Free Writing, Editing, and Research Help for Students
|IELTS Writing Task 2: 'private schools' essay
NEW - Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state...
|SCHOLARSHIP: Short essay on something of personal importance to you
3 - Just recently, two universities in Singapore was were hit by a phishing incident and suffered IT network breaches. the...
Scholarshipskullytonniesaysi - 1 hour ago
|[IELTS Writing part 2] Playing computer games is harmful. Do you agree with it?
4 - Topic: Outline your financial and education needs and how the scholarship would benefit you financial needs. First and...
Writing FeedbackmandyduongSlimatic - 1 hour ago
|IELTS Writing task 1 : The three companies' waste
2 - @Red Moon your writing has explained the graph in a good way. My advice is you could add more...
Writing FeedbackRed Moonflykitten - 5 hours ago
|Learning nationalism through activities in education, youth, and Indonesian culture
5 - @Holt Thank you, Holt, your advice did improve the essay! I would also love to use the private service...
Scholarshipflykittenflykitten - 5 hours ago
|Essay On Early Childhood Play and Education
2 - Amy, you accidentally placed your thesis statement at the conclusion of the essay. Move it up to the last...
Research PapersAmerzy1588Holt - 16 hours ago
|Motivation Letter of Taking M.TESOL program in Monash University
2 - Ahmad, a motivational letter should be short but informative and effective in delivering an overview of your statement of...
Writing FeedbackAhmadhamHolt - 17 hours ago
|Intended major and future goals and why you have chosen your field of interest
2 - Ngan, this is absolutely the wrong response to the prompt. Your response sounds like a a childish paper written...
Writing FeedbackngannkhHolt - 18 hours ago
|Violent Video Games are A-OK
2 - Jason, the first improvement that you can make to this essay is further developing your opening statement to include...
Research PapersjasonlongjrHolt - 18 hours ago
|IELTS Writing task 1 : Why young executives are stressed at work and the consequences.
Writing Feedbackguan721ngannkh - 1 day ago
|Share information in scientific research, business and the academic world. Good or bad
2 - Dear @kevin1983 You can rearrange this sentence to be more concise and simple: "All of the giant company...
Writing Feedbackkevin1983flykitten - 1 day ago
|Past or Future. Why not to move just forward?
2 - Hello @ngannkh I will just correct some grammar mistakes, has value... = has a value / has values...
Writing Feedbackngannkhflykitten - 1 day ago
|Technological skills through computer games? Any other influence?
5 - furthermore this is able to stimulate them - this can stimulate them they do not be easier to...
Writing Feedbackjazulirahmanezgifilik - 1 day ago
|The Effects of Video Games on Kids - English 102 Essay
2 - Burton, complete your thesis statement, that it's, your introductory paragraph by closing it with information about what you hope...
Writing FeedbackNegativebob1Holt - 1 day ago
|Writing 2: It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge.
Writing FeedbackArlenkevin1983 - 1 day ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Industrial and business center relocation
3 - @Ahmadham However, this might create a new congestion spot ... I think this can be expanded, or...
Writing FeedbackAhmadhamkevin1983 - 2 days ago
|[IELTS Writing part 2] Money should be spent on health education instead of medical technology
5 - @mandyduong It is a excellent essay, however, I am not convinced about the conclusion about "Develop countries", for there...
Writing Feedbackmandyduongkevin1983 - 2 days ago
|The Importance of Korean Community to The Philippines
2 - Han, what is the point of this essay? The introduction doesn't make any sense. Your first paragraph must properly...
Research PaperszyxpehaHolt - 2 days ago
|It is high time to encourage different sources of energy all over the world
2 - Hi sfiza You have answered the question in your writing. And it could have been better if you...
Writing Feedbacksfizaflykitten - 2 days ago
|Should foreigners pay more for tourism ? Should the host country require more money ?
2 - @tranvinhquang720 Hi, I would like to give you my brief feedback about the essay. First of all, I assume...
Writing Feedbacktranvinhquang720mandyduong - May 19, 2017
|Punishment for Children is important for them to learn the difference between right and wrong?
Writing Feedbackkevin1983kevin1983 - May 19, 2017
|Must the free time of kids be always educational?
3 - @Bekhruz Good response. I think you state your position well and have good reasons backing it....
Writing FeedbackBekhruzacecomer98 - May 18, 2017
|Summary: How can parents help students survive the exam season?
2 - Hi, I thought you did an excellent job summarizing this article. You restated most of the points very...
Writing FeedbackbaokhanhlqdTJLuschen - May 18, 2017
|University of Auckland Scholarship Essay_Skill and Knowledge gained from the study
3 - Thank you @Mary Rose for the feedback. I have revised the essay based on your comment. Please give...
Scholarshipkris_2017kris_2017 - May 18, 2017
|University Scholarship Cancellation Appeal Letter
Scholarshipacecomer98acecomer98 - May 18, 2017
|"Tell us about an achievement or ability not reflected in this application."
2 - Patrick, this essay covers more of the requirements for an obstacle you had to overcome instead of an achievement...
Undergraduatepoody11Holt - May 18, 2017
|Too much requirements from students? Should they focus strictly on the academic subjects?
2 - Hi..You got to know that essay question with agree and disagree type can be answered by five forms of...
Writing FeedbackyuzukachanAhmadham - May 17, 2017
|The line graph: tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.
2 - Hi I think you have been working hard with pies/charts/diagrams. That's why your language use is good such as...
Writing Feedbackbaonhisumandyduong - May 16, 2017
|Internet Users as percentage of populations
2 - I think you need to provide a real and more detailed question. What you have here is the data,...
Writing FeedbackthanhbuuEssayCoachOnline - May 16, 2017
|PERSONAL STATEMENT ON WHY I SHOULD BE CONSIDERED FOR SCHOLARSHIP AT HERRIOT WATT UNIVERSITY.
ScholarshipHussein17Hussein17 - May 16, 2017