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|Sports Playing A Role In The Civil Rights Movement
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|IELTS Writing task 2- Should newcomers follow new country's traditions?
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|Plenty of authorities in the world consider economic progress is their first priority. IELTS2
Writing FeedbackRed MoonRed Moon - 7 hours ago
|Ielts writing task 2: why many people still go hungry although the advance made in agriculture
2 - @oanhkieu208 Hi Oanh, here are some of my comments, hope that helps 1) Task response: this essay has clear...
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|It is better for elder to live with their offsprings rather than in an club for old people
4 - @zhongruansg and @smally01 Hi, thank you very much for your comments. I will have a look at your essays....
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|IELTS TASK 2, "Whether learning a foreign language should be a compulsory subject at school or not?"
3 - Hi @ smally01 Thank you so much for your very helpful comments and corrections. I've learnt much from your...
Writing Feedbackbunnytiger01bunnytiger01 - 12 hours ago
|IELT Task 2: Building function or exterior design? Which is more important?
2 - you should avoid using "we" and "you" or "us", because, in ielts writing, you have to write in formal...
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|IELTS writing task 1 Description of a town centre and making comparsion after a development plan
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|I'm in posession of a solid recommendation for a place at the International University of Japan
2 - Byron, were you being asked to write a personal statement with a study plan? This is not a normal...
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|The proportion of modern applications' domestic utilization in the UK from 1996 to 2003
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|Korea as destination country is really worthy to continue my study - KGSP scholarship essay
2 - Putri, your letter is not very coherent as it is not properly worded in the English language. Aside from...
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|Building and its appearances - the exterior look is not so important as usefulness?
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|It is definetely a big challenge for a person to live in a country speaking with foreign language
2 - There are many grammar mistakes in your writing, I think you should pay more attention to those: It...
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|IELTS TASK 1 :The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan
2 - You can paraphrase the school site/ the site of school by using " the school campus/ the school layout"....
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|Study plans to improve foreign languages required for taking a bachelor's degree course
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|IELTS writing task 2: High sales is a result of powerful advertising, not real needs of society.
3 - Hi, I have some suggestions for your essay. Overall, your essay is very good and easy to read. Your...
Writing FeedbackdaominhhangRed Moon - 1 day ago
|Ielts, Task2, Countryside or city, Discuss both sides + Opinion
4 - You did very well but ,my from my perspective, there still exist somethings that may exacerbate your essay :...
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|Immigrants deal with a number of undesirable issues when trying to adapt with the new society
2 - Hello @zhongruansg, good to see you I have a few feedbacks, hope that helps 1) Task response: For...
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|My assertive method of leadership. High-profile issues require skills. Chevening scholarship essay
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|The questions of whether people should be paid excessive wages is controversial issue in the world
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|USNA Application; explain your interest in the naval service and describe a personal experience
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|Failure is simply the opportunity - Common App Essay First Draft - Motivation Essay
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|This is what happens when you over estimate your time constraints - ENG101 Research Paper Draft
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|IELTS 2 - should teenagers do part-time jobs? Both side of the views and my opinion
3 - Hi Eddy, thanks for your comments. It is true that my opening paragraph is fail to IELTS requirement. ...
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|It is possible to prevent and solve the problems connected with living in a foreign country
3 - Hi Holt, Thank you so much for your feedback. I will write again and focus on speaking a foreign...
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|IELTS wirting task2 subjects for university students to study
2 - 1. In the first sentence of your opening paragraph, you said you agree with this statement. But in the...
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|I'm seeking to advance on the business field hoping to have an effect on improving business trade
2 - Mohammad, this is not a very strong leadership and influencing essay. Your abilities, as presented in the essay are...
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|Putting A Stop to Gun Violence in Our Schools
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|ielts writing task 2 - ILLEGAL TO REJECT JOB'S APPLICANTS BASED ON THEIR AGE
3 - @zahranatsir I think that your got the great opening ,however, there are some mistakes in the main paragraphs. 1."On...
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|The average amount of Vietnamese people who studied in France, Russia and in the USA (2000 - 2015)
2 - Dang, you have written too many words for this essay. Remember that editing time is required in order to...
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