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|CHANGE IS THE FIRST STEP TO SUCCESS: My value and belief_NTU scholarship essay
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|Motivation Letter - I am willing to apply to Erasmus Mundus Joint Masters Degree Program
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|The extinction of animal species. What causes this? How to protect our fauna?
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|Sharing the world - application essay. (to Duke Kunshan University)
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Undergraduatekaia0911 - Dec 9, 2018nellawatyahmad26 - 13 hours ago
|I trust the future potential of Data Science, and I trust my own ability to excel at it. SOP
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|My love for chemistry and personal investment in biology and medicine, Ph.D. in pharmacology
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|JHU Supplemental Essay - an impact by collaboration with others
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Undergraduateleylamagsud - 1 day agoHolt - 15 hours ago
|To be a part of the introduction of sustainable and affordable biotechnology, the International Plan
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Undergraduateibk101 - 1 day agoHolt - 17 hours ago
|Identify one piece in your portfolio that you are most passionate about, tell us the story behind it
2 - Hannah, every painting has a story. The Mona Lisa depicts the story of a shy woman with a beautiful...
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|Common wealth development impact essay
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|Should authorities spend money on transportation infrastructure investments or not?
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|A time, in or outside the classroom, when you worked with others and what you learned from this
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Undergraduatemominanaveed - 1 day agoHolt - 18 hours ago
|SOP for admission in a course of statistics & machine learning
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Graduatejrakhshanda - 1 day agoHolt - 18 hours ago
|LOI for MA in Economics and Finance - about myself, my goal, why master's program, etc.
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|Use of first person in essay regarding humans
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Grammar, Usagema123 - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Tourism- the key to cultural coherence; being a great participant in the Global UGRAD Program
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ScholarshipInoyatillo - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Writing a motivational letter to Tribos- ERASMUS programme in Tribology of Surfaces.
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Graduateshubhangsharma - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|I am answering the why NYU Abu Dhabi question. Will it catch the attention of the admissions officer
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Undergraduatebilis - Dec 4, 2018mbk7162 - 1 day ago
|Personal Statement for Undergraduate Program in Computer Science
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Undergraduateanon123 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago
|Personal statement for pursuing a joint masters in Tourism Development and Culture in UK
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ScholarshipPat94 - Dec 9, 2018Pat94 - 2 days ago
|GLOCAL EMJMD PERSONAL STATEMENT
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|What are your artistic interests/goals? Advice on CalArts artist statements.
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|Choosing what to write about for common app?
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|Bakery and recipes - WASHU SUPPLEMENTAL ESSAY
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|Science excites me and l aspire more: to learn and to create as what my own childhood taught me
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|How has globalisation had an impact on transportation in your country? (changes and causes)
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|People cannot eliminate the habit of smoking
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|Many students have to study subjects which they do not like.
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|What is important to me? PROTECTING OUR NATURE AND ENSURING ANIMAL WELFARE
3 - I would not want to confuse the reviewer by using dividers to create choices in the presentation. You are...
UndergraduateSupantha - Dec 8, 2018Holt - Dec 9, 2018
|They say that I'm the one who does crazy stuff with Electricity; Tell us about who you are essay
2 - Oops! Nischay, you were off to a good start till you got to the part after your friend's description...
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