|If you could travel back in time to meet a famous person from history, what person would you like to
NEW - Most of the people consider at least one person as their legend and hero, who lived in the past. Whether that person...
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|Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is
NEW - Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is no community spirit. Others say...
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|TED SUMMARY: Why there are still few women leaders in the world
5 - hi Nina pay attention for plural and singular, please ...women leaders is are getting more... ...plain that women...
Writing FeedbackNinaJoesuf25LimLim15 - 08:54pm
|Most of businesses' objective now is gaining highly profitability with only concern for the money
3 - Hi Ziad
I'm trying to give you some suggestions just for sharing, perhaps you can put hook in your first...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24LimLim15 - 08:40pm
|Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and
NEW - Some people say that you can learn more about another country by watching television programmes and films about it than by actually...
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|Most people assume nowadays that living in a tower block has less community spirit.
NEW - Ielts writing task 2 Some people say that living in a high-rise apartment block is a lonely experience because there is...
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|Lonely experience. Small land in the city center causes urban community to live in the flat.
3 - in my opinion that people who live in the houses have ...
you should compare similar things
in my opinion, people who...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91ekalamarsyari11 - 05:37pm
|Producing electricity using two methods: hydroelectric dam and wave air generator
NEW - Topic : The diagrams below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting...
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|IELTS Task 2 : Living in the High-Rise Apartment : Lonely Experience or Better Sense of Community
2 - When a high-rise flat buildS in the urban area some have positive reactions but another others have negative one. The...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19ekalamarsyari11 - 05:24pm
|People rather choose sitting in the sofa, watch the show, and get information about other countries
2 - Hi Dina, here's my analysis of your essay. I hope you can follow through. 1st paragraph:
- Nowadays These days, a...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19ichanpants89 - 05:24pm
|Some benefits of watching TV like info on tourist destinations, the variety of world culinary, etc.
2 - Hi ekalamarsyari, let me you a hand, this is my correction 1. In my view there is (should be) (i think...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11ZiadRasyid24 - 05:23pm
|An estimated 100 African elephants are killed each day by poachers for their ivory tusks
2 - Hi Hary! Around 100 African elephants are killed have been killed each day ToughAlthough the number elephants more endangered...
Writing FeedbackHary01dinartika19 - 05:16pm
|IELTS 1: hydroelectric dam and wave-air generator generate electricity from renewable resources
NEW - The diagram below show two methods of using water to produce electricity. The provided diagrams illustrate how two methods produce electricity....
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|Clear post-study career plan; career goals related to UK priorities in your country - for Chevening
5 - thanks Angela Nang! :)...
Scholarshipnazzia30nazzia30 - 05:10pm
|A MSc in Development Studies will help me to develop a skill-set that I can effectively put in use
6 - @justivy03 thanks so much for going through it and giving me your feedback. I really appreciate the time and the effort you...
Scholarshipnazzia30nazzia30 - 05:00pm
|Students create a tool that turns cigarette smoke into oxygen
3 - Hi Azmi! This notion might be describe described ... Afdi, high school students He They came with the...
Writing Feedbackazmi23dinartika19 - 05:00pm
|Living in a high-rise flat is the new lifestyle. As the consequence, the occupant will feel lonely.
3 - Hi Hirani, let me you a hand, this is my correction This because usually it have little space with other room...
Writing Feedbackhirani03ZiadRasyid24 - 04:54pm
|In the modern era, most people argue if impressive constructions are essential for a city
2 - Hi Fadhil ! government should be spent spend There are advantage and disadvantage Modern construction building became...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91dinartika19 - 04:51pm
|Powerful earthquake shakes central Myanmar
2 - Hi Azmi! August 24th, 2016 where is an ancient capital of Bagan locate. less likely to cause disaster...
Writing Feedbackazmi23dinartika19 - 04:34pm
|The Way People Enjoy Their Leisure Time
3 - Hi Hirani! journey to abroad Travel to abroad : traveling abroad they want to get new...
Writing Feedbackhirani03dinartika19 - 04:26pm
|There a different systems to produce electricity - by water's power and air pressure.
3 - Hi Fadhilahumar91.
This is some corrections for your writing above. .. electricity distributed in into the power of line to every...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91hirani03 - 04:17pm
|Time Summary: Why Buying the Latest Apple Gadget Can Feel Like a Religious Experience
4 - Hi Fadhilahumar91, please excuse my temerity, but I disagree with a couple of your corrections: This action triggers the reward network...
Writing Feedbackjomul01TJLuschen - 04:10pm
|Is a flat is more comfortable than a house? What is better to live? IELTS2
4 - Right now Recently Many there are a plenty of places ...
Also, the occupant can follow many activities like social activity....
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18Iforsa - 04:06pm
|IELTS Task 1 The Methods To Produce Energy Using Water
3 - Hi, here are my comments: The [process] diagram process gives information about (...) as the main [source of energy]. Overall, it...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18TJLuschen - 04:05pm
|Interesting information about two traditional methods used to collect water in the past
3 - hi... The diagrams give us gives information about two ... Two people will hold he ropes and get the ...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19Fadhilahumar91 - 04:04pm
|According to the survey the married couples that doesn't have any children are happier
5 - HI.. All in all, overall,people who are
and their children's effect on ... (The effect on their children in...
Writing Feedbacktyar32Fadhilahumar91 - 03:49pm
|We can learn by watching television program or films, but culture is too complex to for this
4 - Nowadays,Information is easier to spread ...
Because, according to psychologist in multicultural approach, ...
... understand china's culture life such as Barongsai...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91Hary01 - 03:40pm
|Better chances to learn an another country: from television or a personal visit?
3 - Hi Farida, here's another help from my end. - Sophisticated technology help inhabitantpeople in many ways
- television programmesprograms like reality...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18justivy03 - 03:36pm
|Ted talk 7 the way we think about work broken.
5 - Hi Dhila, - It is does not mean technology of something, but the idea of technology.
- Sciences Scientist find...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91Faridadwi18 - 03:31pm
|How air circulation causes a waste of energy and heat in a house? Answer based on the diagram.
4 - Overall, it is obviously seen that, air escapes the building ... ... able to fill a control room between among those...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03Hary01 - 03:26pm