|Writing task 2 students are in large classes
2 - Radja, this essay will still garner a score of 4 during the actual test. The very first problem this...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22Holt - 11:17am
|"Ph.D degree in a related subdiscipline in civil engineering" - Chevening: post-study career plan.
2 - Alao, in my opinion, you should just work on further developing the last two paragraphs of your study plan...
ScholarshipAlao0702Holt - 11:09am
|SOP for ms in petroleum, help in improving this essay
2 - Sanjeeve, I'd like to discuss the content of your essay before anything else. I would like you to concentrate...
Graduatesanjeev007Holt - 11:03am
|The world of work is changing - job conditions today are not the same as before
4 - hello Mr dika..
let me give some corrections..1. This will impact for the families by difficulty of finding the...
Writing Feedbackandika08Bekuk22 - 11:02am
|The use of renewable energy has less risk to the environment
2 - Radja, this essay would not score more than a 4 in an actual setting due to a number of...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22Holt - 10:53am
|My study in China; Chevening network question. Would be honoured, if you comment and help
6 - hello there..
here are my correction for your writing..1.In China (put comas)It is called "guanxi", the network of people,
ScholarshipRuslan55Bekuk22 - 10:52am
|How much coffee were exported from 3 countries between 2002 and 2012
2 - Mifta, I wish you had attached the chart that indicated the figures you presented. It is hard to judge...
Writing FeedbackamrillahmkHolt - 10:46am
|SEA LEVELS. Building dams and reservoirs can be taken as the workable solution for flood problem
4 - hello there..
I am going to give some corrections for your writing..1. it (it is) spillover (spill over) ...
Writing Feedbackkiki23Bekuk22 - 10:43am
|Utilizing the renewable energy sources is favored in generating electricity.
3 - undefinedhello mis rizky..
let me give some corrections for your writing..1.It is commonly believe ( use past participle becaue passive)...
Writing Feedbackkiki23Bekuk22 - 10:35am
|Moving industries and business to regional area for decrease congested spots and create fresh air
2 - @fadhil......find below the grammatical errors I found while going through your essay.1.) "Create of fresh air in the city"...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25Alao0702 - 09:59am
|Discussion about People Taking More Than One Job. Working life today is different than in the past.
2 - Hi
more than one professions
and just bought buy
what they needed than wanted
gradually increases every
add another income source
Writing Feedbackmem77sinahector - 09:31am
|"Leadership is intended to serve others in the area of our giftedness". Chevening essay
3 - I think you should give clear examples of the challenges faced you and how did you face it ???...
Scholarshipkokiskareem ragab - 09:24am
|Online PC games as a way to deliver essential information regarding educational subjects
2 - Hey Fadhil, I really like the way you delivered your opinion in the essay. It had an accurate number...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25Holt - 08:58am
|Problems associated with sea levels and the possible solution
2 - Hi Russel. Well, this certainly looks like it would score another 6 in an actual exam. You have proven...
Writing FeedbackCachaaaaaaaaHolt - 08:42am
|Today, many people rely on utilizing renewable energy in order to produce electricity
2 - Hi,It is advisable to put it in table as a summary and explain in detail below the table.
Writing FeedbackHujjatul19Nethiyaa - 08:41am
|How the loss of my mother marked my transition from childhood to adulthood
2 - Well Joe, this story of self realization is a nice touch to your transition story. However, it lacks one...
UndergraduateJoeCuccs12Holt - 06:35am
|Chevening essay on leaders and influencers - Great leaders can inspire and impact people
5 - Hi Oranat, I am posting some more suggestions for the revision of our essay. These will include the compressing...
ScholarshipTanny112Holt - 06:26am
|Water in the sea increases and even surpass all limits. Problem Solution as Impact of Climate Change
2 - HelloI have a few remarks, regarding your text:1. Many of your sentences are little too long. You should consider...
Writing Feedbackmem77Wolf Larsen - 06:04am
|My recommendations (ACCOUNTING AND BUSINESS)
2 - Both your letters are too long and does not present your strengths in the best possible manner. Review the...
Undergraduateinav321Holt - 04:12am
|Emerson Supplemental Essay, title your life. NEED INPUT & EDITING
5 - ahh thank you so much, that helps a lot. I think I'll start fresh but still incorporate the hourglass...
Writing Feedbackemrosato16emrosato16 - 03:28am
|What problems are associated with global warming and what are some possible solutions?
2 - In 21th century, humans are confronted with the most ...
... however, controlling human population in cities as well as...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25Charrima - 03:23am
|"What does not destroy me makes me stronger" - Princeton Supplement prompt 5
13 - I think you're right !
Undergraduateinav321inav321 - 03:14am
|There is advice that teenagers should reach a job before continuing to study in school or university
3 - Dear Bekuk, it is some advices from me and feel free for correcting me too!There are some advices that...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22mem77 - 03:10am
|The World of Work - people no longer rely on taking one job for life.
2 - ... and children needs forcing people to do so, in ... is forcing??...
Writing Feedbackfadhilmd25inav321 - 03:07am
|Comment and explanation section of pffa Princeton
12 - The rate used in the conversion of Nepali rupee to US dollars is: $1=Rs.107.My father is the single earner...
Undergraduateinav321inav321 - 03:05am
|Why History is Worth Studying
7 - Dear Yoosol Jung, here some advices from me and feel free for correcting me too!... is pointless because it...
Undergraduateyjung17mem77 - 03:00am
|Economic demand is one of causes of the trend, when people have more than one job
2 - This presenttime, pricefrom all subjects is increasing ...
For instance, citizen of Bermuda, a countrywhich the most expensive ......
Writing FeedbackGiansy11inav321 - 02:57am
|Manufacturing and business is boosted to be relocated from big city to the rural area
3 - Dear Bekuk, here some advices from me and feel free for correcting me too!One of the advantages of the...
Writing FeedbackBekuk22mem77 - 02:48am
|I became highly captivated by the world of technology during my school time; SOP - MS in CS
2 - Saliha, The statement of purpose is too long. It can do with some editing, mostly at the start of...
ScholarshipsalihaHolt - 02:44am
|ARTICLE SUMMARY: Playboy Features Muslim Woman in Hijab For First Time Ever
6 - Dear Fasida, this is some advices from me, and feel free to correct me too!The 22-year-old Arab-American Woman revealed...
Writing FeedbackIedha01mem77 - 02:33am