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|The Ashdown Museum After and Before
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|[TOEFL] Globalisation worldwide effect - similarities in different countries
2 - Perita, when you discuss your opening statement, after you present your opinion, do not add information to it that...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Environment and Economy in the success
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|Travel with a Companion or Travel Alone?
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|IELTS Writing task 2: Generation gap
3 - gap is existed exists generations, especial special together, so we have a difference about the...
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|Ielts Task 2 Topic: computer skills after writing, reading and maths
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|The Program for the Exceptionally Gifted at Mary Baldwin University. Medical School Personal essay.
2 - Mahalia, are you responding to a specific instruction for the personal statement? The reason that I am asking is...
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|Essay about Travel to foreign countries when you are young or when you are older
2 - Tong, somehow I feel like this is the draft response that you wrote for the prompt. Your responses are...
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|Communication is the key. The networking part in Chevening Scholarship.
2 - Hesham, this is one of the worst drafts I have ever read for the Chevening Networking application essay. You...
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|Commitment to working in a diverse population as a Nurse
2 - Your essay is not a personal response essay. You created a research based opinion paper instead. What the prompt...
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|UNC Chapel Hill Prompt 1 - What is one thing that we don't know about you that you want for us to kn
5 - Sumedh, your introduction to your being an introvert is good. You have shown the good and the bad when...
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|Writing task 1 (IELTS). Process of coffee manufacturing
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|The best method to decrease the number of traffic jams.
4 - Hello everyone, I fixed like that, Is it better? With the traffic problem continuously growing every day, there...
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|[IELTS writing task 2] Online shopping: discuss both sides and give your opinion.
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|Common App Prompt 5 - Personal Growth through Spanish Dance
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|"Loading... Loading... Loading..." Common App Personal Essay Prompt 4
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|[Toefl] Buying a new technological device right away is better than waiting until many people...
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|Chevening Scholarship essays on Leadership and influence; early experiences
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|I wrote this email, but I would like to know if it is good
|IELTS Writing Task 2 : Studying History - what's the aim of it?
2 - Valery, your essay became a personal opinion paper because you did not accurately represent the paraphrased statement as requiring...
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|IELTS writing task 1: Australian school leavers' activities
2 - Sarah, your overview is incomplete. You need to mention the three activities that the students did in particular and...
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|Essay about how to use my networking skills to lead and influence others- Chevening Scholarship
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|Complete the second sentence so it has a similar meaning to the first sentence, using given word
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|[IELTS task 1]The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England
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|"Capture" - The Common App Essay (Topic of Choice)
4 - I like your casual tone, it's interesting and pleasing to read. I do see your personality reading your essay...
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|GRE argument essay. Prunty County and highway safety.
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|TOPIC - CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS OF THE RISING UNEMPLOYMENT RATE
3 - @MandyTran Hi Tran, your essay impressed me with decent vocabulary in the introduction, but as I processed through the...
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|(IELTS TASK 2) The public should be encouraged to use public transportation more. Give your opinio
7 - Hi Emin, your essay appears to be of low level, thus low band score for the following reasons: -...
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|The share of Oscar winners by genre film for 2003 and 2008
2 - Kien, your essay is missing the most important part, the summary overview. While there is no specific spot for...
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|CAE Essay Part 1: Methods schools and universities use to help students find suitable jobs
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