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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: A plan for changes to a school site over 20 years.

NEW - changes in a school on maps The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and...

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"Networking" An intellectual adventure for creativity- Chevening Scholarship

3 - Thank you very much. This is only the draft, I will work on the correction. God bless...

ScholarshipEmcee_huckzEmcee_huckz - 6 hours ago

MY random writing to improve writing mainly Grammar and sentence structure

NEW - she is so perfect Why is she so beautiful? I am here mean to say both inner and...

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High school graduates are encouraged to start working or traveling rather than entering University

2 - Hi Hadi I think your essay is somewhat has rather equivalent arguments supporting for your each opinion But your...

Writing Feedbackfuad hadiLinh Dieu - 10 hours ago

Task 2: Traditional culture with money-making purpose. Discuss both views and give opinion

NEW - Hope you can leave some comments and give some advices. Thank you all for reading my essay Some people...

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If there has been and obstacle in your life, explain the circumstances. UCF APPLICATION ESSAY

2 - Sam, I know that you are trying to think outside the box here in order to create a unique...

UndergraduateisabelanteloHolt - 15 hours ago

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below

3 - The given line graph illustrates reveals You should remove one of them, because they are both verbs between...

Writing Feedbackphamkhatufuad hadi - 15 hours ago

The graphs compared Japan and Malaysia in terms of five categories of average family expenses - 2010

3 - Phuc, you have not written enough words to portray a complete analysis of the pie charts. Do not aim...

Writing FeedbackVan Phuc BuiHolt - 16 hours ago

IELTS Writing task 2- Should newcomers follow new country's traditions?

4 - I think your tone is more proper with creative essay, not academic one. And you need to explain deeply...

Writing Feedbackcarolinenguyen18Linh Dieu - 17 hours ago

Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social developmen

2 - Hi Bach I find your essay is quite potential about lexicon, but you are lacking detail topic so it...

Writing Feedbackbach53hLinh Dieu - 17 hours ago

Some people prefer to keep on their job while others change it often without much hesitation

3 - Ngo, it appears to me that you were uncertain about how to approach this type of essay writing. I...

Writing FeedbackLinh DieuHolt - 20 hours ago

I have always been passionate about Computers and Communications - personal statment review

3 - Mena, since you are applying for admission to a masters degree course this is definitely not the personal statement...

Graduatemena SafwatHolt - 21 hours ago

A leader in the making. Leadership has clearly been the course of my life.

3 - @Holt thanks for that. Am going to workout at it from that angle....

ScholarshipPaddyPaddy - 1 day ago

Vacation or vacations to school children? Discussion essay.

4 - @Shurui and @Holt, thank you for the pieces of insightful advice! I will put those words into practice....

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Jimmy879873 - 1 day ago

UK graduates and postgraduates participating in four different kinds of jobs after finishing college

3 - @Minh2903 Paraphrase: number of UK graduates and postgraduates in terms of ( work they did /4 different...

Writing FeedbackMinh2903emilakam - 1 day ago

Plenty of authorities in the world consider economic progress is their first priority. IELTS2

6 - Hi Red Moon Your essay is quite sufficient about both reasoning and structure, but I think when you shift...

Writing FeedbackRed MoonLinh Dieu - 1 day ago

IELTS Task 2 - Art education in high school?

3 - Tam, your paper has not properly discussed the prompt requirements. This is an agree or disagree essay that you...

Writing FeedbacktamcspHolt - 1 day ago

IELTS WRITING TASK 2: A BAN ON ALL FORMS OF ADVERTISING? SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT?

4 - Ngo, your prompt paraphrase is not proper. I say that because a properly paraphrased prompt will explain the subject,...

Writing FeedbackLinh DieuHolt - 1 day ago

IELTS WRITING TASK 1: number of girls enrolled per 100 boys in different level of school education

3 - One way to limit your word count is to avoid the repetition of information throughout the essay. You often...

Writing FeedbackemilakamHolt - 1 day ago

How does this look as a gap year essay? Taking a gap year and going to plan a startup or something..

3 - Sujhan, the first thing you have to change with this essay is the tone of disinterest or lack of...

UndergraduatesujhangHolt - 1 day ago

IELTS writing task 1. Different genres of transport used to commute in a European city.

2 - Hi, thank you for your valuable feedback about my last essay. I'd love to give you some advice on...

Writing Feedbacksillyman2000Red Moon - 2 days ago

Ielts task 1: The population and its birth rate and death rates in an area in the UK.

2 - Hi Minh, Your vocab range is varied enough for a 6.0 I think. So is your grammar. ...

Writing FeedbackMinh2903tamcsp - 2 days ago

KGSP-U - Study plan to Improve English and Korean speaking abilities required for University

4 - Okay I tweaked it added a few things and took away a few things. Can you read it now...

Writing FeedbackMochachiiMochachii - 2 days ago

IELTS Writing Task 1: 'waste table' essay The table below shows the amount of waste production (in m

NEW - The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a...

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IELTS writing task 1. Survey about suitable age for granting certain rights.

4 - I have some suggestion for your essay: Firstly, the overview seems to be missing, you should conclude more...

Writing Feedbacksillyman2000Minh2903 - 2 days ago

IELTS writing task 1 Description of a town centre and making comparsion after a development plan

3 - Here are some of my suggestion: _You should avoid using " a bunch of...", it might sound informal to...

Writing FeedbackJohnNgMinh2903 - 2 days ago

Essay: Nature's Power and Human Desire in the Process of Decay

3 - @Holt Thank you for replying!! This writing may look better than my Task 2 essays because I wrote and...

PoetryTriceLiuTriceLiu - 2 days ago

The line graph represents the measure of elder people aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan

3 - Here are some of my suggestions: _"Overall, all three countries demonstrate an upward trend" instead of "..show increasing...

Writing FeedbackemilakamMinh2903 - 2 days ago

The rate of males and females in 6 age groups in Australia, who were engaged in physical exercises

5 - Thank you all for the kind and detailed reviews....

Writing FeedbackMinh2903Minh2903 - 2 days ago

It is better for elder to live with their offsprings rather than in an club for old people

5 - Your essay contained so many grammatical errors as well as weird and unnatural sentences. Therefore I find it really...

Writing Feedbacklozzolsillyman2000 - Aug 15, 2018