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|Biological Sciences major for KGSP. Should I pay much attention to the fact I'm an ethnic Korean?
3 - @Holt Thank you for such a detailed feedback. I revised the essay and deleted the useless part. Now it...
ScholarshipYuchimeYuchime - 2 mins ago
|IELTS Essay Task 2 Public spending on arts is a waste of money, agree or not?
NEW - funds on public services only instead of the arts? Title: Some people think that governments should only focus...
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|The table shows the obesity rate in one country over a period of time - TASK 1
2 - Mai, while you wrote over the minimum required words, your essay shows a lack of analysis and proper summary...
Writing Feedbacktrung3110Holt - 2 hours ago
|What shaped you into the person you are today? 2019 college application essay
4 - @cao1km thank you for the feedback, I changed the "if" and "would" part and they still have the same...
UndergraduateMiguelolvera1Miguelolvera1 - 2 hours ago
|Prior to my arrival in Korea, I would take an intensive Korean course; My plan is to receive TOPIK5
2 - @jimjimnie This is a very good study plan for both English and Korean languages. The fact that you knew...
ScholarshipjimjimnieHolt - 2 hours ago
|My tours - review my Personal Profile (about myself) for UBC
3 - Hetav in order to bring this essay down to within the word count, you can remove the reference to...
UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 3 hours ago
|There is a myriad of people who believe that physically harmful sports ought to be forbid - IELTS 2
3 - Khoa. this is a 5 paragraph essay, you only wrote 4 paragraphs. You created a prompt deviation in the...
Writing FeedbackDang KhoaHolt - 3 hours ago
|IELTS Task 1: Pie charts about Oscar winners by genre in 2003 and 2008
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|UBC Personal Profile Answer - 'kindness is a virtue??'?
NEW - what is important to you, and why? Here's my answer to the question "what is important to you,...
|Personal Statement for the Masters in Business Analytics at Michigan State University
GraduateBangBomBangBom - 13 hours ago
|It is an argue whether businesses have to be responsible for their effect on society or not
4 - Nguyen, your essay will fail due to several formatting problems. The first is that you have a redundant opening...
Writing FeedbackSEN2403Holt - 1 day ago
|An impromptu speech without any earlier preparation - my response for a problem
3 - Hetav, there is no need, in my opinion, to change anything in this response statement. It is simple and...
UndergraduateHetav PandyaHolt - 1 day ago
|Request to review personal profile for admission in UBC
UndergraduateHetav PandyaHetav Pandya - 1 day ago
|West Union Building: A metaphor for my life (WHY DUKE ?)
2 - Kartik, it would do your essays well if you stop with the imagery and simply respond to the prompts...
UndergraduatekartiktHolt - 1 day ago
|My concept and experience of leadership and how I can benefit from Chevening scholarship
3 - Daniyal, revise the content of your essay. It has irrelevant and superfluous examples in it that do not really...
Scholarshipahsan_daniyalHolt - 1 day ago
|Solving environmental problems: international organization or local government ?
2 - @TrangDiem11 Your essay has a good coherence, but I would like to suggest that you can include a few...
Writing FeedbackTrangDiem11Hetav Pandya - 1 day ago
|QuestBridge Miscelleneous Short Questions for college application
3 - 1. You are not talking about an achievement and what it says about you. Rather, you are discussing a...
UndergraduateJainam_ShahHolt - 1 day ago
|(IELTS) Purchasing unnecessary - pricey goods by people
NEW - Some people get into debt by buying things they do not need and cannot afford. What are the reason...
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|CHEVENING ESSAY - Quality Leaders
Scholarshipahmdardahmdard - 1 day ago
|[IELTS] Children are better off to spend the time on other activities than reading story books.
2 - Suggestions too much times winder topics "Children will have various topics to share" becomes repetitive finding process-learning process, this...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873Hetav Pandya - 1 day ago
|THE BRILLIANT FOLLY OF A MAGNET DRIVEN CAR - Amherst Supplement Essay
4 - @kartikt Definitely much better. It's more believable in terms of age requirement and the situation presented is something that...
UndergraduatekartiktHolt - 1 day ago
|Networking for individuals with strong professional relationship building skills - Chevening
5 - Aju, there is one rule for all the Chevening essays and that is, "Show don't tell" the reviewer about...
ScholarshipjeffreyjHolt - 1 day ago
|The differences of Education in Vietnam
3 - Phuong, your essay is very confusing to read. It feels like you are just picking up the discussion points...
Writing FeedbackpphanhhHolt - 1 day ago
|Music cannot be prioritized by its importance - each genre has its own purpose
3 - Daniella, although you were given a detailed review of your work above, the person who gave you the advice...
Writing FeedbackDanila312Holt - 1 day ago
|Motivation Letter for Scholarship by DAAD Integrated Urbanism and Sustainable Design
2 - hi ariel.. i just read your letter of motivation and compared it to the daad guidelines. they require you...
Scholarshiparielpvasconceloahsan_daniyal - 2 days ago
|Post-Career plan to strengthen ties between my country and the UK
Scholarshipterminal28terminal28 - 2 days ago
|I do my best to develop my network and communication skills for my professional career
6 - I can definitely relate to your feelings about writing these essays. Initially I had moments of "ups and downs"...
ScholarshipKing Ahmosterminal28 - 2 days ago
|Young people admire sports stars though they do not set a good example. This is negative or positive
5 - You mentioned only the drawback of athletes which is unfair. Secondly, in your last paragraph you have written "a...
Writing Feedbackvybeo23anakosola - 2 days ago
|The human have a negative effect on our planet. By harming Earth, we put our lives in danger.
5 - Okay, thanks....
Writing Feedbackanakosolaanakosola - 2 days ago
|Department of Energy Resources Engineering - KGSP/scholarship. Personal Statement
Scholarshipiamrmkjeffreyj - 2 days ago