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NEW - Please offer advice and criticism, not just grammatical error, should I scrap this? Do you feel like it fully...
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|Personal Statement for university International Relations Program
4 - Very detailed and bold, I liked how you integrate your personal achievements. However, (other than your first paragraph) the...
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|Composition 101 Informative Essay (no outside sources allowed - writing about stress management)
NEW - Preface: I decided to write about informing others on stress management, due to the amount that I feel...
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|"Father's business" - chevening scholorship review
3 - Dear Holt, Thank you for your kind suggestions, of course i will make corrections on thoes points you...
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|Essay about Leadership and influence for Chevening - Brasilian student
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|Academic goals essay, below 250 words briefly explain why you have chosen XYZ University and goals
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|Fresh off the Boat and Me - US College Essay (Harvard)
3 - Thank you for the feedback! The idea was supposed to be how my background inspired a passion/ talent which...
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|University environment is a representation of our world.
9 - Thank you so very much for clarifying that for me. I just wanted to be "safe" rather than "sorry"...
Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018terminal28 - 7 hours ago
|Recruiter for overseas agencies - Chevening Network
5 - thank you dear, please i rephase it can you check? Being a recruiter for overseas agencies for more than...
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|Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others ...
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|'I can't take it anymore I want to quit!' Common App Essay for University of Michigan
2 - Hannah, the personal growth in this essay is almost an afterthought in the discussion. When you read the essay,...
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|A scenario in which you have needed to show leadership, how you approach this and the outcomes of it
5 - Henry, regardless of whether it is for Chevening or Mastercard, you cannot use such academic based references as the...
Scholarshiphenry15 - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago
|An impact (college application); Cite any cases in which you thought and/or made attempts in ways...
2 - Mohammed, this is a very interesting presentation that you should try to further develop by indicating how old you...
ScholarshipMoody - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago
|A professional baseball player
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|Tax awareness and law clinic - CHEVENING ESSAY ON LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE
5 - Oluwasikemi , you can't just keep listing your leadership and influencing activities in this manner. While I can see...
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|I'm a Russian journalist who is applying for Chevening Scholarship this year
Scholarshiplerour - 1 day agoHolt - 10 hours ago
|My commitment to Academics - Chevening Networking
3 - Tosin, this essay does not signify a currently working network on your part. While I understand that you could...
ScholarshipSolace - 1 day agoHolt - 11 hours ago
|I am the master of my fate and I am the captain of my soul. Business Analytics Master SOP
3 - Komal, since you have indicated 2 highly different, unrelated career paths in this essay, you must find a way...
Graduatekomziiie - 2 days agoHolt - 11 hours ago
|AASSupporting Statements. How did you choose your proposed Course and Inst. M. Accounting ANU
4 - Thanks for the inpust komziee and Holt @Holt, yes Holt, I'd definitely revise my essay. My problem is...
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|Nha Trang - DESCRIBE A WELL-KNOWN DESTINATION YOU HAVE VISITED
5 - @lahoaithu I don't really find this essay interesting in a creative manner. You are just narrating your experience there,...
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|The desire to surround myself with wise people made had impact on my leadership and influence skills
3 - Awab, all of these information can be summed up into your character as a leader within one paragraph. The...
ScholarshipAwab - 1 day agoHolt - 13 hours ago
|Contributing to Community - MIT Supplemental Essay
NEW - I decided to volunteer at the hospital At MIT, we bring people together to better the lives of...
Undergraduatejjw1711 - 15 hours ago -
|Sports can be bridge to peace and understanding between countries and societes
2 - Tran, you have a good prompt paraphrase but your response to the question is missing. What is your measured...
Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - 1 day agoHolt - 16 hours ago
|Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship
2 - Minh, your motivation letter is too long and is not really qualified as a motivational letter because you wrote...
Scholarshipminhkstn - 2 days agoHolt - 17 hours ago
|God help Zimbabwe - help with my chevening leadershing and influence essay
7 - @Holt below is a revised version of my story Having kicked off my early childhood in the rural...
Scholarshipmillion talent - Oct 10, 2018million talent - 17 hours ago
|Living with your parents, the advantages
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|Leadership means that you keep learning all your life, gain experience and pass it to others
5 - @Holt appreciate your new revision of my essay answer (sure, but the thread must be made Urgent first)....
Scholarshipzaidon - 1 day agozaidon - 19 hours ago
|Violent Video games affect children by psychologically desensitizing them, also trigger aggression
NEW - Should Violent Video Game be Banned? In 1971 Pong, the first Video Game was released 47 years ago...
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|Career Plan for Development Issues - Chevening Essay
NEW - Dear Ms Mary Rose @Holt I would love to hear your opinion regarding my essay, Thanks a lot :)...
ScholarshipAnanta - 1 day ago -
|Why I want to study my courses in the UK?
2 - So.......what are the three courses and three universities that you have selected for your studies in the UK?...
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