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|TOEIC- What are the advantages and disdvantages of teenagers having jobs?
4 - Thank you for giving me these suggestions. All of these are helpful. Also, I corrected my article. I would...
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|Hard Work vs Luck - what determines people's success?
3 - @toannguyenduc I highly recommend that you give more context or specific information regarding the topics that you have. For...
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|SOP for Master of information / Computer Programming (Harvard online)
2 - In terms of content, I think that your essay is excellent. It has provided a comprehensive overview of your...
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|Writing task 2- Should the media limit bad news?
4 - @Maria thank you so much for your detailed comments. i'm trying to keep not creating complicated sentences... you also...
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|Improving people's health by cleaning the environment. TOEFL writing
6 - In my opinion is more common there are some factories producing polluted water ..., if people drink contaminated water,...
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|In many countries day by day rubbish (garbage) is increasing. Why is it happening? What can be done?
3 - My advices- 1. Your introduction part is little deviated from the topic...your opening sentence is focusing on overpopulation. It...
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|I don't know how to start my essay..
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|Motivation for selecting a career in healthcare & interest in becoming an anesthesiologist assistant
3 - @present1079 With minor flaws and a few alterations, I think that your essay is good-to-go already. Regardless of this,...
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|IELTS2 - It's students, not teachers, choice to learn the material. Who's of control over studying?
2 - Great essay and writing. I applaud your fluidity when it comes to writing. I do have a couple of...
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|ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF EATING OUT
3 - Hi Margaret, I found that you missed some article, including "a", "an" and "the". offer a great view,...
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|AAS - Supporting Statement : Learning and Leadership / Education Study
3 - Thank You so much for your fast response and review. I am rewriting my essay and to be honest,...
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|I want to move on to the next level - pursuing a master degree abroad in IT. Supporting Statement
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|IELTS: What are the factors and strategies of a worldwide issue: fresh water limitation?
3 - @ZeldaDoan In terms of content, I can see how you have substantiated your key points fluidly. The readers would...
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|IELTS- effects advertisement on consumer goods sale
3 - @Jipsa Jadwani The content of your essay deviates a little bit from what is being asked for in the...
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|Why sports are important to people? TOIEC Writing
2 - Divide your composition into separate paragraphs to follow the general rules and conventions of writing. I recommend that...
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|Respecting teachers today vs in the past
2 - I like your composition. The simplicity of your language wonderfully plays out; it enables the readers to have a...
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|IELTS 1 - The given maps illustrates how campus of Woodwards University changed from 1985 to today
2 - I would omit lines that you do not necessarily need. Let's take your first sentence as an example. In...
Writing FeedbackBatu - Apr 17, 2019Maria - Apr 17, 2019
|Task 2 IELTS. Topic: LAW. Should defendant's criminal record be available in legal cases?
2 - I would suggest changing the formatting of your sentences at times. This can enhance the flow and the structure...
Writing Feedbackicebear24 - Apr 17, 2019Maria - Apr 17, 2019
|Celebrating a special occasion in a restaurant and being verysatisfied with the food and service
3 - @zoecheng While I don't necessarily think that you should use formal language because the intent and purpose of the...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2: Modern communication vs Writing letters
2 - I appreciate the structure and content of your essay. I do have a couple of recommendations that can better...
Writing FeedbackThuan Tran - Apr 16, 2019Maria - Apr 17, 2019
|IELTS 2: Whether children should be taught to distinguish right and wrong.
4 - Hey! I pretty much like your essay and the way you organize the ideas is good. However, if this...
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|Physician and pulmonologist - How will the proposed study contribute to your career?
2 - @drimran I recommend that you revise the formatting and structure of your essay in terms of the flow of...
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|Check my SOP for Department of Material Science and Simulation at Ruhr-Universitaet Bochum
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|PhD Cover letter - Health Sector - Research Group Position
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|Master in IT - statement for AAS - Why did you choose your proposed course and institution?
3 - Thank you for the elaborated feedback! I'll try to answer these questions as much as I can within the...
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|IELTS - many youngsters choose to shop as one of their favorite leisure activities
2 - You should create a more balanced argumentation format for your essay's structure. Notice how roughly two-thirds of your essay...
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|I was ghosted by a girl and I just let it go
2 - Are you writing this for a creative writing class? You should always ensure that your language is articulated smoothly....
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|Accounting and Finance - description of your study/research objectives and why want to pursue them
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|Timing for choosing a job
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|MASTER OF TESOL - AAS - HOW DID YOU CHOOSE YOUR PROPOSED COURSE AND INSTITUTION?
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