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3 - the feedback is awesome, really appreciate both the readiness and the help!
When I wrote this in a negative...
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4 - Li, after carefully reviewing your essay in reference to the prompt that you provided, I have come to the...
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2 - HI Olivia, thank you for your kind words about the work that we do here at the forum. Don't...
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3 - Lyndsay, I have to say that you have written a very humorous essay here. Your depiction of yourself as...
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7 - In the second paragraph, you need not mention that you graduated from a Nigerian university. Instead, you should be...
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4 - I suggest that you analyze yourself for the 5 successful character traits that the essay is requiring you to...
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your presentation's subject seems to be confused me...
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