|One and multiple idea paragraph. IELTS writing task 2: making body paragraph
2 - i would like to highlight your one idea paragraph: This is because we are able to do many things.....
Writing Feedbackazmi23ekalamarsyari11 - 04:44am
|Tell us about your short term and long term goals and your plans to achieve them - ISB YLP essay
3 - I have always been more motivated in ato do tasks which has havea direct impact on society My roleexperience as a...
GraduateSushmithaekalamarsyari11 - 04:29am
|IELTS TASK 1 - The map illustrates an overview of before and after the construction
2 - The map illustrates an overview of before and after the construction of some amenities in an island
i prefer to write:
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|It Is Easy to be Healthy - but not for everyone
3 - One assumes it is hard to do while others believes it is easy, provided if they really intend to be healthy.
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48ekalamarsyari11 - 04:03am
|IELTS TASK 3: MAKING CONCLUSION AND BODY PARAGRAPH
2 - Hi Hary, I would like to focus only on number 1, 2, and 3 of this thread. Here's my analysis towards...
Writing FeedbackHary01ichanpants89 - 02:36am
|Task 2 : The Way To Have Healthy Lifestyle essay
3 - Hi Miss Sofy.
I have read your writing closely. Actually, I need the question of yours in order to give me the...
Writing FeedbackIforsaakbarmappiare - 01:58am
|Modern technology and its global impact on human. Writing body paragraph.
2 - Taking cities in the U.S. as for example
the exacerbation of pristine earth pristine there is a growing concern that modern...
Writing Feedbackjomul01madmoiselle - 01:52am
|Writing Body Paragraph IELTS Writing Task 2.
3 - Hi Selvi.
These are my corrections for your writing
One Idea Paragraph However, one of the biggest concerns about...
Writing FeedbackPermata992akbarmappiare - 12:50am
|Overall, the most Bulgarians who tend to leave their country finished education at secondary level
2 - The bar chart shows information about the percentage of Bulgarians planning to leave Bulgaria based on levelS of education between 2002 and...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48akbarmappiare - 12:49am
|Child Obesity: THe Help and Hurt
NEW - I would like to have my research paper reviewed for grammar, citations and length. Thank you!...
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|Why Uchicago essay - I'm not sure about it. Tear it apart...
2 - Dear Molly, Welcome to the Essay Forum family. I am happy to be working with you today on this important essay....
UndergraduatemchammerJuanSebastianR - Yesterday
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 CONCLUSION PART - sincere answers for different issues topics
2 - ... worldwide trade will devastate the economy of local products. It is therefore, the goverment should lunch a campaign throught citizens to...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17jomul01 - Yesterday
|Both parents and school should obligate to keep the children fit.
3 - hi! i give you some corrections and a suggestion. hope it would be helpful Nowadays, an unhealthy way of life has...
Writing Feedbackhailun11azmi23 - Yesterday
|Healthy lifestyle is difficult to have in modern world, but simple efforts can make our life better
2 - In my opinion, general ("in general" or "generally" at the end of sentence, if what you mean is people in general) people...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11jomul01 - Yesterday
|The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the production stages of silk cloth
3 - hi! there are some suggestions and corrections of mine. hope it will be helpful ... explain about what a processes...
Writing Feedbackhailun11azmi23 - Yesterday
|' I am looking for a change of pace' - Why University of Chicago? (Be brutally honest)
NEW - How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and...
|Should parents give their children any social knowledge? Or they will get it just in school?
2 - Hay alfadmishal2, may this can help you ;) ... responsible to give their kids children (children is plural from child. Kids...
Writing Feedbackalfadmishal20Hary01 - Yesterday
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : CONCLUSION for global trade, working children and community service
2 - Hallo riaan.. i will give you suggestions especially about content of your conclusions. I guess for questions no 1 and 2 you...
Writing Feedbackrian31Beauty17 - Yesterday
|Summary - Al-Gore New thinking on the climate crisis
4 - hay room mate
i wanna to try give you some suggestion
i hope it works please use note about...
Writing FeedbackDipa19rian31 - Yesterday
|Sumary of Hiking the Inca Trail in The Andes Mountains
6 - hai aris
there are several suggestions from me
i hope it help you 1. check your vocabulary
Writing FeedbackAris05rian31 - Yesterday
|Bulgarians' who planned to come to other country - their education level has been evaluated
3 - In 2002 there was a peak for[in]the percentage of Bulgarians...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11twid - Yesterday
|People believe that the technology has driven them to face great development in their daily routine
3 - Hi Indrii, this is my suggestion has changed rapidly and gives a great impact for people live. "has changed" (using...
Writing Feedbackibal28Dipa19 - Yesterday
|'study hard and nourish your body' - healthy food for children at school (writing task 2)
3 - mea (pay attention for repetition, you can use diet or nourishment) becomes one of the crucial (...) study hard and also...
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08Iforsa - Yesterday
|Cocoon can produce 300 - 900 metres of thread. Life cycle Of silkworms / steps to produce silk cloth
3 - when moth lays downs eggs in mulberry leaf. larva consumes eats mulberry leaf Larva makes creates silk thread it...
Writing FeedbackIforsaekalamarsyari11 - Yesterday
|Fluorescent jellyfish proteins light up unconventional laser
5 - and it posted published in newscience.com
Laser is used by many sector sectors in the world
Traditional laser is...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91Iforsa - Yesterday
|'Find time for yourself' - The Way To Have Healthy Lifestyle essay - Task 2
6 - ... people do not have a lot of times ...
... although do not have enough times to do it. ...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18ashelarisa48 - Yesterday
|Metamorphosis of Silkworm and Process of Producing Silk Cloth
3 - silkworm producing eggs in mulberry leaf =>It does not produce eggs in mulberry leaf, it just lays its eggs there instead. ...
Writing Feedbackhirani03ekalamarsyari11 - Yesterday
|In many countries of the world few people earn extremely high salary
7 - Hello sinchana, nice to see you in this essay forum :)
Here is my correction for you. ... con's of this...
Writing Feedbacksinchanaashelarisa48 - Yesterday
|Networking skills - crucial determinants of one's performance in any field of work - Chevening essay
NEW - Hey guys, this is my essay for the networking skill in the Chevening application. I want it to look impressive and make...
|Level of Education of People In Bulgaria who Tend To Leave Their Country
3 - from 2002 to 2008 => you should mention 2002, 2006 and 2008 secondary education had the highest percentage to live in...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18ekalamarsyari11 - Yesterday