|TED - Averting the Climate Crisis
5 - What can you do about the climate crises ? In couple of days At present, we acquire the new temperature records in...
Writing FeedbackAris05Hary01 - 02:52pm
|On Women's Equality Day, More Tech Companies Promise Change
2 - Eka, Its original tittle is "On Women's Equality Day, More Tech Companies Promise Change". Women Equality Day for 45 years maybe...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11Ilmi_03 - 02:52pm
|The Design of a Wave-Energy Machine and Its Best Location
2 - Hikuma, :) There are two diagrams about the design of a wind turbine and the best position to put it. ...
Writing Feedbackhirani03Ilmi_03 - 02:43pm
|Celebrity Life or Inspiring Personal Life?
NEW - Write about the following topic.
The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationship of celebrities such as actors, singers...
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|Writing IELTS Task 2 " Only large companies can improve environment" (Agree or Disagree)
2 - Hi Erpin92 The firms could maintain the employees' life to keep the environment clean and the firm could manage...
Writing FeedbackErpin92hirani03 - 02:40pm
|The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors,
3 - hi! i catch some grammatical errors. hope you can follow through The mass media has been more interesting to show well...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91azmi23 - 02:38pm
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 The map of West Park Secondari School
NEW - The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
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|Writing IELTS task 2: reporting the lives of ordinary people
NEW - The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend...
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|WRITING TASK 2 - CAUSES AND SOLUTIONS
2 - Hi Permata, let me you a hand, this is my suggestions for you. I hope it will develop your writing skill ...
Writing FeedbackPermata992ZiadRasyid24 - 02:33pm
|Summary Article How to Eat More Vegetables And Less Meat in Three Weeks
4 - Farida :) Restricting the intake of animal meat can reduce cholesterol and blood pressure. also Besides, it will...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18Ilmi_03 - 02:27pm
|IELTS Task 2 Media Should Broadcast Celebrities Lives Or Ordinary People?
5 - Hallo my lovely classmate! You did it well and I only have a little feedback for you. These days, many entertainment...
Writing FeedbackFaridadwi18ashelarisa48 - 02:25pm
|there are two recommendation letters, and i need your advise to improve quality of those letters.
NEW - the first letter To Whom It May Concern, I deem it a great pleasure to recommend Ye Gao, one...
|It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people su
7 - introduction,
Common people accept the best way to get information is Internet on the other hand, it is not only route...
Writing FeedbackTerminal23Hary01 - 02:15pm
|Writing task 2 (practice): topic "improving environment"
NEW - please help me to develop stronger ideas or paragraphs. my pleasure having your suggestions and critics. thanks! Q: individuals can do...
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|Only large companies and businesses can improve the environment, not individuals.
2 - Hi Reza, instead of correcting technical issues of your essay, I much prefer to focus on word choice you made. Here is...
Writing FeedbackBeauty17ilankelo21 - 02:09pm
|People prefer live today in some urban areas and communicate less with local residents.
6 - Hi Ibal, Time flies so fast and gives an influence of people's live. People are more likely to live in...
Writing Feedbackibal28Faridadwi18 - 02:05pm
|IELTS Task 2 : Media should show celebrities or ordinary people
4 - . here some suggestions that i hope can enhance your writing skill Radio, television, and the internet go over stories about...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19RAY93 - 02:04pm
|Only large companies and business can make a difference environment, is it right?
4 - Aloha Heru, below are my suggestions: Big companies could improve environment rather than people because they have big impact on society....
Writing FeedbackHeru22bung ilham - 02:04pm
|IELTS TASK 1 (The Improvement of Environment)
4 - Hello Maulida! Nice to see you in essay forum! Here a little feedback for you. The improvement of environment An environment...
Writing Feedbackmaulida07ashelarisa48 - 02:03pm
|IELTS WRITING TASK2 SEVERAL EXAMPLE OF INTRODUCTION
5 - Hello Your text is nicely done, but you could still apply some stylistic adjustments to it: is at alarm...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28Wolf Larsen - 01:57pm
|IELTS Writing Task 2 ( Full essay regarding environment in type of agree or disagree)
NEW - Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment. Only large companies and businesses can make a difference.
To what extent do you...
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|Parents have been through a lot of things, that's why I believe that they are outstanding teachers
5 - hai dipa
i have some suggestions for you
i hope it helps In the world Nowadays, people believe that...
Writing FeedbackDipa19rian31 - 01:53pm
|IELTS Task 1 : The Design for a Wind Turbine and its Location
4 - Atikah, it is a nice thread.
I can easily follow the process of this machine.
However, there are some corrections for...
Writing Feedbackdinartika19Ilmi_03 - 01:52pm
|IELTS TASK 5: Individuals can do anything to improve the environment, Only large company and busines
NEW - Individuals can do anything to improve the environment. Only large company and businesses can make a difference.
To what extent do you...
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|IELTS Essay Writing Test 3 About Agree and Disagree
7 - Hi, Aida, I just want to give some corrections on grammatical error and misspelling. Large companies and business have an...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18Erpin92 - 01:40pm
|Students have today more chances to study abroad, than it was before - practice on IELTS
4 - hi,, Vary of scholarship programs that were provided by national government or international universities. Those are a great chance for them...
Writing Feedbackazmi23Fadhilahumar91 - 01:39pm
|Peripheral Vision in Sports (Summary)
4 - Hi swr10.. Here I left comment for you, hope it can help you. Peripheral vision mention to what is condition when...
Writing Feedbackswr10ibal28 - 01:36pm
|How to See the Upcoming 'Great American Eclipse' (SUMMARY)
5 - Since 1979, total eclipse never crosses crossed American continent (past > 1979) in August 2017 you can get a scarce experience...
Writing FeedbackErpin92Hary01 - 01:36pm
|Should the media report ordinary people lives more than celebrities' lives? IELTS WRITING TASK 1
3 - i found that you have bold ideas in your essay. However, you need to pay attention in the way you compose...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11RAY93 - 01:25pm
|how a wind turbine will be built and where it is located
3 - hi! what a writing! i just would like to give some suggestions and a few corrections The diagrams illustrate...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11azmi23 - 01:25pm