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Letter of motivation for a Master's Programme in Digital Media and Society

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IELTS WRITTING TASK 2 "Art classes should not be a compulsory subject"

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WRITTING TASK 1 ! LET READ AND GIVE SOME IDEA ABOUT MY ESSAY AND CORRECT IF YOU CAN ! appreciate

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My entry to Ivy Panda Essay Writing Scholarship -is studying abroad really worth it

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Some people believe that longer imprisonment is the most effective method to lessen crime rate

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The dilemma of whether better opt to reside in apartments or tip in favor of living in houses

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KGSP scholarship study plan

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Nursing School Admissions Essay (assault, abuse, poverty, mental illness)

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Is online schooling as effective as in-class education ?

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Spend money and save money. Discussion of both sides.

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Readmission Essay- Overcoming Academic Suspension

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Are governments and corporations the only organizations that can enhance the environment?

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The gap between the developed and the developing nations is increasing rapidly

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What's better for students; to attending online classes or studying at traditional schools?

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TOEFL The issue of the fuel's cost since the fuel itself has been fiercely polluting our environment

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Benefits of Certified Nursing Assistant

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Recommendation Letter for MFE Program

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(Ielts task1) how energy is used in an average Australian household and the greenhouse gas emissions

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TOFEL: choose a quality that you think is most important when doing a team project

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Ielts2 - The equal amount of money to both medical research and the protection of environment

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Do you like watching films at home or in the cinema? Why

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Write-up for CPA Society's Magazine - Impact of Culture on the Accounting Profession

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Task 1 - Line Graph indicates the average yearly money spent on mobile phones and stationary phone

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IELTS Writing Task 1 - money paid for books. (France, Italy, Germany, Austria,)

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More and more children are accessing the internet unsupervised at a younger age.

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IELTS Task 2 It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.

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ielts writing task2: wheter to accept bad situation or not?

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It is neither time nor opportunity that is to determine intimacy.

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GRE task 1; technology link with the deterioration in the ability for humans to think for themselves

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