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|How technology affect our relationships? Has this been a positive or negative development
3 - @aitruong This is not a comparison essay. This is a single opinion essay that should have focused on one...
Writing FeedbackaitruongHolt - 1 hour ago
|IELTS writing task 2 : One could learn about another country from TV
5 - Nguyen, your essay is taking a totally different approach to the given discussion for several reasons. For starters, you...
Writing FeedbackjasonnguyenHolt - 1 hour ago
|IELTS2: Some people believe that graduation from university is the key to a fulfilling career
4 - Duc, while your opening paraphrase was excellent, your body of paragraphs were lacking in the proper representation of the...
Writing FeedbackDucgiangbinHolt - 2 hours ago
|Motivation for programme choice, you as a proper candidate, dissertation topic, study contribution
3 - @Holt Please make it urgent first, thank you. Hello! Thank you for the great feedback, Holt. I highly...
Scholarshipmaurice0422maurice0422 - 19 hours ago
|What is the thing that you are most afraid of in your life? How do you deal with it?
2 - Chien, aside from the need for some grammar editing, your essay is unique in response and approach. Jealousy isn't...
UndergraduateChien Chi ChenHolt - 1 day ago
|Many people keep dogs and cats as companion , Do the advantages outweigh the disadvatages?
2 - Aural, your essay suffers from severe punctuation errors. You are using comma's throughout the essay instead of placing periods...
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|There's a question whether school teachers should incorporate homework into the teaching scheme
Writing Feedbackgreyndgreynd - 1 day ago
|Who should be in charge of activities related to scientific research?
Writing Feedbacklinhlinhlinhlinhlinhlinh - 1 day ago
|Human being actions are leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity
Writing Feedbackkmckmc - 1 day ago
|Effect of technology. Do the advantages of the online business meetings outweigh the disadvantages ?
Writing Feedbackmailocmailoc - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 2 (People argue about children's decision)
6 - i think : the fifth line : the structure of the sentence is wrong because instead of : children...
Writing Feedbackabang yogamailoc - 2 days ago
|To what extent do you agree that letter writing is disappearing? IELTS 2.
3 - Jea, since you have repeated the same mistakes from your previous essay, I will refrain from commenting on those...
Writing FeedbackjalpHolt - 2 days ago
|My letter of intent to do a Master program in US - HR Management
2 - Praise, this is an acceptable draft for your personal statement. It cannot be considered a complete personal statement because...
LettersPraiseHolt - 2 days ago
|Study Plan Letter - following a bachelor degree in Agricultural and Environmental Sciences at McGill
4 - Thanks, @Holt for your evaluation of my letter so far. I will definily take into consideration your review and...
UndergraduateShrimpShrimp - 2 days ago
|IELTS GT Essay - The use of cellular phones has negatively impacted person to person communication
4 - ... listen to the audio books, chat on the internet, browse social media, shop online ... -> listening to..,...
Writing FeedbackNeha_b123magicgoblet - 2 days ago
|The way of communication between people has been changed due to the modern technology; IELTS2
4 - @bimalp 'Although there are disadvantages of the modern ...' I think you should write: Despite some disadvantages of the...
Writing Feedbackbimalpmagicgoblet - May 25, 2018
|Violence and disaters images in the media, what are the causes and our solutions
3 - Vu, since you did not post the complete prompt with this essay, I cannot really tell what your required...
Writing Feedbackvu1111Holt - May 25, 2018
|Multiple short school-free days or one long vacation for children?
3 - Ahh, thank you very much for the review of my essay. I am slowly learning from my mistakes, nonetheless,...
Writing Feedbackjalpjalp - May 25, 2018
|[Writing task 1] Compare changes in birth rates of the US and China
Writing Feedbackmagicgobletmagicgoblet - May 24, 2018
|Education of students in Viet Nam - how to write this essay?
3 - @giaducle123456 Paragraph 1: - Students could feel STREETFUL because ... You mean Stressful?? Whatever! Thanks a lot!...
Essaystytrantytran - May 24, 2018
|Increasing the prices of fuels are the only way to reduce its consumption and pressure on the world
2 - Hi, make sure to always include the complete prompt so we can determine if you have addressed it in...
Writing Feedbacklamtuyen0610TJLuschen - May 24, 2018
|The given diagram illustrates the process of brick making [Writing task 1]
4 - Yes, treating is not the same as handling. Think of a water treatment plant, where water is filtered and...
Writing Feedbackphongdang04TJLuschen - May 24, 2018
|Unequality in this world; Ielts topic: The gap between the rich and the poor. Problems and solutions
Writing Feedbackjenniferngojenniferngo - May 24, 2018
|Task 2 - I do not understand the meaning of the topic - technology impact on a society
3 - Hamid, you are supposed to discuss each point of view as a separate topic in the stand alone body...
Essaysbarwary1987Holt - May 24, 2018
|People have different views about what young individuals should do when they leave high school.
Writing Feedbackthaoduyenthaoduyen - May 23, 2018
|Essay about the news media - how to start?
3 - Approach this essay from a comparative point of view. You can start by explaining why you believe that your...
EssaysRapunzelHolt - May 23, 2018
|An increasing number of transport revolutions. Which are considered as the most remarkable?
2 - Do, there is an error in your discussion. Since you are referring to transport innovation and not cargo transport...
Writing Feedbacklecongdoo3Holt - May 23, 2018
|Help with the crucible narrative intervention
2 - Since this book is about the Salem Witch Trials, you will do best to do some film research on...
EssaysPotatofishHolt - May 23, 2018
|With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper-books-What are the advantages and disadvantages
2 - Hi, I think you did a pretty good job of addressing the prompt until your final paragraph. The prompt...
Writing FeedbackwoemamTJLuschen - May 22, 2018
|Solution for traffic - providing free public transport 24 hours per day, and seven days a week
3 - Nguyen, the essay that you wrote is not going to get a passing score because your whole approach to...
Writing Feedbackphuonglinhng23Holt - May 22, 2018