|Task 2 Who Have The Responsibilities To Teach Children To Be A Good Members Of Society?
2 - I personally believe that parent is the one who have to take this as their obligation.
I personally believe that parent have...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18ekalamarsyari11 - 01:15pm
|Summary Article Global Warming Started to Happen In A Long Time Ago
2 - Hello Your text will sound much better if some of the contained sentences are to be paraphrased as follows: Many...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18Wolf Larsen - 01:12pm
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1: Life cycle of silkworm and production of silk cloth
NEW - The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stage in the production of silk cloth. The first...
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|Summary : the mission to find the world's rarest cat in jungles of Java
3 - That article has explained about Anthony Giordano's expedition. => you should use simple past tense because this article was published in the...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91ekalamarsyari11 - 12:51pm
|Scrutinize My BioPhotonics Graduate School Essay
3 - Thanks for your input. I appreciate it....
Graduatefreshkid13freshkid13 - 12:39pm
|Why Do You Think People Attend College Or University
3 - human has significantly progressed a lot in nearly allaspect of life ... this is not the only contribution of educational institutions...
Writing Feedbacksinahectorekalamarsyari11 - 12:37pm
|People experience problems while living abroad, especially those in the middle age (35 - 54)
6 - Hi my lovely classmate, - It mentions there are three main problems which are faced by the newcomer which...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48Faridadwi18 - 12:37pm
|An estimated 100 African elephants are killed each day by poachers for their ivory tusks
7 - Hi Hary, - According to the World Elephant Day website,the number of elephant numbers have dropped by 62 percent...
Writing FeedbackHary01Faridadwi18 - 12:17pm
|Hi ! i'm Nathanya , help me correct my Personal Statement for apply KGSP Scholarship
4 - Hi
Here are my some suggestions. I learn........... by myself.
to represent my class on our independence day
My teachers knew......asked...
ScholarshipnathanyasasciaAngela Nang - 12:08pm
|IELTS writing task 2 : School and parent, two important things that influence character of children
NEW - Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48 -
|Task 1 Life Cycle Of Silkworms And How To Produce Silk Cloth
NEW - The diagram process illustrates the silkworm life cycle and the methods of producing silk cloth. Overall, there are 4 steps from mooth...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18 -
|help me with this cover letter :)
2 - Hi chom, - I knew EY when I came to ACCA Workshop 2016, and I am very impressed with the...
LetterschomchomFaridadwi18 - 11:39am
|Some jobs can pay high salaries but require employees to leave their family and friends.
5 - Hi Hikaru, - The reason is that the development of communication technologies advances communication of technologies enables us to communicate...
Writing FeedbackffhikaruFaridadwi18 - 11:30am
|SUmmary: Fluorescent jellyfish proteins light up unconventional laser
4 - Wish this can help you
very good writing skill
it need much energy=> it needs much energy
It work=>It works...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91chomchom - 11:21am
|How to produce silk cloth and silkworm life cycle, IELTS task 1
2 - good job :)...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91chomchom - 11:19am
|Educated means succcesful? Uneducated persons have behaviors that educated people should be learned.
6 - Hi rodrigo, - Nowadays, there is a desperate need in the world to attend to secondary school
Writing FeedbackrodrigoarmuaFaridadwi18 - 11:18am
|The events of 2016 may seem bleak, but the study of history offers some context
2 - good job :)...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91chomchom - 11:18am
|task 2: children should teach children how to be a good members of society
4 - Nice to read your thread. here a little correction for you. Hope this helps. Education is not only teach about how...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91ashelarisa48 - 11:04am
|Students who only learn from books and never practice, in reality hardly find any jobs.
7 - Hello, I agree with your point of view. Here a little correction for you. In today's world Today, learning at university...
Writing Feedbackquynh_12ashelarisa48 - 10:44am
|'Master of cancer drug discovery is only available at Bradford' - applying Chevening Scholars
3 - Hi @ichanpants89!
I am very delighted because of your advice. I will make sure the courses and post y essay again.
ScholarshipAngela NangAngela Nang - 08:48am
|Number of people who are content in the USA by the age group, maritial status, and having kids
5 - The charts report The first chart gives information about the survey of the percentage of people happiness in who are pleased...
Writing FeedbackZiadRasyid24Fadhilahumar91 - 08:36am
|How to write an essay about Introduce myself ?
2 - Hi
I think by reducing the number of "I" you can represent fluency.
longer time=> for a long time
I'm interested in...
EssaysYennguyensinahector - 08:00am
|Why are you interested in pursuing careers in healthcare? (NM Discovery App, 300-500 char)
2 - Hi
Very good essay
But I think you can improve it and here are my suggestions;
1)My interest first started in a...
Scholarshipthebsleesinahector - 07:56am
|The general welfare of all its people is a necessary condition for the well-being of a society.
4 - For a society to thrive means that the people feel happy in the society and their life standard is guaranteed well. Thus,...
Writing FeedbackhelmmeFadhilahumar91 - 07:54am
|Forecasting sytem as an initial warning of earthquake
3 - Hi Eka, I do really like the way you sum your article summary. It was very informative and clear. I can...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11ichanpants89 - 07:49am
|Customer satisfaction and specific aspect of flying experience with airlines in the United States
3 - hi... The chart and table highlight gives information about the percentage of customer satisfaction quality and specific aspect of flying experience...
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08Fadhilahumar91 - 07:30am
|Parents are imperative to teach their children - even more than the professional teachers
4 - hi.. Parents play an have important role to educate their children. From that stand point(Based on the statement/ overall/ all in...
Writing Feedbackibal28Fadhilahumar91 - 07:21am
|LEARNING VACATION as a new concept of holiday in 20th century - SUMMARY TASK 3
5 - hii.. t of holiday inthe20th century
Where the society could acquire something new and useful, not only to learn exciting subject...
Writing FeedbackrosadesianaFadhilahumar91 - 07:09am
|(TED Talks) Why good hackers make good citizens
3 - hi ekaa.. She said that Benjamin Franklin was the greatest hacker of all thetime because of because his belief that...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11Fadhilahumar91 - 06:56am
|Draft PS for Msc AI, asking for advice.
5 - Thank you very much (T T)
I don't feel very confident about my PS, I do appreciate your words.
GraduatePunchwePunchwe - 05:01am