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3 - @Holt Hi Sorry for making the same mistakes when you have been a good teacher. Actually, I do...
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5 - Thank you for your respond on my essay, here is my feedback: I think you should change the...
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9 - @MaRo01 @bagusetyawan @Holt @Peaches07 Here you go~ I was born in Kalimantan Island of Indonesia and raised...
ScholarshipRayoungRayoung - 34 mins ago
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3 - @Holt Always a pleasure to read your comment. Will revise the essay based on your advices. Thanks!...
GraduateIanthexxIanthexx - 49 mins ago
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5 - @Holt I re-write it again. I almost change all of the essay. Please review it again. Thank you in...
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7 - @Holt I am applying through the university track. Thank you for your response on this. This my finished...
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15 - You can post your new essays in a separate thread in the related section of the forum. However, before...
Scholarshipdebby89Holt - 1 hour ago
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3 - @d2ny Heyy bro, it's great to know you're from BEC, I'm TEST student by the way. LOL Allright,...
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9 - This is not a bad paragraph to add to your essay. It clarifies the gray area regarding your career...
ScholarshipBacktoschoolHolt - 2 hours ago
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3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your review, sir. I'll try to add more to this essay and make...
Graduateharis182haris182 - 2 hours ago
|I would like to study in Korea in order to get valuable, precious and sophisticated education
4 - I have decided to study abroad, in SPECIALLY Korea, to increase HAVE my professional abilities . I am really...
ScholarshipPhyu ThantSARAsajedi91 - 3 hours ago
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7 - @Holt oh, okay, i understand now. thank you so much for your advice. :)...
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2 - Avery, I am not sure how you expect use to help you in this instance. I can only help...
UndergraduateaverymarieHolt - 3 hours ago
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2 - Cailyn, since you are looking to be a transfer student, use this essay to build up the reasons why...
Undergraduatecaccy46Holt - 3 hours ago
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2 - Pinky, you need to further develop this essay. The post study plan should comprise at least one full page...
Scholarshipcj24Holt - 4 hours ago
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7 - Hi @Holt, sorry I forgot about that ^_^ Yeah I surely am satisfied with this. I've put it to...
Scholarshipd2nyd2ny - 7 hours ago
|Persevering my dream. Self Introduction Letter for Graduate School.
5 - @pb1013 I think you don't need to mention your name and age as you will be mentioning it on...
Graduatepb1013cj24 - 8 hours ago
|Self introduction for Master degree in different field from undergraduate degree.
3 - @jewjewmabushii When I was 12 years-old, I met a Japanese man. He moved to live next to my home....
Graduatejewjewmabushiicj24 - 9 hours ago
|You are a wealthy person who can buy either a house or a company. What would be your choice?
2 - Though your prompt restatement is a bit lacking in terms of actually reflecting the discussion you are to provide,...
Writing Feedbacksandeep kcHolt - 10 hours ago
|The graph below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years
8 - @hongnguyentp92 I hope my suggestion would be useful. On the first paragraph, you tried to paraphrase "produce" with...
Writing Feedbackhongnguyentp92bagusetyawan - 11 hours ago
|Sustainable Building Systems Program - max. word limit of a personal statement (education studies)
2 - Wang, your essay has a total of 709 words in it. This is over the normal word allotment for...
Undergraduateqwang46Holt - 12 hours ago
|Brainstorming session with you to help me direct essay of 250 words for college LAC
5 - @Holt Thank you so much for the help. The essay sounds so easy but very confusing unless its not...
Undergraduateesfo2017esfo2017 - 12 hours ago
|Help with guidance in Health Issues essay report
3 - In my opinion, you may list question involved your plan and conduct a survey with small groups like: 1....
Essaysjermaine7hongnguyentp92 - 12 hours ago
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11 - @Holt Thank you very much for your sincere contribution. You help me realize that I still have to have...
Scholarshiptainguyenthanhtainguyenthanh - 13 hours ago
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2 - Vineeth, please provide the entrance essay prompt requirement / instructions for writing in the next post so that I...
UndergraduateVinneHolt - 13 hours ago
|Design Academy Eindhoven. Statement of motivation and expectations concerning the programme
2 - Priyanka, why do you speak of your professional experience in past tense? Are you currently unemployed? If you are...
GraduatesunbornHolt - 14 hours ago
|3. What is your greatest strength? Weakness? [Interview Qsn]
5 - As I learned how to answer 'your weakness' question, I think it's better if you explain the way you...
ScholarshipaceessRayoung - 23 hours ago
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3 - Jon, you have portrayed strong character traits of a person. These are not to be confused with the values...
LettersjontargaryenHolt - 23 hours ago
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11 - Okay then :) thank so so so so much for your help :)...
ScholarshipBluemoomBluemoom - 23 hours ago
|Corruption, Corruption, and more Corruption or Injustice
11 - @Holt Ohh no, none taking with regards to making me feel bad😀 Just saying that I thought I had...
PoetryPeaches07Peaches07 - 23 hours ago