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Over the past few decades, the world has been morphing into the era of globalisation

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The bar chart shows the number of cars per 1000 people in 5 European countries in 3 years.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2: The responsibility to solve environmental problems.

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Young people work or take long journeys between graduating from high school and entering tertiary

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Choosing university or a job straight after school?

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Media focus far too much on the personal lives and relationships of different celebrities

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[ IELTS ] The line graph illustrates the number of cars that were owned by households in Britain

2 - The writer has a tendency to use ven on sentences for his presentations. Though this makes it easier to...

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The graph details the proportion of Internet users in three different nations from 1999 to 2009

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The percentage of people aged 65 and over in 3 distinctive nations during 100 years period - IELTS 1

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Do you agree that the problems (what forms do they take?) outweigh the benefits of mobile phones?

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Electrical equipment changes in ownership and the amount of time expended on doing household chores

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Problems & Solutions of a growing gap between technical skills of younger people and those over 50

2 - Technical skills are only related to profession /work related abilities. The writers first reasoning paragraph is totally unrelated to...

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Just thirty-six percent of women own small businesses. Personal statement KGSP undergraduate

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The diagrams illustrate how the village of Stokeford had changed over an 80-year period, from 1930

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Wheat Exports from 1985 to 1990 (in million tonnes)

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Percentage of Internet users in three countries USA, Canada and Mexico during the period 1999-2009

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Ielts Writing Task 2: Whether people should possess a home or rent one

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The amount of money which was earned by three different products over three years, starting in 2000

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Is it important for people to be concerned about the way they look? What are the consequences?

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The debate about giving rewards to exceptional students or well-advanced ones

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The line graph illustrates both fossil fuel energy and clean energy consumption in the USA

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International relation master's degree: one step closer to be a diplomat

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The comparison of water usage in different regions: San Diego, California, and the rest of the world

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IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line chart about senior citizens aged 65 and above in three countries

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IELTS TASK 1: LINE GRAPH - the number of cars registered for the first time by fuel type

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Some people spend more time reading books while others prefer to watch television.

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In many countries around the world, life expectancy is increasing. Discuss advantages and drawbacks

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IELTS WRITING - TASK 2 - INVENTION OF COMPUTER

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade- labelled coffe and bananas in 1999

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[IELTS] Writing Task 1: The chart illustrates consumption of three kinds of fast food by teenagers

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