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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: A plan for changes to a school site over 20 years.
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|"Networking" An intellectual adventure for creativity- Chevening Scholarship
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|MY random writing to improve writing mainly Grammar and sentence structure
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|High school graduates are encouraged to start working or traveling rather than entering University
2 - Hi Hadi I think your essay is somewhat has rather equivalent arguments supporting for your each opinion But your...
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|Task 2: Traditional culture with money-making purpose. Discuss both views and give opinion
NEW - Hope you can leave some comments and give some advices. Thank you all for reading my essay Some people...
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|If there has been and obstacle in your life, explain the circumstances. UCF APPLICATION ESSAY
UndergraduateisabelanteloHolt - 15 hours ago
|Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below
3 - The given line graph illustrates reveals You should remove one of them, because they are both verbs between...
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|The graphs compared Japan and Malaysia in terms of five categories of average family expenses - 2010
3 - Phuc, you have not written enough words to portray a complete analysis of the pie charts. Do not aim...
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|IELTS Writing task 2- Should newcomers follow new country's traditions?
4 - I think your tone is more proper with creative essay, not academic one. And you need to explain deeply...
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|Once children start school, teachers have more influence on their intellectual and social developmen
2 - Hi Bach I find your essay is quite potential about lexicon, but you are lacking detail topic so it...
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|Some people prefer to keep on their job while others change it often without much hesitation
3 - Ngo, it appears to me that you were uncertain about how to approach this type of essay writing. I...
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|I have always been passionate about Computers and Communications - personal statment review
3 - Mena, since you are applying for admission to a masters degree course this is definitely not the personal statement...
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|A leader in the making. Leadership has clearly been the course of my life.
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|Vacation or vacations to school children? Discussion essay.
4 - @Shurui and @Holt, thank you for the pieces of insightful advice! I will put those words into practice....
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|UK graduates and postgraduates participating in four different kinds of jobs after finishing college
3 - @Minh2903 Paraphrase: number of UK graduates and postgraduates in terms of ( work they did /4 different...
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|Plenty of authorities in the world consider economic progress is their first priority. IELTS2
6 - Hi Red Moon Your essay is quite sufficient about both reasoning and structure, but I think when you shift...
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|IELTS Task 2 - Art education in high school?
3 - Tam, your paper has not properly discussed the prompt requirements. This is an agree or disagree essay that you...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: A BAN ON ALL FORMS OF ADVERTISING? SHOULD OR SHOULD NOT?
4 - Ngo, your prompt paraphrase is not proper. I say that because a properly paraphrased prompt will explain the subject,...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: number of girls enrolled per 100 boys in different level of school education
3 - One way to limit your word count is to avoid the repetition of information throughout the essay. You often...
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|How does this look as a gap year essay? Taking a gap year and going to plan a startup or something..
3 - Sujhan, the first thing you have to change with this essay is the tone of disinterest or lack of...
UndergraduatesujhangHolt - 1 day ago
|IELTS writing task 1. Different genres of transport used to commute in a European city.
2 - Hi, thank you for your valuable feedback about my last essay. I'd love to give you some advice on...
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|Ielts task 1: The population and its birth rate and death rates in an area in the UK.
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|KGSP-U - Study plan to Improve English and Korean speaking abilities required for University
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|IELTS Writing Task 1: 'waste table' essay The table below shows the amount of waste production (in m
NEW - The table below shows the amount of waste production (in millions of tonnes) in six different countries over a...
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|IELTS writing task 1. Survey about suitable age for granting certain rights.
4 - I have some suggestion for your essay: Firstly, the overview seems to be missing, you should conclude more...
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|IELTS writing task 1 Description of a town centre and making comparsion after a development plan
3 - Here are some of my suggestion: _You should avoid using " a bunch of...", it might sound informal to...
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|Essay: Nature's Power and Human Desire in the Process of Decay
3 - @Holt Thank you for replying!! This writing may look better than my Task 2 essays because I wrote and...
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|The line graph represents the measure of elder people aged 65 and over in USA, Sweden and Japan
3 - Here are some of my suggestions: _"Overall, all three countries demonstrate an upward trend" instead of "..show increasing...
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|The rate of males and females in 6 age groups in Australia, who were engaged in physical exercises
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|It is better for elder to live with their offsprings rather than in an club for old people
5 - Your essay contained so many grammatical errors as well as weird and unnatural sentences. Therefore I find it really...
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