|Writing by a ESL student-Academic Essay on Education (*Has to do with college application! :) )
NEW - Hi I'm a non-native English speaker who is writing essays for college application. My writing can be sloppy and lack in flavor...
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|"Literature takes us to a better place, a different place." (Archetypal Theory)
4 - Merged: Literature takes us to a different, better place, and connects to our life's.(Archetypal Theory) Formal research essay, therefore it...
Book ReportsLaraibLaraib - 12:40pm
|The Internet provides us many valuable things but also cause some problems; IELTS task
NEW - Could you comments on the structure? reminds me of the unprecise expression sentence.This is my first day to use this website, I...
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|What is the greatest love story of all? The speech.
2 - Personally, i do suppose that you need to specify what you are going to write about as your theme's speech, requiring the...
Essaysserendipityyyygiangnt248 - 10:03am
|[ielts Task 2] Increasing global demand of oil and gas, should continue explore?
4 - Hi, your essay's ideas are quite good. However, i recommend that you should check carefully the meaning and the usage of each...
Writing Feedbackyon959giangnt248 - 09:48am
|IELTS Task 1 essay practice - Population Distribution in two different countries, two different year
4 - Both forecast and forecasted are correct.
I think it is more appropriate to use either elderly people or simply elders
Writing FeedbackfatmajannaDaniel1998 - 07:59am
|IELTS Academic Writing task 2 - The Person Who Should Teach Children
5 - Fahra, welcome to EssayForum :) I am glad to see there are many new members in this forum recently. However, you need...
Writing FeedbackRadhiyahFahraichanpants89 - 06:42am
|Fresh tea leaves picking is the first step of manufacturing black tea; IELTS diagram
NEW - Two different methods of manufacturing black tea are depicted in the diagrams. The two of these processes are traditional and modern ways....
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|IELTS; To read or not to read: That is a question - can we learn that way about a foreign country?
3 - but this approach is really suitable for everyone : However is this the best way for...
yet for someone who unfamiliar with...
Writing FeedbackVictoria1015madmoiselle - 06:28am
|IELTS: VIOLENCE SHOWN ON TV AND IN THE CINEMA MIGHT EXPLAIN YOUNG PEOPLE'S VIOLENT BEHAVIOUR
4 - ... this unpleasant phenomenon ought to be taken so that to reduce the amount of violence faced by our society.
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998giangnt248 - 03:48am
|IELTS: WHETHER TRAVELLING AND WORKING ABROAD ARE THE ONLY REASONS TO LEARN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE OR NOT
3 - Hi, Daniel, Here is my comments: Nevertheless, some people claim that learning a foreign language is a good (you may...
Writing FeedbackDaniel1998yon959 - Yesterday
|It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm the friendship. Do you agree?
4 - Hi, Payal, I think you did not directly answer the question properly (maybe I am wrong). The question is asking how...
Writing Feedbackpayal1982yon959 - Yesterday
|We can't affirm that the living certain place is better.
4 - Dear Hien,
I think that comments and remarks above have mostly summed up the changes and enhancements, you need to apply...
Writing FeedbackhohienSunrise011 - Yesterday
|Study on English-Chinese Translation of JANE EYRE Based on Juliane House's TQA Model
2 - ... huge impact in translation history, they've wentgone through a long period to give anarelatively objective system for translation studies. ... ...
Research PapersSWMGalaxyVictoria1015 - Yesterday
|GRE Argument:"WWAC radio station..."
2 - ... likely to choose the Internet rather than the radio station to meet their needs.
... radio station which can supply a...
Writing FeedbacksunshinelybVictoria1015 - Yesterday
|ielts- should we provide children in rural communities with more schools or computers
5 - Thank you so much justivy03. Your feedbacks help me a lot. I will put more effort into writing....
Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99huynhngocminh99 - Yesterday
|Transfer Application to University of Michigan: What unique qualities attract you to this school?
4 - Thanks for reviewing it. It was a little unfinished... Just stuck in a vicious circle of aggravation. Let me know if...
Undergraduatejessawjessaw - Jul 22, 2016
|Low GPA - Transfer Admission to Borough of Manhattan Community College
3 - @justivy03 thank you so much! Those small changes make a big difference, especially on the closing. Changes made. Thank you again....
LettersTinamaciasTinamacias - Jul 22, 2016
|First hand smokers must not be allowed to smoke in public places. I agree with that statement
NEW - Smoking should be banned in public places The people, who smoke, are increasing/growing day by day through the worldwide/ all over...
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|What can you gain from learning cultures? What aspect of french history and culture interests you?
2 - Hi Sean, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that this is just the start of a great...
Scholarshipsnarkalertjustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|The causes of less productive agricultural land degradation during the 1990s in 3 continents
3 - Hi Naomi, below are my thoughts on your essay. - wasis the main reason
- to of land degradation
Writing FeedbackTitus14justivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|Disillusionment about the nature of human Power in King Lear and Tempest
3 - Hi Debayan, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that this is just the start of a great...
EssaysLitstudebajustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|Discuss The Effects of Unplanned Urban Expansion
5 - Hi Emin, thank you for considering our suggestion and remarks here on EF, we definitely strive to provide you with the most...
Writing Feedbackeminhaqijustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|In a modern world people always face the dilemma to own a car. Perspective for the next 20 years.
3 - Hi Khaleed, I can see that you received a comprehensive feedback from one of our EF contributors and I hope you follow...
Writing Feedbackkhaleddjustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
|IELTS: The qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. Give causes and measures.
4 - hi Keely, on reading your essay, I found that you have done quite nice job and used a good range of vocabulary....
Writing Feedbackkantyjanghuynhngocminh99 - Jul 22, 2016
|IELTS: People live in small family units rather than big family groups. Is it positive or negative?
6 - First of all, I feel confused about what the topic for this essay is since you show two topic in different styles...
Writing Feedbackkantyjangnguyendinhtuong - Jul 22, 2016
|Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.
4 - Hi Smith, first of all, your essay is very relevant to todays world. You made sure that the information you gathered are...
Writing Feedbacktwidjustivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.
3 - Hi Keely, as I read along, I notice the trend of your essay, you seem to repeat words that you have used...
Writing Feedbackkantyjangjustivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|TOEFL: a large number of celebrities are not equipped with skills necessary for a politician
3 - Hi Natasha, as I read through your essay, I must say that you are able to convey your message with clarity. I...
Writing Feedbacknatasha_139justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|Payment Disparity in Sports: Sexist or Economic
3 - Hi Julian, indeed WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family. We hope that this is just the start of this great partnership. Here...
Writing Feedbackcrzydude42justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016