|'A step toward future' <<< My study plan for KGSP (Uni Track)
4 - Nic, in all honesty, the only part of this essay that actually serves as the proper basis for your...
ScholarshipNitivatHolt - 04:03am
|The things that I consider before choosing the university of my future study. Australia Scholarship
6 - As I reviewed this essay, something struck me. It is the fact that you have chosen two universities but...
Scholarshipd2nyHolt - 03:57am
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6 - Try to connect the university offerings with your own interests and goals for your education. Why this university in...
Scholarshipnababa19Holt - 03:52am
|Health, education, nutrition. Study & Future Plans Abroad Essay
3 - Ana, these are supposed to be written as 2 separate essays composed of one page each. The study plan...
Graduatepb1013Holt - 03:25am
|For the majority of my life, I underestimated the importance of physical health. Issue of Importance
3 - Morgan, the essay is really very prompt responsive on a personal level. The only problem is that it tends...
UndergraduateMorgannhHolt - 03:15am
|Self introduction for Master degree in different field from undergraduate degree.
NEW - Hi, Please help to read my letter and comment frankly. Thanks Letter of Self-Introduction When I was...
|Persevering my dream. Self Introduction Letter for Graduate School.
3 - Ana, there is entirely too much focus on your academic studies. I am not sure if you missed it...
Graduatepb1013Holt - 03:01am
|STATE OF THE NATION - Poetry Competition
3 - Patience, you have not written a poem, you have written an essay and formatted it to look like a...
PoetryPeaches07Holt - 02:29am
|350 words|Personal Statement for MS in Entrepreneurship and Innovation of USC
3 - Li, the opening statement is really confusing. It seems like you are trying to address 2 or 3 topics...
GraduateIanthexxHolt - 02:16am
|Photography and computers were my fields of interest since my childhood. Self Introduction KGSP 2017
17 - No need to thank me. I am always here to help the students find their way. Applying for KGSP...
ScholarshipaliabidHolt - 01:28am
|IELTS - the grievance note about the noise from your flat
3 - Hello Jaya Krishna, The content is good, I just would like to suggest you to change some sentences: ...
Writing Feedbackjaikrishnapb1013 - Yesterday
|Children's education punish or award - ielts task 2
2 - I'm confused a bit since both sides don't seem directly disagreeing with each other, and the word qualified citizen...
Writing FeedbackFireworkNitivat - Yesterday
|The tendency that youth graduates find it difficult to find a job nowadays
6 - Tram, I am not going to score you on this essay for now. The reason that I will not...
Writing Feedbacktramnguyen123456Holt - Yesterday
|What really blew my mind was electricity. Waterloo "Engineering" essay
7 - Thanks a lot! :D...
UndergraduateEiad21Eiad21 - Yesterday
|MY IELTS PRACTICE ESSAY ON THE "EXTINCTION" OF SEVERAL LANGUAGES
4 - Pham, the essay that you developed as a response to the prompt has some good and not so good...
Writing FeedbackkalynHolt - Yesterday
|KGSP 2017 - Letter of Self Introduction - One step closer to my dreams
7 - @Holt Thank you Holt for you your guidance and patience with me. I will now close this thread...
Scholarshipgckigcki - Yesterday
|I was born in a beautiful, landlocked country - Botswana. SELF INTRODUCTION FOR THE KGSP
8 - If that is how the internship works in your country, then you have to explain that to the reviewer...
Scholarshipdebby89Holt - Yesterday
|Study Plan - KGSP scholarship 2017 - Master Degree in Plastic Surgery
6 - Ok, then I will proofread it once again just in case I spot more mistakes! Thank you so much...
ScholarshipFabFab - Yesterday
|Current research of your interest and a professor-mentor.
3 - @Holt First of all, thank you for your suggestion. It helps me a lot in drafting my Study Plan...
EssaysNitivatNitivat - Yesterday
|Culture is something that I am really interested in. KGSP - Goal of study and Study plan
2 - Pinky, this is not a proper goal of study and study plan for your application. A properly developed goal...
Scholarshipcj24Holt - Yesterday
|A journey in reaching my future goal - Essay for Korean Scholarship
6 - Okay, the best thing that we can do is refer to your tutoring work as the motivating factor behind...
ScholarshiprsydndHolt - Yesterday
|IELTS task 1 - Reasons for study and the amount of employer support.
6 - dear @yennhihoang2712, I just want to give a comment about your essay :) overview is important and you...
Writing Feedbackyennhihoang2712nuradiapuspa - Yesterday
|IELTS Task 1: The main features of Global Water Usage in Brazil and Congo
4 - @Holt @ainunazwaria Thank you for your comments and advices. Really helpful :)...
Writing Feedbacknuradiapuspanuradiapuspa - Yesterday
|'I am a positive person' KGSP Application Letter of Self-Introduction: Assistance for Proofreading
8 - Kenneth, there is just one more bit of information that you have to add to this letter in order...
ScholarshipBeautifulDayHolt - Yesterday
|INFORMATION ABOUT COMMUTING PATTERN IN HOUSTON, TEXAS AND CO2 EMMISSIONS
3 - As an additional feedback, reaching 6 or above is quite difficult isn't it? Even though you have written as...
Writing Feedbackainunazwariaichanpants89 - Yesterday
|Food Production - is it important to know how our meal is produced? Or the taste only matters.
3 - Aziz, it seems that you somehow understood the prompt but failed to properly discuss the requirements. The paraphrasing of...
Writing FeedbackAziz_GibranHolt - Yesterday
|Study Plan; KGSP 2017 - Masters in Art History; to learn the language and achieve a high TOPIK score
5 - @Holt Thank you so much. I will work on my study plan and will pay attention to what you...
Scholarshipbysunrisebysunrise - Yesterday
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Wind Turbine placement and principle of operation (diagram)
3 - @Holt. thank for you comment and suggestion. The diagram actually just one. I forget to delete the first one...
Writing FeedbackAziz_GibranAziz_Gibran - Yesterday
|Coffee vs. Tea for the English - an attempt for summing-up the text into one sentence
6 - Really appreciate your excellent sample and bearing my poor writing Mary:) I will practice with the test set, and...
Lettersfoyuliufoyuliu - Yesterday
|We want to read about what makes you special. Tell us something about yourself
5 - Hi @vcerpasalas! In my opinion, there we some errors with the use of comma. Also, please observe proper...
Undergraduatevcerpasalasgcki - Feb 22, 2017