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Common App Essay : 'Clay Shavings'

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History, Book, Weekend, Compliment, Challenge, Future - Questbridge Short answers for Scholarship

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Staying at hotels when holidaying abroad is not the method to comprehend a nation and the people liv

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The graph below shows the internet users as percentage of population in USA, Canada and Mexico

3 - 152 words is not useful if you want to increase your overall score. You need to write anywhere from...

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Discussion - Environmental problems should be dealt at global or national level - for IELTS

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An academic oriented family - Global Korean Scholarship Undergraduate (personal statement)

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Tense to use when writing about mythology

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Common App gap year essay (250 words)

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IELTS 2: A significant decrease in the number of high street shops has been witnessed lately

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The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000

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Write a letter to the person who gave you a great deal of help when you were away.

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Ielts writing task 2 - Animal extinction - Reasons and Solution

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The bar chart illustrates the number of people who decide on university subjects chosen in 2005

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It is said that in the civilized world, animal-based products are not in high demand anymore

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The graph gives data on the amount of fish, lamb, beef, chicken consumed over a period of 15 years

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Some people deem that children should be brought up in a rural area than the city

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Health problems of developed world (put the cause and solution)

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Topic: Communicating online (advantages outweigh disadvantages?)

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Which is more important: Talent or hard work?

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Swimming determination - Questbridge Biographical Essay.

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Information technology is giving people a variety of new paths to experience the daily life

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The opportunity to go to the United Kingdom to study - for Chevening

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General Science - Chevening application

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IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers and books in the future

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Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers

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