|It is a well-known fact that in many countries children are hired in paid work.
NEW - Can you give me all your suggestions about this essay and the average score, please.It is a well-known fact...
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|The kind of problem people often face when starting to stay abroad - according to age.
2 - Ivan, please allow me to share with you a properly worded version of your essay report for future reference:...
Writing FeedbackIvanMS027Holt - 04:45pm
|Health care resources and life expectancy in different countries
2 - Eka, here is an improved version of your report. Please pay attention to the method of wording and the...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11Holt - 04:34pm
|To eradicate the wrong thinking that all Muslims are terrorists. LEADERSHIP & INFLUENCE essay
6 - @Holt....After I received your suggestions, i wrote my essay all over again. Though not perfect, is it OK if...
ScholarshipFaiselFaisel - 04:23pm
|I am applying to a chevening Scholarship. then I need your help. review my essay
2 - Alvin, while I believe that you have the potential to be a great leader and influential figure in the...
ScholarshipAlvinDHolt - 04:20pm
|I have always said that architecture is my passion but volunteering has my heart. Applying Chevening
2 - Liseth, you should consider revising your essay to reflect only a single, but highly important activity that you participated...
ScholarshipLixtikHolt - 04:14pm
|The chart below shows information about the problems people have when they go to live in other count
2 - Hi reski, The chart compares the problems of citizen when stay in other countries based on different ages. All...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88Faridadwi18 - 04:05pm
|Nowadays, there are many causes that make children have an unhealthy lifestyle.
5 - Hi Ifra, - I don't think that you answer the question well since the question talk about why both...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05Faridadwi18 - 03:58pm
|Three kind of citizen problems who stay at the foreign country based on age in percent
5 - Hi Willy, The chart (make it more specific : bar, line, or pie chart) shows about three kind ...
Writing FeedbackWilyaftika23Faridadwi18 - 03:45pm
|School - a place to get information and parents to teach good behavior. Unhealthy lifestyle problem.
6 - Hi Resky, - I think you don't answer the task achievement which is given above.
- You should explain why...
Writing FeedbackReskiRamadani88Faridadwi18 - 03:29pm
|A personal and National Triumph
8 - If this is the format that you are comfortable using, then this is what we shall use Juanita. I...
UndergraduateAE02022504Holt - 03:21pm
|The three university courses choice - Applying for Chevening Scholarship, need help with my essay!
8 - Aysha, I will have to tell you that the essay has an overly long introduction when it does not...
ScholarshipAysha13Holt - 02:31pm
|Writing Task 1 - Three Problems When Move to Overseas
3 - Hi Anna,Here's my thoughts towards your report summary. I hope this would be helpful.1st paragraph:
- ...when they move to...
Writing FeedbackAnna94ichanpants89 - 02:14pm
|Sort of problems people have when they move into the other countries, according to ages
4 - Hi Ifra, The bar chart gives information about sort of problems people have when they move into the other...
Writing Feedbackifraanisa05Faridadwi18 - 02:01pm
|Writing Task 2: Unhealthy Lifestyle of Children
4 - Hi nuraini, At present, the way of children live become unhealthy. They tend to eat what they like or...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16Faridadwi18 - 01:51pm
|Various of difficulties that people experience when they stay in overseas
4 - Hi Bada, ... the various of difficulties that which (it is better to use which than that in IELTS...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17Faridadwi18 - 01:34pm
|"Happiness is only true when shared with others" Chevening Networking Question
11 - Of course I would, appreciate it a lot, I will edit and rewrite it here !...
Scholarshipshadow7shadow7 - 01:09pm
|The kind of trouble that society usually have after moving overseas
2 - Hi Nuraini,
Welcome to EssayForum :)Before rushing to my feedback, I would like to suggest that you should give at...
Writing Feedbacknurainiyusuf16ichanpants89 - 12:28pm
|The bar chart compares three types of difficulties that people have when they move to a new country
3 - hallo Mr. Ibeit is just like a superb essay, but i would like to give you some suggestions...
Writing Feedbackibe13ekalamarsyari11 - 12:22pm
|The proportion of various kind of problems that citizens experience while living in overseas
5 - halloi would like to concern in your introduction and overview
The proportion of the kind of problems that happen ...here...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27ekalamarsyari11 - 11:59am
|Being abroad people become most concerned to all life problems
5 - Hello Sarlinda!
Allow me to give you some suggestion.1. Superlative word
Overall, the highest problems the highest problem/the biggest problem of...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27nurainiyusuf16 - 11:45am
|Parents should be concerning towards unhealthy lifestyle by overseeing their child's activities
4 - Hi miss sarlinda.
actually your essay is pretty good. but this is my suggestion.1. ... cafeteria such as...
Writing FeedbackSarlindaDS_27badafebriani17 - 11:31am
|The causes and some possible solutions to overcome traffic congestion
3 - Hi Amril,Let me sum up several things that you need to consider in order to improve your band score....
Writing Feedbackamrillahmkichanpants89 - 11:24am
|Unhealthy lifestyle for students depend on their parents accountability and schools
5 - Hello pram i will give you suggestion:
1. Be careful with your paraphrase using:... depend on the accountability their parents...
Writing FeedbackPramudia27ReskiRamadani88 - 10:28am
|Writing Task 2 Children's Unhealth Lifestyle and Parents/Schools responsibility
6 - Hello Miss Ba'da :) Let me give you some corrections :)First, I think your introduction paragraph still not clear,...
Writing Feedbackbadafebriani17SarlindaDS_27 - 10:20am
|Treasure in Beowulf - Assignment-Beowulf-8-10 Pages in MLA form
2 - Hi Harriman, welcome to EssayForum :)Before rushing to the feedback, I can see that this essay is quite long....
Book ReportsCharrimaichanpants89 - 10:10am
|Chevening; networking is a vital and important issue in the life of any successful person
4 - Kareem, believe that we need to provide more information in your essay so that the references you make...
Scholarshipkareem ragabHolt - 09:59am
|The production of energy from coal in Denmark, Germany, Sweden, and France
3 - Hello,
In general, I liked your eesay but I have some suggestions.
- I'd used the word line graph instead...
Writing FeedbackamrillahmkMaximKlopunov99 - 09:45am
|The strong career plan must depend on the person's skills, qualifications, and experience. CHEVENING
3 - @ Holt
Thank you for your advice .... I will do it.
So, I understand that there are no mistakes...
Scholarshipkareem ragabkareem ragab - 07:52am
|Rephrasing and Getting Rid Of Extra Words
3 - Hi Holt,I like your version SO MUCH! It really solved a lost of problems in the last draft. THANKS!...
Grammar, UsageFaithfulEnyaFaithfulEnya - 07:49am