|Chevening is going to help me expand my network and relations with people who stick with their goals
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ScholarshipLixtikLixtik - 05:22pm
|Tell me how you meet the requirements of leadership
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|Chevening Scholarship Application: Study in the UK Question; why you selected your choice courses?
2 - Gideon, you have obviously been reviewing the advice being shared at this forum. That is why this essay is...
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|The three university courses choice - Applying for Chevening Scholarship, need help with my essay!
16 - Aysha, there is a redundancy in your first paragraph. The second sentence is unnecessary as it is already known...
ScholarshipAysha13Holt - 04:32pm
|Writing Task 2: Is dress smartly more important than quality of work?
2 - Today is an era when there are a lot of companies searching for an efficiency which can make some...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027Lola12 - 04:30pm
|Leadership is a skill that I improved by participating in many activities through stages of my life
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( Chevening is looking for...
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|Should we spend more money on schools and hospitals than large, impressive buildings in a city?
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Writing Feedbackalvisphantom -
|The number of student's accommodations (WT 1)
2 - The graph provideS a breakdown about the number of student'sstudents accommodationswhich calculate on the percentage as per the four...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91Lola12 - 04:09pm
|Article Summary - To know your brain
2 - Every second, large of quantities idea emerge on our mind. --- writed like this, it makes no sense at...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnLola12 - 03:59pm
|Problems of crime rise and how to solve those
2 - HelloYour text could be improved if you apply the following adjustments to it: which bother [...] endanger...
year by year....
Writing FeedbackKimichi89Wolf Larsen - 03:56pm
|Discussion of disposable society and some issues that are around us everyday.
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|Quality of work more important than appearance in the corporation activity
2 - I have some ideas for your writing
(in every they do work activities) => in everything they do
(for instance, a...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17LinhArs - 03:41pm
|Crime is an old phenomenon. Its rate has been growing significantly now-a-days.
2 - this instead of that in 2nd sentence
nowadays instead of now-a-days
These reasons will be discused to find out ......
Writing FeedbackTANJINtimmy17 - 03:37pm
|Writing IELTS Task 2: Crime rate and How to address
4 - Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent...
Writing FeedbackAfdhelTANJIN - 03:31pm
|This essay will examine the reasons why criminal wrongdoing increases annually
4 - Hi..
let me give another format for the same writing .Each year, the crime rate increases.
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincolnTANJIN - 03:23pm
|How satisfied are you with your live? and What would make you happinest?
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Here some suggestions for your writing
The graph provide shows information about stage where they feel satisfied...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17alvisphantom - 03:14pm
|Writing Task 1: How satisfied are you with your life? What would make you happiest?
NEW - The graph below and the chart on the on the next page show the answers people gave about the...
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|The unemployment and careless of society have impact on the rise of the crime level
3 - good night brother
let me help you to correct this good articleRecently, there has been a proliferation of the level...
Writing FeedbackDiobaKimichi89 - 02:58pm
|Summary TED: The best question that people always say
2 - In my opinnion, success is depend on yourself. It means if you determine to make yourself become better, you...
Writing FeedbackMathew88alvisphantom - 02:56pm
|All in all, I disagree that a person should be able to speak language to understand other cultures
4 - Hello Brother
Let me give you some advicesFirst, language is the only way people >> the only way of peopleWhen...
Writing FeedbackDiobaAbrahamlincoln - 02:49pm
|Probably the most worrying threat to our lives at the present time is crime - causes and remedies
2 - hi sari, i will try to help you to correct this good articleProbably the most worrying threat to our...
Writing FeedbacksasaririKimichi89 - 02:41pm
|describe a life-changing event or moment
NEW - "The reason for your seizures is epilepsy. I am sorry to tell you that this illness might be serious...
|Are the Appearance More Important than the Quality of Work?
NEW - Some organizations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these...
Writing FeedbackAnna94 -
|Writing Task: Crime Rate increase
3 - In specific countries of the world criminality still a big issue. NO VERB =
in specific countries of the world,...
Writing FeedbackYonathanRAY93 - 02:19pm
|Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn (WT 2)
NEW - Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or forgetting, many basic skills.
To what extend...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91 -
|Writing Task 2: Dress smartly or quality of work?
5 - HI AINI...At present, dress smartly such as look office or business dress is requirement for plenty of organisation or...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16Fadhilahumar91 - 02:10pm
|Quality of work is more important than appearance for certain companies
4 - Hello beauty 17, here my suggestions for you.Employees must [BE] able to give their performance besides they wear dress...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17Anna94 - 02:05pm
|TED article - David Christian- The history of our world
NEW - A question which is asked by David Christian to audience is how did the universe make complexity?. He began...
Writing FeedbackAbrahamlincoln -
|Formal clothes in a workplace. Quality of work above appearance.
2 - HI, let me give some advice, perhaps useful for you.
1.who use the danger equipment or working in the factory,...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05Dioba - 02:02pm