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|Ship for the World Youth Program JAPAN- LEADERSHIP SKILLS AND CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY ESSAY
3 - Susana, your essay is good but too wide in coverage. You need to narrow the essay down to only...
ScholarshipSusyCSHolt - 1 hour ago
|Cover letter for study permit in Canada at Cape Breton University
Lettersdexterloaxdexterloax - 1 hour ago
|ENDEAVOUR SCHOLARSHIP: Contribution to personal goals
NEW - Hi! I am applying to an Endeavour Scholarship. Could you please give me some advice on the following text?...
|Endeavour Scholarship - Writing
NEW - Please summarise, in words that can be understood by a person outside your field, details of your proposed program,...
|Parents have a dilemma and are unsure if their children should compete or cooperate with others
2 - @celinechan This essay will not get a passing score because it failed to properly address the prompt requirements. Rather...
Writing FeedbackcelinechanHolt - 11 hours ago
|Television influences badly on children's creativity
4 - @Holt Thank you Holt for your review. I'm sincerely grateful. Firstly, I d'like to say that my full essay...
Writing FeedbackIris RiversideIris Riverside - 12 hours ago
|Graduate Statement of Purpose for Biomedical Engineering in University of Toronto
2 - Kajal, the first paragraph is not required in a statement of purpose. The focus of the statement of purpose...
Graduatekajal12345Holt - 16 hours ago
|"Why I have chosen invasive cardiovascular technology"
2 - Gina, you just have to adjust the content of the essay too become more focused and relevant regarding your...
Undergraduateggarcia18Holt - 18 hours ago
|Persuasive Research Paper on Government Cost (Ethical, Financial) of Safety though Surveillance
Research PapersSeanCavSeanCav - 1 day ago
|IELTS TASK 2: Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents
3 - Thanks a lot @Holt. I will work on complex sentences and try to complete the sentences with proper...
Writing Feedbackmtrjmtrj - 1 day ago
|Statement of Purpose for Master of Strategic Communication for University of Canberra
5 - @Holt @chizy7 Thanks for helping me out. Putting in everything together, let me know what you think of...
Graduatefireflower_01fireflower_01 - 1 day ago
|A lot of young people spend their time sitting in front of the television at home
2 - Kim, you have written a very impressive essay that is informative and shows off your English fluency skills to...
Writing FeedbackkimyoongiHolt - 1 day ago
|Practice of writing introduction to topics
2 - Bui, do not take shortcuts with your opening statement. The one constant problem with all of your opening statements...
EssayslamkittyHolt - 2 days ago
|Sport amenities as an optimal method of making the public healthier?
2 - Duc, regardless of what test you are writing a practice essay for, the main component that must be seen...
Writing FeedbackDuc MosbyHolt - 2 days ago
|The body of an ielts essay related to personal happiness achievement
2 - Duy, in all honesty, this is one of the most off tangent discussion for this topic that I have...
Writing FeedbackLeestormHolt - 2 days ago
|Writing task 1 in ielts about the table of poverty people in Australia in 1999.
3 - WRITTING TASK 1: The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in...
Writing FeedbackBLUESTONEBLUESTONE - Jun 23, 2017
|[Ielts task 2] Education's effectiveness in leading people to a healthy eating habit
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|Interest in a Summer Research Program at Duke University
2 - Brayan, please note that contributors are limited to only one free advice per thread now. The advice that I...
Undergraduatebrayan1996Holt - Jun 23, 2017
|Should museums charge for admission? Benefits and drawbacks.
6 - Anna, I read the entire response and felt like there was so much more that you could say. Your...
Writing Feedbackdinosps9a4brayan1996 - Jun 22, 2017
|[TOEFL] INCREASING THE PRICE OF GAS AND ELECTRICITY IS WISE, IN MY OPINION!
3 - @Holt thank you for your comment on my post! In response to your question, The prompt requirement asks "Do...
Writing FeedbackMinh NguyenMinh Nguyen - Jun 22, 2017
|Writing task 1: The percentage of 10-15 year-olds chatting online and playing games.
2 - Moon, the paragraph presentations you made are too short. You need to learn to use full stops instead of...
Writing FeedbackRed MoonHolt - Jun 22, 2017
|Rates of smoking in Someland
Writing FeedbackHuyhiep231Red Moon - Jun 22, 2017
|A movie that has inspired you and its impact on your life. Problem in usage and convention - CBEST
Writing Feedbackbaljinderbaljinder - Jun 22, 2017
|"self-introduction letter for master degree in finance" - the major is international relations
Scholarshipchith5333chith5333 - Jun 22, 2017
|Information about the private use of Internet, Cd player, mobile phone and home computer in the UK
2 - Alessandro, you have to always remember that you will lose points for writing single sentences instead of complete paragraphs....
Writing FeedbackyendoHolt - Jun 22, 2017
|Explain any risk you have taken in your life. Cbest level essay.
Writing Feedbackbaljinderbaljinder - Jun 21, 2017
|The pie chart below shows the main reasons why students chose to study at a particular UK university
2 - Darren, while you did a pretty good representation of the overall information in the essay, your summary statement lacks...
Writing FeedbackDarren MaiHolt - Jun 21, 2017
|Ideas presented in the topic: Career goals and how to accomplish them
Undergraduatebrayan1996brayan1996 - Jun 20, 2017
|Introduction to - Cà phê sữa đá''
2 - @kittynice25 Are you studying English? Is this part of your exercises in your writing class? I am not really...
Grammar, Usagekittynice25Holt - Jun 20, 2017
|SCAD Statement of Purpose for B.F.A. Visual Effects
4 - Hi Christina, I agree with Holt. You are gonna have to start all over again. This is a statement...
UndergraduateAspiringArtist88chizy7 - Jun 20, 2017