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Sports can be bridge to peace and understanding between countries and societes

2 - Tran, you have a good prompt paraphrase but your response to the question is missing. What is your measured...

Writing Feedbacktrvaanh - 21 hours agoHolt - 19 mins ago

Motivation Letter for Image Processing and Computer Vision Erasmus Mundus Scholarship

2 - Minh, your motivation letter is too long and is not really qualified as a motivational letter because you wrote...

Scholarshipminhkstn - 1 day agoHolt - 42 mins ago

God help Zimbabwe - help with my chevening leadershing and influence essay

7 - @Holt below is a revised version of my story Having kicked off my early childhood in the rural...

Scholarshipmillion talent - Oct 10, 2018million talent - 1 hour ago

Living with your parents, the advantages

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Leadership means that you keep learning all your life, gain experience and pass it to others

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Scholarshipzaidon - 1 day agozaidon - 2 hours ago

Common App Essay for University of Michigan realization that sparked personal growth

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Tax awareness and law clinic - CHEVENING ESSAY ON LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE

5 - @Duzaho Thank You, Will work on that...

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Should Violent Video Game be Banned?

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University environment is a representation of our world.

7 - Can someone please help me to clarify the following information about course selection with regards to my course selection?...

Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 18, 2018terminal28 - 6 hours ago

An impact (college application)

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I'm a Russian journalist who is applying for Chevening Scholarship this year

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Scholarshiplerour - 10 hours agolerour - 7 hours ago

A scenario in which you have needed to show leadership, how you approach this and the outcomes of it

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Scholarshiphenry15 - 14 hours agoDuzaho - 8 hours ago

Nha Trang - DESCRIBE A WELL-KNOWN DESTINATION YOU HAVE VISITED

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Career Plan for Development Issues - Chevening Essay

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Recruiter for overseas agencies - Chevening Network

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Scholarshiprou - 12 hours agorou - 9 hours ago

Why I want to study my courses in the UK?

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ScholarshipRickyT - 15 hours agoterminal28 - 10 hours ago

My American teacher. UVA supplement essay, is this good?

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Undergraduatedaniel6shin - 1 day agoterminal28 - 10 hours ago

There is a different approach on how the organization gives promotion to their employees.

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The desire to surround myself with wise people made had impact on my leadership and influence skills

2 - On leadership and influencing essay, you'd better write your professional experience at work, pick one or two situations at...

ScholarshipAwab - 13 hours agoAnanta - 10 hours ago

My commitment to Academics - Chevening Networking

2 - I am actually in the process of writing my own essay as well. Allow me to give you my...

ScholarshipSolace - 11 hours agoAnanta - 10 hours ago

Networking is crucial to succesfully fulfilling my job duties. Chevening

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Scholarshipterminal28 - Sep 14, 2018terminal28 - 13 hours ago

Personal Statement for university International Relations Program

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Graduateterminal28 - 1 day agoterminal28 - 13 hours ago

Meeting new African people - What excites you. Mastercard Scholarship

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Scholarshiphenry15 - 1 day agohenry15 - 14 hours ago

Problems with student behavior. What causes this and how to react.

2 - Nguyen, your approach to the prompt paraphrase / thesis statement is incorrect. The other problem, is that you added...

Writing Feedbacknguyenuyen450 - 1 day agoHolt - 15 hours ago

ACTIVE MOBILITY. LEADERSHIP ESSAY. CHEVENING

2 - Maria, you focused too much on explaining the project in the essay that your leadership skills became a mere...

Scholarshipmaya90 - 1 day agoHolt - 16 hours ago

The chosen programs will provide me a deeper understanding of the subjects I'm currently teaching

4 - Personally, I believe that since each course has a different focus, you should have a different master thesis presented...

Scholarshipcorclla123 - 1 day agoHolt - 16 hours ago

Some people believe the range of technology is increasing the gap between people. Argument essay

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Writing FeedbackTeymurov - 1 day agoHolt - 16 hours ago

BEING ON THE OTHER SIDE OF THE COURT -- (COLLEGE ESSAY)

2 - Ameya, don't use this essay. The common app prompts come with 2 specific and separate topics for discussion. Those...

Undergraduateameyajain07 - 2 days agoHolt - 18 hours ago

AASSupporting Statements. How did you choose your proposed Course and Inst. M. Accounting ANU

3 - Zamir, your approach to the prompt is too simplistic. You need to further develop the reason you chose the...

GraduateSeskussaa - 1 day agoHolt - 18 hours ago

The necessary platform to acquire the required knowledge and experience; Chosen courses essay

4 - @Holt @Duzaho Thank you for the feedback. To be honest, I wasn't quite clear but I have attempted...

Scholarshipbtoguntade - 2 days agobtoguntade - 18 hours ago