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, I am of the opinion that...
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on the contrary with the view of many commented above, I think you have written a fairly good essay with excellent...
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|IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.
6 - These days, there has been much debate about whether individuals are ...
... dependent at work or some criticaltimes, while they would...
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