|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN SMALL VILLAGE
NEW - In the past, most people lived in small villages where everyone knew everyone else. Nowadays, most people live in...
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|SOP - Stuck in the Study Plan for KGSP Scholarship
6 - The thread will remain open until you decide to formally close it. Don't worry about having to start a...
ScholarshipCCA92Holt - 08:17am
|Waterloo "reasons for choosing" essay - two portions answer
10 - Thanks a lot for your patience with me :D Writing isn't really my strong suit but I try to...
UndergraduateEiad21Eiad21 - 05:06am
|Korean dramas and K-pop - letter of self introduction...KGSP scholarship
6 - Hi Pinky, the essay is much better now, but still lacking information. I was hoping that you would have...
Scholarshipcj24Holt - 04:53am
|"Where there is will, there is a way" - my motto. Self introduction for KGSP
4 - @azaa1428 Hi! You should write it as a whole essay, like a text with 4 - 5 paragraphs so...
Scholarshipazaa1428CCA92 - 04:21am
|KGSP Application Letter of Self-Introduction: Requiring Assistance for Proofreading
4 - Hi, I think you should modify your first paragraph, do not talking too much about your current family situation...
ScholarshipBeautifulDayCCA92 - 04:06am
|This is an essay for admission to an American university for masters in construction management.
29 - Like I said, this essay is good enough to submit. You have done your best to represent your intentions...
Graduateratan251294Holt - 03:56am
|Scholarship Self-Introduction Essay for KGSP program - I am going to apply through University track
7 - @Holt Thank you very much for your suggestion. I will try to come up a new approach for the...
Scholarshiptainguyenthanhtainguyenthanh - 03:41am
|I have a dominant character with good personality. CHEVENING ESSAY LEADERSHIP AND INFLUENCE QUESTION
6 - @BeautifulDay Dear Kenneth, please give me a significant input. The title even doesnt matter in Chevening, because we...
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - 01:31am
|'all my sacrifices lead to a reward' - KGSP Graduate scholarship / Letter of self introduction
3 - @Holt Thank you so much! I'll do the changes you suggested me! I just have one question that I...
Scholarshipmolgumolgu - 01:29am
|500 WORD ESSAY EXPLAINING WHY YOU WANT TO STUDY IN FRANCE!
6 - You have to remove your fixation about the studies that you did in Canada. This is the constant issue...
ScholarshipadventureabroadHolt - 01:16am
|task2; The pros and cons of living longer for human being
4 - Hi Jing, I will admit that this is one of the better developed essays that I have come across...
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|Statement of purpose for Master's course in English Linguistics/ English Literatures and Cultures
3 - I am very grateful to you for your priceless advice. I will definitely follow it. Thank you...
Graduatealinakarimova714alinakarimova714 - Yesterday
|Reading has become less significant to Americans.
7 - @akbarmappiare Thank you so much for your feedback. Can you give some suggestions regarding smooth transition from one paragraph...
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|After finishing my postgraduate, I plan to go back to my current company - CHEVENING CAREER PLAN
3 - @Holt Dear Mary, I think so. I didnt do enough research to catch up what Chevening has...
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Yesterday
|Artificial environments. Positive and negative sides of zoos
2 - Adam, you have to work on providing the complete prompt summary in overview form. That seems to be a...
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|CHEVENING ESSAY NETWORKING QUESTION: One of my most prominent character is extrovert
3 - @Holt Dear Mary, Thank you for your comment. I'll revise it soon, and send it here....
Scholarshipsehatdinatisehatdinati - Yesterday
|A lot of technological enhancements have taken place in developing societies
4 - @ichanpants89 Sorry for #OOT Dear Iksan, how could I quote like that, if I want to review someone writing?...
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|Write a letter to your friend to tell him about how to protect the environment in your area
4 - @conanhy Anh, if you say the "first measure," then there must be next one (second or third, etc)....
Lettersconanhysehatdinati - Yesterday
|This figure illustrates some new construction in the town of Garlsdon
4 - @MH_tw Dear Deng, other than you miss many information from the figure, your words is only 146 though....
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|You took your family to a nearby restaurant. Disappointed with the meal and complain to manager
4 - @jaikrishna Dear Jaya, let me give some inputs, more less about the "writing." My name is Jaya...
Lettersjaikrishnasehatdinati - Yesterday
|The tendency that youth graduates find it difficult to find a job nowadays
4 - Tram, I know that this is a topic for the IELTS Task 2. Now, I have an idea as...
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|A journey in reaching my future goal - Essay for Korean Scholarship
4 - If you did not bother to get actual work experience in an office or academic setting, you definitely have...
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|"Move Forward' My Letter of Self-Introduction for KGSP
14 - Thank you again @Holt, you are amazing!...
ScholarshipNitivatNitivat - Yesterday
|Civil service in Korea. KGSP Self Introduction Content
16 - Kai, look into the current business ventures that the Koreans have in your country. Connect those business interests with...
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|My Statement of Purpose for MSc Information Systems at King AbdulAziz University, Jeddah, KSA
2 - Haris, I believe that you have chosen to present the purpose of your study at the start of the...
Graduateharis182Holt - Yesterday
|Born in Mexico City, moved to United States at age of 8. KGSP Self Introduction for Graduate School
3 - Carina, your essay lacks focus and a clear purpose for your study. This is nothing but a highly confused...
ScholarshipYennicallHolt - Yesterday
|My career path is not straight. College Transfer Essay - Statement of Purpose
2 - Morgan, try to focus on the actual purpose behind the reason for your transfer. If you are transferring based...
UndergraduateMorgannhHolt - Yesterday
|Research topics on data mining - suggestions?
23 - While I am not very familiar with this topic, I believe that there are a number of subjects that...
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|Critique on literature Review Introduction on Carbohydrate feeding on exercise performance
5 - Amanda, unfortunately, what you are asking us to do for you is the partial research content for your paper....
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