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' I am looking for a change of pace' - Why University of Chicago? (Be brutally honest)

2 - Your motivation seems quite clear in the essay, which is good! I think you have to check commas as part of grammer....

UndergraduatealengSushmitha - 07:10am
Summary: The law of 33% (Tai Lopez)

2 - Hi Bung Ilham. Let me help you to finalize your summary. Please, make you sure to meet my notes. Each person...

Writing Feedbackbung ilhamakbarmappiare - 06:50am
'Movies like Iron man and Avengers have inspired me' - why mechanical engineering as my major?

2 - Hi Jaamin Patel. Welcome to Essay Forum. Fortunately, you have been the right medium to finalize your writing. Please, let me help...

UndergraduateJaZZyCooLakbarmappiare - 06:37am
'Education is priceless asset.' People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons

NEW - Education is priceless asset. People will get convenience in looking for a job since some of employers offer a place in their...

Writing FeedbackRezaAnandatama17 -
One and multiple idea paragraph. IELTS writing task 2: making body paragraph

2 - i would like to highlight your one idea paragraph: This is because we are able to do many things..... it has...

Writing Feedbackazmi23ekalamarsyari11 - 04:44am
Tell us about your short term and long term goals and your plans to achieve them - ISB YLP essay

3 - I have always been more motivated in ato do tasks which has havea direct impact on society My roleexperience as a...

GraduateSushmithaekalamarsyari11 - 04:29am
IELTS TASK 1 - The map illustrates an overview of before and after the construction

2 - The map illustrates an overview of ... i prefer to write: The map illustrates two circumstance of an island: before and after...

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselleekalamarsyari11 - 04:18am
It Is Easy to be Healthy - but not for everyone

3 - ... hard to do while others believes it is easy, provided if they really intend ... Another reason is modern technology makes...

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48ekalamarsyari11 - 04:03am
IELTS TASK 3: MAKING CONCLUSION AND BODY PARAGRAPH

2 - Hi Hary, I would like to focus only on number 1, 2, and 3 of this thread. Here's my analysis towards...

Writing FeedbackHary01ichanpants89 - 02:36am
Task 2 : The Way To Have Healthy Lifestyle essay

3 - Hi Miss Sofy. I have read your writing closely. Actually, I need the question of yours in order to give me the...

Writing FeedbackIforsaakbarmappiare - 01:58am
Modern technology and its global impact on human. Writing body paragraph.

2 - Taking cities in the U.S. as for example the exacerbation of pristine earth pristine there is a growing concern (...) has...

Writing Feedbackjomul01madmoiselle - 01:52am
Benefits and drawbacks of modern technology. Writing Body Paragraph IELTS Writing Task 2.

3 - Hi Selvi. These are my corrections for your writing ... since the introduction of THE Internet which supportS sophisticated...

Writing FeedbackPermata992akbarmappiare - 12:50am
Overall, the most Bulgarians who tend to leave their country finished education at secondary level

2 - ... planning to leave Bulgaria based on levelS of education between 2002 and 2008. IN THREE SEPARATED YEARS; 2002, 2006, AND 2008....

Writing Feedbackashelarisa48akbarmappiare - 12:49am
Why Uchicago essay - I'm not sure about it. Tear it apart...

2 - Dear Molly, Welcome to the Essay Forum family. I am happy to be working with you today on this important essay....

UndergraduatemchammerJuanSebastianR - Yesterday
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 CONCLUSION PART - sincere answers for different issues topics

2 - ... worldwide trade will devastate the economy of local products. It is therefore, the goverment should lunch a campaign throught citizens to...

Writing FeedbackBeauty17jomul01 - Yesterday
Both parents and school should obligate to keep the children fit.

3 - hi! i give you some corrections and a suggestion. hope it would be helpful Nowadays, an unhealthy way of life has...

Writing Feedbackhailun11azmi23 - Yesterday
Healthy lifestyle is difficult to have in modern world, but simple efforts can make our life better

2 - In my opinion, general ("in general" or "generally" at the end of sentence, if what you mean is people in general) people...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11jomul01 - Yesterday
The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the production stages of silk cloth

3 - hi! there are some suggestions and corrections of mine. hope it will be helpful ... explain about what a processes...

Writing Feedbackhailun11azmi23 - Yesterday
Should parents give their children any social knowledge? Or they will get it just in school?

2 - Hay alfadmishal2, may this can help you ;) ... responsible to give their kids children (children is plural from child. Kids...

Writing Feedbackalfadmishal20Hary01 - Yesterday
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 : CONCLUSION for global trade, working children and community service

2 - Hallo riaan.. i will give you suggestions especially about content of your conclusions. I guess for questions no 1 and 2 you...

Writing Feedbackrian31Beauty17 - Yesterday
Summary - Al-Gore New thinking on the climate crisis

4 - hay room mate i wanna to try give you some suggestion i hope it works please use note about...

Writing FeedbackDipa19rian31 - Yesterday
Sumary of Hiking the Inca Trail in The Andes Mountains

6 - hai aris there are several suggestions from me i hope it help you 1. check your vocabulary 2. arrange...

Writing FeedbackAris05rian31 - Yesterday
Bulgarians' who planned to come to other country - their education level has been evaluated

3 - In 2002 there was a peak for[in]the percentage of Bulgarians...

Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11twid - Yesterday
People believe that the technology has driven them to face great development in their daily routine

3 - Hi Indrii, this is my suggestion has changed rapidly and gives a great impact for people live. "has changed" (using...

Writing Feedbackibal28Dipa19 - Yesterday
'study hard and nourish your body' - healthy food for children at school (writing task 2)

3 - mea (pay attention for repetition, you can use diet or nourishment) becomes one of the crucial (...) study hard and also...

Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08Iforsa - Yesterday
Cocoon can produce 300 - 900 metres of thread. Life cycle Of silkworms / steps to produce silk cloth

3 - when moth lays downs eggs in mulberry leaf. larva consumes eats mulberry leaf Larva makes creates silk thread it...

Writing FeedbackIforsaekalamarsyari11 - Yesterday
Fluorescent jellyfish proteins light up unconventional laser

5 - and it posted published in newscience.com Laser is used by many sector sectors in the world Traditional laser is...

Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91Iforsa - Yesterday
'Find time for yourself' - The Way To Have Healthy Lifestyle essay - Task 2

6 - ... people do not have a lot of times ... ... although do not have enough times to do it. ...

Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18ashelarisa48 - Yesterday
Metamorphosis of Silkworm and Process of Producing Silk Cloth

3 - silkworm producing eggs in mulberry leaf =>It does not produce eggs in mulberry leaf, it just lays its eggs there instead. ...

Writing Feedbackhirani03ekalamarsyari11 - Yesterday
In many countries of the world few people earn extremely high salary

7 - Hello sinchana, nice to see you in this essay forum :) Here is my correction for you. ... con's of this...

Writing Feedbacksinchanaashelarisa48 - Yesterday