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|Many people think that every individual is responsible for their own healthy lifestyle.
3 - it is a good topic that you try to explain us about how important we should take attention of...
Writing Feedbackitsme2216Ummu - 6 mins ago
|Chevening Career Plan Essay - to continue working in the Oil & Gas industry in my country
5 - @Excel2017 Thanks! I really appreciate your contribution! You are right, the timeline is not very clear. I will work...
ScholarshipMariap88Mariap88 - 9 mins ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK II - TRADITIONAL AND MODERN MUSIC
NEW - There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional...
|"Leadership comes from within". Everyone is a leader in their own way. Chevening Essay
3 - @Holt Thank you for your kind suggestion. I'll rewrite it later. Regarding spelling and grammar, is there any...
Scholarshipbellachyntiabellachyntia - 51 mins ago
|Being experienced at different leadership positions throughout whole life
NEW - Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers Please guys, help me make corrections...
|I determine to apply for the Chevening 2018-19 scholarship - answer to leadership question
NEW - Hi, can you please help in reviewing my answer to leadership question. I intend to apply for the Chevening...
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|I formed a team to determine the reasons for problems of scientific research in Egypt
NEW - Does this leadership essay covering the topic well? chevening scholarship ! my presence in scientific activities and events...
|IELTS Task 2: Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug
NEW - People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and...
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|I disagree that university should accept same number of men and women in each subjects.
NEW - University should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree...
Writing FeedbackChi Han -
|Tranfer essay about discovering the pharmaceutical field as a career path - Common App Prompt
NEW - "Please provide a statement that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve" Discovering...
|IELTS Task 1 - Bar chart - Population distribution in the Northwest region (1900 to 2050)
5 - ....but this number doubled to 20% in 1950....... The meanings are the same, you can just use one...
Writing FeedbackTran Minh HienChi Han - 7 hours ago
|[IELTS] The percentage of female employees in major tech companies in the US
7 - Hello namibdesert, Like many people have said, you need to add the word to the minimum requirement of 150,...
Writing FeedbacknamibdesertChi Han - 7 hours ago
|The bar charts compares the percentage of Australian men and women who do regular exercise
NEW - The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular...
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|Chevening Leadership and Influence answer, anyone check my essay.
NEW - problem solver Challenge is not a word unfamiliar to me. What I know is finding solutions and overcoming...
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|Leadership is not a title or a position ! ( Chevening Essay)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your comment ok I will identify the organization and my position to every event I...
ScholarshipHaya103222Haya103222 - 8 hours ago
|Chevening essay - My journey to becoming a leader
2 - Christi, the essay is extremely strong in the leadership sense of the discussion. I would change the first paragraph...
ScholarshipXti02Holt - 9 hours ago
|Letter of Motivation for MAIA Erasmus Mundus Scholarship - what fascinates me?
2 - Anam, the first rule of writing an Erasmus Mundus Letter of Motivation is that you avoid flowery language and...
GraduateAnamZahraHolt - 9 hours ago
|I learned to stand up for myself and for others. A meaningful story essay
3 - Jay, you had a strong story, however, I feel you did not express it in the most effective manner....
Undergraduatejay01Rahma155 - 11 hours ago
|Leadership offers wide spectrum to develop, implement and persuade people towards a positive change
4 - @Holt Thanks alot Holt for your valuable feedback. I have edited my essay as per the guidelines provided by...
ScholarshipRahma155Rahma155 - 12 hours ago
|SOP for MS in Business Analytics; the dynamic field of big data analytics, predictive analytics
9 - @admission2012 @Holt Hi All, I have revised the draft of my SOP. Kindly review the same. Thanks...
Graduatejdutta1992jdutta1992 - 12 hours ago
|Posessing great networking skills is like a treasure, and it's the key to knowing people
Scholarshipasmaasalemasmaasalem - 12 hours ago
|Writing Task 1: incidents and injuries per 100 million passenger miles travelled (PMT) by transport
2 - FBG, I cannot continue assessing your essay at this point because your text did not meet the minimum 150...
Writing FeedbackFlashBanGHolt - 12 hours ago
|ielts task 2 : - People should work a fixed number of hours per week
5 - Hi vipy, seeing it from your essay, in the second paragraph, avoid using the personal pronoun to convey your...
Writing Feedbackvipy411Jimmy879873 - 13 hours ago
|[Task 1] The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities
8 - Gang, excellent work! Also, the observations will vary per writer so there are no wrong or right presentations. Like...
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockworkHolt - 13 hours ago
|Essay for MS in Commerce at UVA - describe the unique aspects of your background and motivations
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback. I would have never notice school's great emphasis on academic...
Graduatemingrumingru - 13 hours ago
|writing task 2 : some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree
6 - Hi Alimin, I can see that from your essay, the third paragraph was a supporting point to the second...
Writing FeedbackAliminHamzahJimmy879873 - 13 hours ago
|Essay for MSF in Carey Business School - Business with humanity. Need your advices
4 - @Holt Thank you so much for your advice! I agree to what you've said about my past experience prior...
Graduatemingrumingru - 13 hours ago
|[CHEVENING] - potentials get higher, and skills grow accordingly to improve the society around me
2 - Dalia, open the essay with your current job. your first few paragraphs are not really relevant to the essay....
ScholarshipDalia123Holt - 13 hours ago
|SOP for Masters in Data Science program in Northeastern University
5 - @Holt thank you for your input. my recommenders wrote about how i changed in their letters and my transcripts...
Graduaterevanth92revanth92 - 15 hours ago
|Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people
3 - Umu, here is what I took from an analysis of your essay presentation. You did understand what the prompt...
Writing FeedbackUmmuHolt - 15 hours ago