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|English Essay on Human Experiences (Merchant of Venice)
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|Peer review needed - Research title "The Role of Developmental Psychology on Children's Personality"
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|Adult education - bar chart and pie chart for ielts writing
2 - Unfortunately, you did not paraphrase enough information from the original presentation. There are still too many cut and paste...
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|Ielts essay on land availability in countryside
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|How will you use your new skills and knowledge to contribute to the development of your home country
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|Erasmus Mundus Scholarship Master degree - Social work with Families and Children
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|Application to study at a Korean university. Personal statement- Arts management. GKS-KGSP 2020
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|Why New Zealand study? For adventure and because of my love for research and development
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|Describe a situation when it was important for you to work with someone you didn't know
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|IELTS task 1 - comparing three types of food prices
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|The amount of China and India's population from 2000 until now and the predicted number up to 2050
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|Solitary Confinement Essay
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|What does diversity mean to you and why do you think society needs diversity? No more than 250 words
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|Australia and France comparison in terms of electricity production by different fuel resources
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|SOP (Study Plan and Goal) - GKS Scholarship in Computer Engineering
2 - The goal of study and study plan must be based on a thesis like presentation of a problem you...
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|Export earnings 2015-2016. IELTS writing task 1
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|Essay on Presidential LEEP scholarship at Clark University
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|Skills and knowledge I hope to gain and how these skills are important to my country's development
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|Animal products no longer needed?
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|MMS:Asset Mamagement at YALE
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|Challenges during the scholarship
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|SOP FOR MPH in Boston (HEALTH POLICY AND MANAGEMENT)
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|To be an asset to the program. SOP for MS in Biomedical Regulatory Affairs
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|Love for ships. Personal Statement for Global Korea Scholarship (GKS) - 2020
2 - Your overall essay is weak. There is a motivation for the course you want to study but absolutely no...
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|NTU - Skin problems / Describe a person who has had an influence on you.
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|KGSP Scholarship 2020 Personal Statement International Relations
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|Some people believe mental strength is more important for success in sports while others think...
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|Tell us about a time when you learned from failure - UofT One Idea Application
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|IELTS TASK 1 - the number of live births per thousand of population per year in China and the USA
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|Review Personal Statement for Data Science Masters
2 - If we are to consider only the relevant parts of your writing that respond to the prompt requirements, we...
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