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|IELTS writing task 1 Description of a town centre and making comparsion after a development plan
3 - Here are some of my suggestion: _You should avoid using " a bunch of...", it might sound informal to...
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|ielts task 1 The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary s
NEW - The table below gives information about the problems faced by children in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015....
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|Ielts task 1: The population and its birth rate and death rates in an area in the UK.
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|Essay: Nature's Power and Human Desire in the Process of Decay
3 - @Holt Thank you for replying!! This writing may look better than my Task 2 essays because I wrote and...
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|The line graph represents the measure of elder people aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan
3 - @emilakam Here are some of my suggestions: _"Overall, all three countries demonstrate an upward trend" instead of "..show...
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|The rate of males and females in 6 age groups in Australia, who were engaged in physical exercises
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|KGSP-U - Study plan to Improve English and Korean speaking abilities required for University
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|It is better for elder to live with their offsprings rather than in an club for old people
5 - Your essay contained so many grammatical errors as well as weird and unnatural sentences. Therefore I find it really...
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|IELTS writing task 1. Survey about suitable age for granting certain rights.
3 - Hi, The overview in your paragraph is not clear enough. The age for criminal responsibilities is also over...
Writing Feedbacksillyman2000Rogerscup - 15 hours ago
|Describe main problems teenagers have in your country, explain their causes and suggest solutions
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|Sports Playing A Role In The Civil Rights Movement
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|IELTS TASK 2, "Whether learning a foreign language should be a compulsory subject at school or not?"
4 - Hi. Next time, you need to provide the Task question, as it is unclear whether you were writing a...
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|Plenty of authorities in the world consider economic progress is their first priority. IELTS2
5 - I think your essay is really coherent in term of ideas and relevant explanations. However, I do not see...
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|Ielts writing task 2: why many people still go hungry although the advance made in agriculture
5 - Hi, welcome to the forum! Hope my suggestions could help: First of all, use clear, native expressions. Readers...
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|IELTS Writing task 2- Should newcomers follow new country's traditions?
3 - Hi Caroline, there are 2 instruction prompts for this topic. This is either a simple agree /disagree discussion or...
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|IELTS TASK 1 :The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan
3 - Shao, this is a very good assessment of the two plans that you presented. It is clear and considers...
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|IELT Task 2: Building function or exterior design? Which is more important?
2 - you should avoid using "we" and "you" or "us", because, in ielts writing, you have to write in formal...
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|I'm in posession of a solid recommendation for a place at the International University of Japan
2 - Byron, were you being asked to write a personal statement with a study plan? This is not a normal...
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|The proportion of modern applications' domestic utilization in the UK from 1996 to 2003
3 - Tuong, there are several missing elements in your presentation that you need to address as a part of your...
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|Korea as destination country is really worthy to continue my study - KGSP scholarship essay
2 - Putri, your letter is not very coherent as it is not properly worded in the English language. Aside from...
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|Building and its appearances - the exterior look is not so important as usefulness?
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|It is definetely a big challenge for a person to live in a country speaking with foreign language
2 - There are many grammar mistakes in your writing, I think you should pay more attention to those: It...
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|Study plans to improve foreign languages required for taking a bachelor's degree course
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|IELTS writing task 2: High sales is a result of powerful advertising, not real needs of society.
3 - Hi, I have some suggestions for your essay. Overall, your essay is very good and easy to read. Your...
Writing FeedbackdaominhhangRed Moon - 2 days ago
|Ielts, Task2, Countryside or city, Discuss both sides + Opinion
4 - You did very well but ,my from my perspective, there still exist somethings that may exacerbate your essay :...
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|Immigrants deal with a number of undesirable issues when trying to adapt with the new society
2 - Hello @zhongruansg, good to see you I have a few feedbacks, hope that helps 1) Task response: For...
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|My assertive method of leadership. High-profile issues require skills. Chevening scholarship essay
5 - Thank you very much for your kind feedback and review. I'll try to make the changes as you mentioned....
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|The questions of whether people should be paid excessive wages is controversial issue in the world
2 - Elnur, the way I teach my students to write these essays is to have them avoid writing a comprehensive...
Writing Feedbackelnur uncleHolt - Aug 13, 2018
|USNA Application; explain your interest in the naval service and describe a personal experience
2 - Taelyn, I think that for the first part of the essay, the one about your initial interest, you could...
UndergraduateTaelynmroHolt - Aug 13, 2018
|Failure is simply the opportunity - Common App Essay First Draft - Motivation Essay
2 - Grace, it would be better for us to review your essay based on the common app prompt that you...
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