|Chevening scholarship --your chosen three university courses--
NEW - Hello!!! please advice me on this, I am not a good writer but any suggestion will be helpful. Thank...
|I was always up to take leadership.... LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE QUESTION. Chevening Scholarship.
4 - I would really appreciate any contribution please, the deadline is approaching and I have 3 more essays to to...
Scholarshipfigufigu - 01:05pm
|Go Ahead, Make Up New Word! Summary Ted
4 - Hello Att98! I will give you some opinions about your summary.Paragraph 1:
(1) Lexicographer job is to write the words...
Writing FeedbackAtt98septiadara29 - 01:03pm
|Chevening Essay - Architecture Student (assess if the essay is correctly answering the brief)
NEW - Hello, Essay Forum!
I was seeking for essay examples in the internet for comparison and then I found EF.
|Writing Task 2 - Celebrities in News - Agree/Disagree
2 - HelloThere are a few stylistic mishaps in your text. It will sound much better if you apply the following...
Writing Feedbackibe13Wolf Larsen - 12:43pm
|Various of difficulties that people experience when they stay in overseas
10 - Hallo bada.. here my suggestion for you..1. The bar chart gives information about the various of difficulties that people...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17Beauty17 - 12:41pm
|Leadership is the mandatory skill required in the real life experiences - Chevening
3 - Thank you flexity for your feedback.
Can you please analyze is my essay content suitable for chevenong scholarship?...
Scholarshipamandarchssamandarchss - 12:41pm
|Writing Task 2: Media; Ordinary people vs Celebrities
2 - Hello aini! I will give you some opinions about your essay.Introduction:
(1) Nowadays, the media give so much attention to...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16septiadara29 - 12:40pm
|Writing Task 1 - Percentage of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of graduation
2 - Hi Mardian,Here's my analysis towards your report summary of IELTS task 1. I hope this would be helpful.- The...
Writing Feedbackmardian24ichanpants89 - 12:26pm
|Writing Task 1 - The percentage of new graduates finding job in Ontario - Line Chart
NEW - The line chart gives the percentage of new graduates who found jobs as teachers of English and French each...
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|The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities
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|Percentage of first-year teachers
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|Writing Task 2 - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities
NEW - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers, or footballers....
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|Writing Task 1: Percentage of first-year teachers with regular teaching jobs by year of garduation
NEW - The graph below shows information about the reqruitment of teachers in Ontario between 2001 and 2007.The line graph gives...
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|The percentage of initial-year teachers from recruitment. Writing Task 1 HAL 35 UNIT C
3 - Hello Beauty!...according to the year of graduation in Ontario is shown in this the line chart between 2001 and...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17nurainiyusuf16 - 12:04pm
|English-language teachers and French-language school teachers in Ontario
4 - Hello Willy!
Allow me to give you some suggestion.1. Be careful with your tenses
...educators was a slight increased.
...there was a...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23nurainiyusuf16 - 11:21am
|Modern form of communication such as email and messaging have reduced people time spending
NEW - Write about the following topic:Modern form of communication such as email and messaging have reduced the amount of time...
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|The most important section in a student's live (personal statement for CUHK)
NEW - Please help with my personal statement! Correcting grammar mistakes or spelling mistakes are fine! Let me know how can...
|Writing Task 1 - Three Problems When Move to Overseas
8 - Hello Anna!
Allow me to give you some suggestion.Be careful to use "slight increase" in comparison graph. The graph do...
Writing FeedbackAnna94nurainiyusuf16 - 11:03am
|People's problems with integration in a new place (eg. finding schools for children)
4 - Hi Beauty, ... have most problematic situation in a new country, ...- It is better to make two sentences...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17Faridadwi18 - 10:11am
|Middle aged people have the highest problem over all activities in a new living place
5 - Hi mardian, ... 18-34 is getting finances at 38 percent. The percentage is 38 percent of this problem. And...
Writing Feedbackmardian24Faridadwi18 - 09:57am
|It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments
2 - The isolated natural places are attracted ... (it is unclear sentence, and make no sense such the isolated places...
Writing FeedbackminhphamqbFadhilahumar91 - 09:41am
|News objects - celebrities and ordinary people
NEW - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers....
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|Chevening scholarship, I'm stuck at some problems in my application ...
2 - Hello,you need to write about your plans, vision and skills.
Leadership: it is not clear, but as I understood...
ScholarshipzaydRuslan55 - 09:34am
|Children's bad habits, for example they always eat some dirty, unhealthy foods
7 - Hi Septi, ... causes young people to have a bad habit about their lifestyle way of life is they...
Writing Feedbackseptiadara29Faridadwi18 - 09:32am
|Nowadays, children can do whatever they want, often bad things, and it leads to the health issues
4 - Hello, Mardian :)
Let me give some advice for your writing.
Having read the entire essay, I could not find...
Writing Feedbackmardian24Ilmi_03 - 09:25am
|Problems associated with sea levels and the possible solution
3 - Hi Caca!I think it is better for you to state what is your solution in your overview in the...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaadinartika19 - 09:18am
|The idea of home-schooling and at-home teaching
5 - Hi Tanjin,... home schooling was a quite a remarkable idea ...Even those mums and dads mothers and fathers succeeded...
Writing FeedbackTANJINFaridadwi18 - 09:14am
|Many people, especially children, tend to have an unhealthy habit
5 - Nowadays, owing to trend, many people especially children tend to have an unhealthy habits. Although some people argue...
Writing Feedbackibe13ekalamarsyari11 - 09:07am
|People rely on more than on job
3 - Hi Caca!Paragraph 1 :
I myself believe that the workable solutions to address this issue...When you state "becoming different lifestyle...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaadinartika19 - 09:05am