided in the future....
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|Ship for the World Youth Program JAPAN- LEADERSHIP SKILLS AND CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY ESSAY
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|ENDEAVOUR SCHOLARSHIP: Contribution to personal goals
2 - Kamila, in terms of the academic application of your studies, you need to adjust the information that you are...
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|Endeavour Scholarship - writing about proposed program, host organisation, etc.
2 - Maria, you are being required to present a study plan for your time as a masters degree student in...
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|Cover letter for study permit in Canada at Cape Breton University
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|Television influences badly on children's creativity
4 - @Holt Thank you Holt for your review. I'm sincerely grateful. Firstly, I d'like to say that my full essay...
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|Graduate Statement of Purpose for Biomedical Engineering in University of Toronto
2 - Kajal, the first paragraph is not required in a statement of purpose. The focus of the statement of purpose...
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|Persuasive Research Paper on Government Cost (Ethical, Financial) of Safety though Surveillance
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|IELTS TASK 2: Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents
3 - Thanks a lot @Holt. I will work on complex sentences and try to complete the sentences with proper...
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|Statement of Purpose for Master of Strategic Communication for University of Canberra
5 - @Holt @chizy7 Thanks for helping me out. Putting in everything together, let me know what you think of...
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|Practice of writing introduction to topics
2 - Bui, do not take shortcuts with your opening statement. The one constant problem with all of your opening statements...
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|The body of an ielts essay related to personal happiness achievement
2 - Duy, in all honesty, this is one of the most off tangent discussion for this topic that I have...
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|Writing task 1 in ielts about the table of poverty people in Australia in 1999.
3 - WRITTING TASK 1: The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in...
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|[Ielts task 2] Education's effectiveness in leading people to a healthy eating habit
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|Interest in a Summer Research Program at Duke University
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|Should museums charge for admission? Benefits and drawbacks.
6 - Anna, I read the entire response and felt like there was so much more that you could say. Your...
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|[TOEFL] INCREASING THE PRICE OF GAS AND ELECTRICITY IS WISE, IN MY OPINION!
3 - @Holt thank you for your comment on my post! In response to your question, The prompt requirement asks "Do...
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|Rates of smoking in Someland
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