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IELTS writing task 1 Description of a town centre and making comparsion after a development plan

3 - Here are some of my suggestion: _You should avoid using " a bunch of...", it might sound informal to...

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ielts task 1 The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary s

NEW - The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015....

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Ielts task 1: The population and its birth rate and death rates in an area in the UK.

NEW - The bar charts indicate the size of the population in a particular region in the UK and the corresponding...

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Essay: Nature's Power and Human Desire in the Process of Decay

3 - @Holt Thank you for replying!! This writing may look better than my Task 2 essays because I wrote and...

PoetryTriceLiuTriceLiu - 2 hours ago

The line graph represents the measure of elder people aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan

3 - @emilakam Here are some of my suggestions: _"Overall, all three countries demonstrate an upward trend" instead of "..show...

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The rate of males and females in 6 age groups in Australia, who were engaged in physical exercises

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Writing FeedbackMinh2903Minh2903 - 3 hours ago

KGSP-U - Study plan to Improve English and Korean speaking abilities required for University

2 - I re-wrote your essay so you check out your mistakes. I may be wrong about few just let me...

Writing FeedbackMochachiiemilakam - 9 hours ago

It is better for elder to live with their offsprings rather than in an club for old people

5 - Your essay contained so many grammatical errors as well as weird and unnatural sentences. Therefore I find it really...

Writing Feedbacklozzolsillyman2000 - 14 hours ago

IELTS writing task 1. Survey about suitable age for granting certain rights.

3 - Hi, The overview in your paragraph is not clear enough. The age for criminal responsibilities is also over...

Writing Feedbacksillyman2000Rogerscup - 15 hours ago

Describe main problems teenagers have in your country, explain their causes and suggest solutions

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Graduateninhnguyenninhnguyen - 18 hours ago

Sports Playing A Role In The Civil Rights Movement

2 - Ev, the essay needs to be spiced up so that the reader will have more of an interest in...

Writing FeedbackNatewoodsHolt - 19 hours ago

IELTS TASK 2, "Whether learning a foreign language should be a compulsory subject at school or not?"

4 - Hi. Next time, you need to provide the Task question, as it is unclear whether you were writing a...

Writing Feedbackbunnytiger01sillyman2000 - 20 hours ago

Plenty of authorities in the world consider economic progress is their first priority. IELTS2

5 - I think your essay is really coherent in term of ideas and relevant explanations. However, I do not see...

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Ielts writing task 2: why many people still go hungry although the advance made in agriculture

5 - Hi, welcome to the forum! Hope my suggestions could help: First of all, use clear, native expressions. Readers...

Writing Feedbackoanhkieu208TriceLiu - 21 hours ago

IELTS Writing task 2- Should newcomers follow new country's traditions?

3 - Hi Caroline, there are 2 instruction prompts for this topic. This is either a simple agree /disagree discussion or...

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IELTS TASK 1 :The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan

3 - Shao, this is a very good assessment of the two plans that you presented. It is clear and considers...

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IELT Task 2: Building function or exterior design? Which is more important?

2 - you should avoid using "we" and "you" or "us", because, in ielts writing, you have to write in formal...

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I'm in posession of a solid recommendation for a place at the International University of Japan

2 - Byron, were you being asked to write a personal statement with a study plan? This is not a normal...

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The proportion of modern applications' domestic utilization in the UK from 1996 to 2003

3 - Tuong, there are several missing elements in your presentation that you need to address as a part of your...

Writing FeedbacktuongvyHolt - 1 day ago

Korea as destination country is really worthy to continue my study - KGSP scholarship essay

2 - Putri, your letter is not very coherent as it is not properly worded in the English language. Aside from...

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Building and its appearances - the exterior look is not so important as usefulness?

3 - @PaulthePhoenix Thank you very much!...

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It is definetely a big challenge for a person to live in a country speaking with foreign language

2 - There are many grammar mistakes in your writing, I think you should pay more attention to those: It...

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Study plans to improve foreign languages required for taking a bachelor's degree course

3 - @Holt I am working on my study plan and i need your help. How can i contact you?. My...

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IELTS writing task 2: High sales is a result of powerful advertising, not real needs of society.

3 - Hi, I have some suggestions for your essay. Overall, your essay is very good and easy to read. Your...

Writing FeedbackdaominhhangRed Moon - 2 days ago

Ielts, Task2, Countryside or city, Discuss both sides + Opinion

4 - You did very well but ,my from my perspective, there still exist somethings that may exacerbate your essay :...

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Immigrants deal with a number of undesirable issues when trying to adapt with the new society

2 - Hello @zhongruansg, good to see you I have a few feedbacks, hope that helps 1) Task response: For...

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My assertive method of leadership. High-profile issues require skills. Chevening scholarship essay

5 - Thank you very much for your kind feedback and review. I'll try to make the changes as you mentioned....

ScholarshipAhseyarAhseyar - Aug 13, 2018

The questions of whether people should be paid excessive wages is controversial issue in the world

2 - Elnur, the way I teach my students to write these essays is to have them avoid writing a comprehensive...

Writing Feedbackelnur uncleHolt - Aug 13, 2018

USNA Application; explain your interest in the naval service and describe a personal experience

2 - Taelyn, I think that for the first part of the essay, the one about your initial interest, you could...

UndergraduateTaelynmroHolt - Aug 13, 2018

Failure is simply the opportunity - Common App Essay First Draft - Motivation Essay

2 - Grace, it would be better for us to review your essay based on the common app prompt that you...

Undergraduategracecurry01Holt - Aug 13, 2018