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|SOP for MSc Program at TU Delft
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|Motivation Letter for Masters in E PiCo under EM Scholarship
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|Are felons worth less to society
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|LETTER OF INTENT FOR MSc. Computational Social Science
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|Leading International Vaccinology Education (LIVE) Personal Statement Scholarship Essay
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|"You're such a mom" - Yours and others opinion about yourself
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|People often do not interact with neighbors and this is harming communities. Causes and solutions?
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|IELTS TASK 2: FOR TODAY'S WORLD, WHICH TYPE OF EDUCATION IS APPROPRIATE, GENERAL OR SPECIALIZED?
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|Accepting bad circumstances, or trying to deal with them and develop for the better?
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|Theme: Health and Fitness
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|The graph below presents the number of people who graduated from university rate
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|The youth show their propensity for fashion items and technological devices nowadays
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|Festival, describe Tet holiday
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|Undergraduate Common App Essay - "Mirror-crafter"
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|IELTS Writing Task 2: university subjects should be useful, and other should be banned
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|"Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define?
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|Government funding for the art is a waste and that money could be better funded in other fields
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|Topic C- If you were given a ticket to go absolutely anywhere where would you go?
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|Some people believe that the government should spend money on exploring the solar system - IELTS 2
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|Tell us your biggest fear (this is the prompt). To being bullied
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|A problem and/or an unfamiliar situation essay - delegating tasks to solve long line issue
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|IELTS- Task 2: Building higher houses or lower but wider ones, which one is the better solution?
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