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Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?

3 - @Holt Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it...

ScholarshipYuchimeYuchime - 2 mins ago

IELTS Essay Task 2 Public spending on arts is a waste of money, agree or not?

NEW - funds on public services only instead of the arts? Title: Some people think that governments should only focus...

Writing FeedbackCatherine88 -

The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time - TASK 1

2 - Mai, while you wrote over the minimum required words, your essay shows a lack of analysis and proper summary...

Writing Feedbacktrung3110Holt - 2 hours ago

What shaped you into the person you are today? 2019 college application essay

4 - @cao1km thank you for the feedback, I changed the "if" and "would" part and they still have the same...

UndergraduateMiguelolvera1Miguelolvera1 - 2 hours ago

Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5

2 - @jimjimnie This is a very good study plan for both English and Korean languages. The fact that you knew...

ScholarshipjimjimnieHolt - 2 hours ago

My tours - review my Personal Profile (about myself) for UBC

3 - Hetav in order to bring this essay down to within the word count, you can remove the reference to...

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 3 hours ago

There is a myriad of people who believe that physically harmful sports ought to be forbid - IELTS 2

3 - Khoa. this is a 5 paragraph essay, you only wrote 4 paragraphs. You created a prompt deviation in the...

Writing FeedbackDang KhoaHolt - 3 hours ago

IELTS Task 1: Pie charts about Oscar winners by genre in 2003 and 2008

NEW - Oscar prize for movies in 2003 and 2008 Task: The pie charts below show the share of Oscar...

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UBC Personal Profile Answer - 'kindness is a virtue??'?

NEW - what is important to you, and why? Here's my answer to the question "what is important to you,...

Undergraduatetastpom -

Personal Statement for the Masters in Business Analytics at Michigan State University

3 - Thanks a lot for your response. Pointing my 10th and 12th score was to draw a conclusion to...

GraduateBangBomBangBom - 13 hours ago

It is an argue whether businesses have to be responsible for their effect on society or not

4 - Nguyen, your essay will fail due to several formatting problems. The first is that you have a redundant opening...

Writing FeedbackSEN2403Holt - 1 day ago

An impromptu speech without any earlier preparation - my response for a problem

3 - Hetav, there is no need, in my opinion, to change anything in this response statement. It is simple and...

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 1 day ago

Request to review personal profile for admission in UBC

5 - Can you please help me with my next question (in new thread please)....

UndergraduateHetav PandyaHetav Pandya - 1 day ago

West Union Building: A metaphor for my life (WHY DUKE ?)

2 - Kartik, it would do your essays well if you stop with the imagery and simply respond to the prompts...

UndergraduatekartiktHolt - 1 day ago

My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship

3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...

Scholarshipahsan_daniyalHolt - 1 day ago

Solving environmental problems: international organization or local government ?

2 - @TrangDiem11 Your essay has a good coherence, but I would like to suggest that you can include a few...

Writing FeedbackTrangDiem11Hetav Pandya - 1 day ago

QuestBridge Miscelleneous Short Questions for college application

3 - 1. You are not talking about an achievement and what it says about you. Rather, you are discussing a...

UndergraduateJainam_ShahHolt - 1 day ago

(IELTS) Purchasing unnecessary - pricey goods by people

NEW - Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and cannot afford. What are the reason...

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CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders

3 - Thankyou @Holt for your insight...

Scholarshipahmdardahmdard - 1 day ago

[IELTS] Children are better off to spend the time on other activities than reading story books.

2 - Suggestions too much times winder topics "Children will have various topics to share" becomes repetitive finding process-learning process, this...

Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Hetav Pandya - 1 day ago

THE BRILLIANT FOLLY OF A MAGNET DRIVEN CAR - Amherst Supplement Essay

4 - @kartikt Definitely much better. It's more believable in terms of age requirement and the situation presented is something that...

UndergraduatekartiktHolt - 1 day ago

Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening

5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...

ScholarshipjeffreyjHolt - 1 day ago

The differences of Education in Vietnam

3 - Phuong, your essay is very confusing to read. It feels like you are just picking up the discussion points...

Writing FeedbackpphanhhHolt - 1 day ago

Music cannot be prioritized by its importance - each genre has its own purpose

3 - Daniella, although you were given a detailed review of your work above, the person who gave you the advice...

Writing FeedbackDanila312Holt - 1 day ago

Motivation Letter for Scholarship by DAAD Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design

2 - hi ariel.. i just read your letter of motivation and compared it to the daad guidelines. they require you...

Scholarshiparielpvasconceloahsan_daniyal - 2 days ago

Post-Career plan to strengthen ties between my country and the UK

3 - Thank you for your insightful feedback. I appreciate your time and constructive feedback....

Scholarshipterminal28terminal28 - 2 days ago

I do my best to develop my network and communication skills for my professional career

6 - I can definitely relate to your feelings about writing these essays. Initially I had moments of "ups and downs"...

ScholarshipKing Ahmosterminal28 - 2 days ago

Young people admire sports stars though they do not set a good example. This is negative or positive

5 - You mentioned only the drawback of athletes which is unfair. Secondly, in your last paragraph you have written "a...

Writing Feedbackvybeo23anakosola - 2 days ago

The human have a negative effect on our planet. By harming Earth, we put our lives in danger.

5 - Okay, thanks....

Writing Feedbackanakosolaanakosola - 2 days ago

Department of Energy Resources Engineering - KGSP/scholarship. Personal Statement

2 - I think you need to work on this essay not only grammar, you need to write in more matured...

Scholarshipiamrmkjeffreyj - 2 days ago