|QuestBridge National College Match Short Answers
7 - Hi justivy03, thank you for taking the time to review all my answers! However, I think you may have misunderstood some things....
Undergraduateangeli6778angeli6778 - 05:31pm
|Georgia Tech Essay Prompt: Students are often told what classes they should take.
4 - I don't believe GT has any course specifically related to board games, but they have many courses related to game design and...
Undergraduatehnguyen9905aikoashiya - 04:20pm
|Professional sport plays a huge role in the USA. Persuasive Finals Essay (Professional Athletes)
2 - Hi, I have a few suggestions for you:
-The introduction sounds a little repetitive (For two of these sports, drafting a high...
Writing Feedbackjmike710amyg4140 - 04:20pm
|Yonsei Korean Language Institute program will help me understand the entertainment industry better
NEW - Since i'm not that good with english, can you guys please tell me if there is an grammatical error or some clumsiness...
|There is no doubt that everybody wants to be a famous person. Not everything is so great though.
3 - Thanks for the comments Please somebody judge rigorously and give valuable comments as I have an IELTS exam next week....
Writing FeedbackMayank7gMayank7g - 03:42pm
|The proportion of e-commerce in four retail trade in New Zealand between 2003 and 2013
NEW - Online shopping sales in New Zealand The pie charts compare the proportion of e-commerce in four retail trade in New Zealand...
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|Why do you want to study in Japan / What is your purpose to study in Japan ?
2 - Hi, and welcome to the EssayForum or EF in short. We strive to give constructive feedbacks and comments to all members of...
Scholarshiptruongiangichanpants89 - 01:39pm
|Cellphone tracking and security cameras - modern technology spy on people
2 - Hello. The follwoing are several notes on your essay. Hope it help you to polish your writing skill. - ... using...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91ichanpants89 - 01:14pm
|The Survey of Electronic Commerce in Four Main Parts In New Zealand During a Decade
NEW - The pie charts reveal the different data about the percentage of four retail sectors in online sales during a decade in New...
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|TED Summary Task: A new way to grow bone
2 - Hello, Dioba. I have several inputs on your summary; I hope you can follow through: - Molly Steven is a the...
Writing FeedbackDiobaichanpants89 - 12:52pm
|Summary TED: Your Body is My Canvas
5 - Hi, let me land you a hand. 1. Painting is the kind of art that usually painted paints the object on...
Writing FeedbackAlamsyah Ismailhirani03 - 12:36pm
|Curiosity leads to the future. My Chevening study in UK essay
NEW - Choosing the three courses was not a hard job as I already know what are my intentions and what profession I want...
|'I hope to stay back in South Korea' - Study plan for Bachelors degree program. KGSP
NEW - Please I like you to help me correct this study plan. This means alot to me and I need to deliver this...
|The shortage of nurses largely affects the health care system around the world
3 - Hi dils, after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you.
1.Thus, this migration actually leave some problems behind...
Writing FeedbackdilsDioba - 11:49am
|Summary TED Willie Smits: Samboja Lestari
4 - Hi MJT,after reading your summary, i have some suggestions, perhaps usefull for you
1."Samboja Lestari, East Borneo, one of the places...
Writing FeedbackMJTDioba - 11:33am
|CCTV Cameras Are Being Used To Monitor People Activity - Writing Task 2
NEW - Question : Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 -
|Today, the health care system world is threatened by nurse migration
5 - Hi Dioba, ... world are threatens by nurse migration. This migration are caused by vary and various complex problems....
Writing FeedbackDiobaFaridadwi18 - 11:25am
|Significant ramifications to secure human activity by utilizing closed-circuit television (CCTV)
NEW - Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, though cellphone tracking and security cameras)....
Writing FeedbackIforsa -
|TEDX Finding work you love dont Follow your passion
5 - Hi Bams, Here some corrections which i find :
- Most people in the world have a hard time...
Writing FeedbackBAMS14Faridadwi18 - 11:19am
|TED Summary Lighting Up Indonesia's Future
2 - ... Minister of Education which is aim to developing develop our education in Indonesia.
The backgrounds of this program because is...
Writing FeedbackDiobaIforsa - 10:51am
|Online sales in retail sector between 2003 and 2013
NEW - The pie chart presents about the percentage of e-commerce sales which was sold by retailer between 2003 and 2013 in New Zealand....
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|Two major factors that influence happiness among young people: achievement at work and doing hobbies
NEW - The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. ...
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|IELTS - Children start school at the age of 4 or 7 ?
6 - hii.. As children are priceless asset, there they has been a significant ...
The government in the some countries established...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03Fadhilahumar91 - 09:28am
|The advertising of certain food products should be banned
5 - thank you so much for your attendtion ^^...
Writing Feedbackhoangduc241096hoangduc241096 - 09:15am
|The Aspirations of world engineers and joining international UK universities - Chevening 2017
NEW - Chevening 2017 question (STUDYING IN THE UK QUESTION) Hello , I 'm currently working on my essay on chevening scholarship ,...
|Personal statement to support application into university
3 - Hello Choyhar2002
I have some advice to you There are some critical criteria (conj) I concern in searching universities
Graduatechoyhar2002Alamsyah Ismail - 07:12am
|Childhood is not going to be repeated. Should children play for fun or compertition?
4 - Hi Hector, as I move along and read through your essay, I must say that you have a well managed essay. The...
Writing Feedbacksinahectorjustivy03 - 06:41am
|QuestBridge Short Essays for the National College Match
2 - "When the mail, I often find a variety of bills ... " should be "when the mail comes, i often find..." ...
UndergraduateNeferbethtaytay10133 - 06:18am
|The brief life of Circus from ancient world in Romans
6 - Hi Patta, here's what I think on your essay. Two things, first, your writing has improved when it comes to the...
Writing FeedbackPHA2016justivy03 - 06:01am
|How does a girl at a uniform clad school develop an interest in fashion? FIT - business management
NEW - Peer editing on my fashion institute of technology essay? prompt: What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT? Why are you...