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|Statement of Intent (Loyola Marymount University Application, Fall 2019)
5 - Hopefully this is how you add on to your own thread. Anyways I have edited my statement to make...
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|Whether a leader is supposed to be young or old should depend on various factors
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|Empower People - Erasmus Mundus GLOCAL Program - Statement of Purpose
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|UT Austin scholarship short answer question- How are you a leader?
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|"How living in diverse cultures shaped my personality" - UBC Personal Profile Essay
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|Commonwealth Scholarship- Using Gender Studies to address a development challenge
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|E-market has become an ever-increasing trend and gradually overtaken in-store shopping. Pros & cons.
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|Effects of technology (impact on users and on different industries). 250 word essay
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|A New Light (Ringling College of Art and Design Application Essay)
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|How Pinder's four principles would be helpful
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|Ielts Writing Task 1 line graph: Crude oil prices US dollars per barrel
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|Writing IELTS task 1 - the variation in types of food which, were consumed by Europian people
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|Nowadays, going abroad for studying has been more and more popular, also among Vietnamese students
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|UBC Undergraduate Application - Who You Are: "Daredevil"
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|IELTS TASK 2. Encouraging children to live separately from parents
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|Driven / Debate Club - UBC Personal Profile - who you are
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|The school curriculum - sport activities for students?
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|UT Austin scholarship short answer question - What career best for you?
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|Statement of Purpose - MS in Data Science George Washington University
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|Short answer UT Austin Scholarship - describing myself. Quality? What order should sentences go in?
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|Promoting Reading Habit in Indonesia - Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
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|Potential to be a leader- CASE WESTERN PROMPT
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|'METAPHOR THAT DEFINES ME' - UBC PERSONAL PROFILE ESSAY
4 - You focused on giving something about yourself and didn't give the same attention to the parents or friends opinion....
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|Motivation Letter Embedded Systems KTH Royal Institute of Technology in Stockholm
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|There are many instances nowadays where younger individuals are becoming increasingly popular
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|Skills of any individual cannot be observed by his appearance.
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|An 'Insufferable Know-It-All' - Who You Are - UBC Uni Writing Prompt 2019
3 - Change the whole essay. You are supposed to represent yourself from the point of view of up to 3...
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|Need a study plan for a scholarship
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|Speaking essay about FAMILY - the most important thing of your life
3 - Quang, the essay lacks a proper introduction for every family member. Remember that you are introducing your parents to...
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