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Beside that there is person comment about their appearance==>Beside that there is A person GIVING comment...
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I have some corrections for youIn the present, the vast fields were gradually...
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I have some corrections for youIn my view, large number of travellers who...
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|Effects of modern forms of communication such as email and messaging
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I have some corrections for youNowadays, by using social website, we easily contact...
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|"What does not destroy me makes me stronger" - Princeton Supplement prompt 5
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|My village and its customs that changed my life!
8 - Thank you very much Holt !!!
..I have tried to edit this essay Please check it !!
Edited version..NOV 1... BACKGROUND...
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NEW - Kaudena, a village located at the south of Nepal, is the place where my mother was married at the...
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You talked about the fact that you want to...
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|Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?
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