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|IELTS writing task 1 on maps / hydroelectric dam
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|Statement of Purpose for MSc in Data Science (Marketing Analysis)
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|"Parents should be free to decide whether or not to vaccine their babies" ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY
3 - @freshjul287 I suggest that you review usage of articles and other grammar-related words. You should as well look into...
Writing Feedbackfreshjul287 - 19 hours agoMaria - 6 hours ago
|ielts task 2: discuss both views of choosing subjects at university
3 - Hi @nhuxuan, here are some points in your essay that should be improved. 1. In the body paragraphs,...
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|''Help me with my process: How bricks are produced''
3 - @dungpharma97 I suggest looking into finding better transitions for your essay. Avoid straining your sentences by extending unnecessarily the...
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|One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you
2 - I appreciate how straightforward your letter is. There are a couple of technical suggestions that I would like you...
LettersLoloMahmoud - 12 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago
|How this particular study can help me achieve my career goals
2 - I suggest mentioning more than what you have provided here. A well-thought out essay could help boost your applications....
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|Free University International master - physics
2 - On a technical level, I suggest three things: paraphrasing some longer sentences to shorten them, reviewing usage of capitalization,...
Graduatesunjhi03 - 14 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago
|[IELTS] Money on protecting animals vs human well-being
3 - @anhpnguyen To create a more natural flow in your essay, I suggest rephrasing some of your lines. Remember that...
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|IELTS task 2: more young people in society - evaluation of this trend
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|Letter of Motivation - MSc Economics Universitat Hamburg
4 - General: I revised the first four paragraphs. Revision: I am a 23-year-old Indonesian who graduated from the...
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|Is Medical radiation safe?
2 - Bframirez, On a technical level, I suggest that you review the usage of punctuation. There were a few sentences...
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|Tofel writing part 2--whether children nowadays are more difficult to educate that in previous times
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|MOTIVATIONAL LETTER - EXCHANGE PROGRAM (Leuven KU)
2 - Akurvensc, Your essay already has sufficient information regarding your personal background. It is wise that you mentioned your motivation...
Lettersakurvensc - 1 day agoMaria - 1 day ago
|[IELTS TASK 2] Longer Prison Sentences And Other Solutions. Best way to reduce crime rate
2 - In paragraph two, give at least two examples of criminals who were converted into model citizens and cite that...
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|Writing task 1 - layouts of a university's sports center
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|IELTS Writing task 2: Discuss about advantages and disadvantages of private medical services.
4 - You must make the thread Urgent for a new review from a Contributor, thank you. First Paragraph (Introduction):...
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|Build Indonesia's Potential Through Border Economic Potential
3 - Darkknight1995, I suggest that you try shortening your sentences to make your thoughts more comprehensible. While lengthy sentences...
Scholarshipdarkknight1995 - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago
|Essay topic: Developments in the field of artificial intelligence - a positive impact for the future
2 - In paragraph one - some individuals... A.I. ....I would argue that the computer can be wiser than humans. ...
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|"Astana Garden School" program - Motivation Letter for Scholarship
2 - In paragraph one change crucial part of to personal asset to. Also spell out the numbers versus using them...
Lettersanuarine - 2 days agoConstance - 2 days ago
|Scholarship essay for Opportunity Fund Program by Usef...any suggestions ?
2 - NirajP, I admire how you started your essay by telling your personal story. Generally speaking, the flow of...
ScholarshipNirajP - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago
|When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.
2 - Your manner of writing is good. A lot of readers would appreciate how straightforward you are when it comes...
Writing Feedbackthanhphuong02 - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago
|IELTS: Future science will make human almost immortal. Is that good?
2 - Coke, The direction of your essay is sufficient. I simply suggest extending the rationale of your explanations. For...
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|Mental Illnesses and The Causes
2 - Tyson, While your essay is sufficient in terms of expounding details, you should be wary of structuring your...
Research PapersWildmanty - Mar 23, 2019Maria - 2 days ago
|IELTS_TASK 2: advantage and disadvantage of shopping online.
Writing FeedbackTUYET PHAM - Mar 23, 2019coke - 2 days ago
|Ielt writing task 1 The table below shows key data on the demographics of 4 different countries
2 - Gio1999pt, On a technical level, I would suggest looking into studying more about proper punctuation, subject-verb agreements, and...
Writing Feedbackgio1999pt - Mar 17, 2019Maria - Mar 22, 2019
|IELTS Task 2 - Causes and Solutions of Obesity and decreasing Health
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|Goal of study and study plan for Korean university application
3 - Itha20, Looking through your essay, I think it's already better than a lot of others I have personally...
Graduateitha20 - Mar 21, 2019Maria - Mar 22, 2019
|Inventing computers as one of the most crucial human's achievements for the last hundred years
2 - In paragraph one should be humans have contributed for the last hundred years or if you want to say...
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|IELTS Task 2: The benefits of multigenerational workplace
2 - Just a few questions that when answered will strengthen what has been written. What do you mean by "While...
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