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|My personal statement for KGSP 2019 for animation undergraduate
NEW - HELLO EVERYBODY!!Hope you have a great day! I am Nora, attempting to get KGSP ( Korean government scholarship...
|Can Chemistry be Useful? When I use all of my theory in my real life? - Personal Statement for KGSP
NEW - I'am applying for KGSP scholarship. therefore i think my essay kinda out of topic and not so formal, and...
|Question about the word choice, confusing sentences of my answer on the question below.
ScholarshipAmurikGITZ14 - 6 hours ago
|STUNED Essay. Why you apply for the chosen program, what do you intend to do with your Master degree
3 - Thank you @Amurik for the review. I will absorb your correction. And how about the content of this essay?...
ScholarshipGITZ14GITZ14 - 6 hours ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.
2 - 1. ... slightly downward trend - the word slightly doesn't seem to fit this context. I would suggest replacing...
Writing FeedbacknguyenthikimdungAmurik - 7 hours ago
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Opinions of the Constructing New or Existing Transportation
3 - @Holt Thank you for your detail explanation and point out the mistakes I made. I'll improve all the above...
Writing Feedbackying_chenying_chen - 7 hours ago
|Essay about developing e-learning for maths word problems (Applying for KGSP)
3 - Thanks for your reply. yes I'm applying for master degree , Educational Technology major. I double check the...
Scholarshipacah79acah79 - 9 hours ago
|South Korea - the only country I could fit - Personal Statement for KGSP
2 - Rashad, this personal statement thoroughly confuses the reader. There does not seem to be a point to your essay....
Writing Feedbackrashad07Holt - 11 hours ago
|Facebook, Twitter etcetera. What have they done to our society as a whole?
5 - @inderGTR Hi Thanks for your feedback could you elaborate it by giving me some examples? I would really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackPeterBrownPeterBrown - 12 hours ago
|Personal Statement for KGSP 2018 - I want to be an Urban Planner!
Scholarshipstwinursitastwinursita - 1 day ago
|Training and experience in Korea - study plan and future plan - I would like apply for KGSP
ScholarshipTB17TB17 - 1 day ago
|KGSP Personal Statement - Learning about Other Cultures
2 - The essay could use more of a backstory regarding your decision to become a polyglot. Since you are focusing...
ScholarshipjadesingerHolt - 1 day ago
|My fascination towards data analytics. SOP for Masters in Business Analytics in UIOWA
Graduatevasanthgvk3vasanthgvk3 - 1 day ago
|Ielts Writting Part 2: In many city, the population is increasing...
3 - Thank you very much Holt, I really got your points and understand it. I will try to do better....
Writing Feedbackminhtrang2710minhtrang2710 - 2 days ago
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree/Disagree Community Service as a part of study
NEW - unpaid community service as a compulsory program Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory...
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|Personal Statement shows how your own interests are linked to the Digital Marketing programme
2 - I think it would be better if you arrange your essay more systematically. You can state your main idea...
ScholarshipMariamMUlfaidrus_flip - 2 days ago
|Essay about the contrast between current generation and my parents generation - IELTS
Writing Feedbackahmed_kishkUlfaidrus_flip - 2 days ago
|Tell me about yourself (family, hobbies, dreams, strongest and weakest points)
5 - I do many things for entertainment such as playing games, reading books, listening to music,and so on. However, but...
UndergraduateGia Huy CaoUlfaidrus_flip - 2 days ago
|KGSP Personal Statement - I want to fix my country unseen problem
2 - Josevan, the reference to your ambition should start with high school not childhood. the reviewers do not believe that...
ScholarshipJsovaneHolt - 2 days ago
|"Stipendium Hungaricum" Program - Motivation letter for Hungarian Scholarship
ScholarshipIvanovic12Ivanovic12 - 2 days ago
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Two Opinions of the Internet
3 - Hi, few of my suggestions 1. social media, such as Facebook, "L"ine and so forth. (Line should be...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipying_chen - 2 days ago
|Queen's Commerce: Most important lesson you learned from a mistake you have made? (300 words)
2 - Chenlei, the first sentence is a throw away. It is not necessary to create a prompt restatement in this...
UndergraduatemorninghanaHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Agree or Disagree of Local Police Officer Recruitment
2 - Ulfa, you need to understand something important about the opening statement. This is always presented as a paraphrase of...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|Academic study related awards, publications - not specific to any particular qualifications you hold
NEW - how to write this scholarship essay? Provide a maximum of four academic study related awards, prizes or publication...
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|Why should they choose me for KGSP 2018 ?
3 - There are a number of important points in the prompt that you have failed to address in your essay....
GraduatekopureHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|Choose to take courses in a variety of subject areas or to focus on a single subject area?
3 - KevinLove, your English grammar is simple enough to warrant only a few minor corrections. You have 2 problems when...
Writing FeedbackStephenYoungHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Causes and Solutions of International Tourism
2 - Ulfa, your opening statement is expressive but confusing to read due to your lack of English grammar knowledge. The...
Writing FeedbackUlfaidrus_flipHolt - Feb 15, 2018
|I can learn a lot of good things from this great nation. KGSP scholarship 2018
Scholarshipyourbaeyourbae - Feb 14, 2018
|My examination essay - what is your biggest mistake
3 - @Holt I just remembered. The topic presentation is 'what is your biggest mistakes and what did you learn...
Graduatemuisasmuisas - Feb 14, 2018
|IELTS TASK 2, Are celerities setting bad role models for the young because of their glamour?
3 - In Paragraph one, you should write one or more sentence about thesis statement beacuse it can make your essay...
Writing FeedbackRumi2020Nuval_flip - Feb 14, 2018