|Coffee vs. Tea for the English - an attempt for summing-up the text into one sentence
3 - Hai @foyuliu. It seems that you write your 75 words of summary in a sentence. I suggest you...
Lettersfoyuliuainunazwaria - 12:33pm
|The ways used to dispose of the harmful garbage in Korea, Sweden and United Kingdom
3 - The introductory paragraph is well done, but I think you need to put some ideas in order to make...
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282eddies - 11:45am
|IELTS Task 1: The main features of Global Water Usage in Brazil and Congo
3 - Hai @nuradiapuspa. I have several comments related to your essay. You should make a paraphrase that explains...
Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspaainunazwaria - 11:26am
|I would argue that dwelling in small village had several merits and demerits.
5 - An effective thesis statement is one that paraphrases the prompt while delivering a personal understanding on your part of...
Writing FeedbackainunazwariaHolt - 11:02am
|IELTS - the grievance note about the noise from your flat
2 - Jaya, when you address your neighbor, you will have to be gender specific because you are using the last...
Writing FeedbackjaikrishnaHolt - 10:33am
|The quantities of goods moved using four kinds of means in the UK between 1974 and 2002
5 - dear @Abrahamlincoln, A few corrections from me.. Watch the grammar. In paragraph 1, The line graphs compare...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnnuradiapuspa - 10:20am
|Photography and computers were my fields of interest since my childhood. Self Introduction KGSP 2017
9 - Photography and computers were are my fields of ... Over thecourse of time my interest (...) and this...
Scholarshipaliabidjaikrishna - 10:13am
|Minimizing the traffic issue - proposed ways
7 - As mentioned, your introduction paraphrase should give your opinion for agree or disagree questionnaire. 2 or 3 rd...
Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspajaikrishna - 10:05am
|The bar chart indicates the figure of time spent in billions of minutes by UK people on phone calls
9 - Hai @Maitouyen282 These are few corrections from me. Hope it could be helpful :) 1. In paragraph...
Writing FeedbackMaitouyen282nuradiapuspa - 09:52am
|I was born in a beautiful, landlocked country - Botswana. SELF INTRODUCTION FOR THE KGSP
6 - If you review the comments that I made, I made it clear that there were parts of your essay...
Scholarshipdebby89Holt - 09:40am
|"Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP
7 - Hi @azaa1428 I think you should mention some improvement from 2011. Say what you realized from previous one....
Scholarshipazaa1428jewjewmabushii - 09:13am
|Self-introduction for fashion but I graduated from different field.
10 - @Hol I am sorry. I will restart my computer and do it again. It might has some problem...
Scholarshipjewjewmabushiijewjewmabushii - 09:01am
|Define the highlights of your most crucial accomplishments or tasks inputs.
4 - As I mentioned in my previous response, your contribution should be something that has a personal meaning to you....
UndergraduateTrouvaille 05Holt - 09:00am
|Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content
22 - Overall a definitely better version than the first. Make sure that you use this as your opening paragraph. You...
EssaysgckiHolt - 08:47am
|Marriage in early adulthood
3 - @Holt Thank for your advice. It took me two hours to think about main ideas for this essay. I...
Writing Feedbackthichankemthichankem - 08:01am
|Emerging care system market for the elderly in Taiwan. SOP for Actuarial Science in the USA
3 - OK, I see. I will try it. thanks for your suggestion.[/b][/b]...
Graduaterobin963arobin963a - 05:55am
|Current research of your interest and a professor-mentor.
2 - Nic, the first thing that you have to know about a study plan is that is has to be...
EssaysNitivatHolt - 05:31am
|This great impact of DNA for human being. SOP - Stuck in the Study Plan for KGSP Scholarship
8 - Nic, you will definitely get suspended for this post in this thread. Please post it as a separate thread...
ScholarshipCCA92Holt - 04:44am
|The things that I consider before choosing the university of my future study. Australia Scholarship
4 - You can start meeting the word count by removing the long form meaning of TESOL. That brings your word...
Scholarshipd2nyHolt - 04:12am
|Artificial environments. Positive and negative sides of zoos
4 - Hi @adamrahimov Don't you think you need to switch the opinion paragraphs? It will flow better (even though it...
Writing Feedbackadamrahimovd2ny - 04:01am
|[REFERENCES LETTER] She has demonstrated an exceptional ability to grasp the rigorous demands of job
7 - Sehat, keep the continued balance in your referral letters. Always present one professional and one extra curricular / socio-civic...
Writing FeedbacksehatdinatiHolt - 03:53am
|Personal statement; I am applying to Pharmaceutical Analysis and QC one-year masters course
7 - Hanady, it would be best if you write a totally new essay instead. One that is better slanted towards...
ScholarshiphanadyzHolt - 02:25am
|Scholarship Self-Introduction Essay for KGSP program - I am going to apply through University track
8 - @Razy Thanks for your contribution. I will try to make my essay more concise and eliminate unnecessary information....
Scholarshiptainguyenthanhtainguyenthanh - Yesterday
|Study Plan - KGSP scholarship 2017 - Master Degree in Plastic Surgery
3 - @Fab Your work give so many idea for study plan.Because I am student and I really want to get...
ScholarshipFabMaitouyen282 - Yesterday
|My idea is about making SAMSUNG the only leading company in Africa
10 - If you will just change the way that you wrote the word Samsung from all upper case to first...
Scholarshipdawit359Holt - Yesterday
|Korean dramas and K-pop - letter of self introduction...KGSP scholarship
7 - @Holt like you guessed I still don't have any work experience nor internship. I also think lack of professional...
Scholarshipcj24cj24 - Yesterday
|Waterloo "reasons for choosing" essay - two portions answer
10 - Thanks a lot for your patience with me :D Writing isn't really my strong suit but I try to...
UndergraduateEiad21Eiad21 - Yesterday
|'I am a positive person' KGSP Application Letter of Self-Introduction: Assistance for Proofreading
4 - Hi, I think you should modify your first paragraph, do not talking too much about your current family situation...
ScholarshipBeautifulDayCCA92 - Yesterday
|This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.
29 - Like I said, this essay is good enough to submit. You have done your best to represent your intentions...
Graduateratan251294Holt - Yesterday
|I have a dominant character with good personality. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION
6 - @BeautifulDay Dear Kenneth, please give me a significant input. The title even doesnt matter in Chevening, because we...
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Yesterday