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3 - Hi Lincoln..
These are my thoughts. Actually, this is good, but I offer you a few improvements.
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Thank for your advice. I will fix it. Maybe this essay is totally my point of view...
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2 - However, other people
but it also reduces crime and illiteracy.
Hospitals with high technology will have better treatments which can help...
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3 - Dear Holt
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year by year....
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|There's a good effect of having business suit but the value of performance in job is most important
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(in every they do work activities) => in everything they do
(for instance, a...
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|Crime is an old phenomenon. Its rate has been growing significantly now-a-days.
2 - this instead of that in 2nd sentence
nowadays instead of now-a-days
These reasons will be discused to find out ......
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|How satisfied are you with your live? and What would make you happinest?
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Here some suggestions for your writing
The graph provide shows information about stage where they feel satisfied...
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|The unemployment and careless of society have impact on the rise of the crime level
3 - good night brother
let me help you to correct this good article... the crime activities are increasing and discuss (what...
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