|Draft PS for Msc AI, asking for advice.
5 - Thank you very much (T T)
I don't feel very confident about my PS, I do appreciate your words.
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|Forecasting sytem as an initial warning of earthquake
NEW - The deadly earthquake hit Italy on Wednesday 24 August 2016. It killed more than 260 people. This disaster have encouraged Italian scientist...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2: Major advance in technology over recent decade
2 - Hi Abal
Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been the right website to improve your skill. You should harness EF as well...
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|LEARNING VACATION as a new concept of holiday in 20th century - SUMMARY TASK 3
4 - Hi rosadesiana, Learning vacation is a new concept of holiday in 20th century, that offers the tripper to spend their vacation...
Writing Feedbackrosadesianaibal28 - 03:13am
|TED (What we can do to die well)
5 - Hi Naoki, I'd like to suggest you additional correction. The expenditures occupy 15 percent of the GDP in the United States...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28ibal28 - 02:30am
|Personal Statement for Korean Government Scholarship Program (KGSP) 2017.
9 - This is my revision, if possible, please help review it.
It has been a long time...
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|How to write an essay about Introduce myself ?
NEW - My name is Yen. I was born and grew up in Daklak province.Now, I'm studying third year in industrial university of Ho...
|IELTS Task: Major advances in technology over recent decades (Introduction & Conclusion)
2 - Hi Seed.
Welcome to Essay Forum. You have been the right medium to improve your skill. You are supposed to harness this...
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|IELTS - Writing Task 2 Providing healthy meal at school
2 - Hi Nurul Ilmy.
I am pleased to read your writing. You have shown a rapid positive progress. It is because you deal...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03akbarmappiare - 12:53am
|'only a few companies could stick out over 5 years' - WHAT MAKES SMALL BUSINESS SUCCESSFUL ?
2 - Hi Rosa..
These are my corrections. Make you sure that you deal with them. A Small business described as a small...
Writing Feedbackrosadesianaakbarmappiare - Yesterday
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 Satisfaction Level of Customers Airlines
3 - Hi Nurul, below are a few suggestions for your analysis. - satisfied the customers are on traveling
- the figure...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03justivy03 - Yesterday
|Why are you interested in pursuing careers in healthcare? (NM Discovery App, 300-500 char)
NEW - Please offer me suggestions on how to improve my essay! My interest first started in a place that is seemingly unrelated...
|Healthy way of life promotion. Most of children are accustomed with unhealthy lifestyle.
3 - Hi Eka, on promoting a healthy lifestyle, I personally think that as much as a parent can suggest what the kids or...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11justivy03 - Yesterday
|Parents have been through a lot of things, that's why I believe that they are outstanding teachers
4 - Hi Dipa19, please find the suggested modifications below; Introduction - In the worldA lot of people believe
Writing FeedbackDipa19justivy03 - Yesterday
|The Roles of Parents and Teachers in Controlling Diet for Children
5 - Hi Hikuma, below are my thoughts on your essay but before I do so, I would like to impart that controlling diet...
Writing Feedbackhirani03justivy03 - Yesterday
|Most people believe educational stakeholders are the best teacher. Agree or disagree?
4 - Hi Swr10, below are my thoughts on your argumentative essay. Introduction - Most people believe that educational stakeholders are the...
Writing Feedbackswr10justivy03 - Yesterday
|Summary : The World English Mania
5 - Hello, Aida. I'm trying to give you some suggestions regarding to direct speech and indirect speech.
I think it'd be better for...
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|'Master of cancer drug discovery is only available at Bradford' - applying Chevening Scholars
NEW - 4.Outline why you have selected your chosen 3 university courses & explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experiences...
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|SUMMARY TED 1, CLIMATE CRISIS - ALGORE; he urges the society to decrease the bad effects of it.
3 - Hi Rosa..
Welcome to Essay Forum. In fact, I am delighted to tell that you have been a right medium to improve...
Writing Feedbackrosadesianaakbarmappiare - Yesterday
|Parents are imperative to teach their children - even more than the professional teachers
3 - From that stand point --> standpoint, I totally agree that ... Although some people believe that stake holder --> stakeholders in...
Writing Feedbackibal28swr10 - Yesterday
|The general welfare of all its people is a necessary condition for the well-being of a society.
3 - hi :) i'm trying to check the grammar as i can, hopefully it helps your improvisation
For a society...
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|IELTS Writing Task 2 (Introduction and Conclusion): Major advances in technology over recent decades
3 - Hallo @swr10. You did it good, but I want to give a bit feedback. Introduction:
... has been running very...
Writing Feedbackswr10ibal28 - Yesterday
|The case for engineering our food - my summary video from ted.com
5 - this is my suggestion
In the episode, the speaker is Pamela Ronald who ...
Pamela Ronald, the speaker of TEDtalk and researcher,...
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|On the early Wednesday, 24th August, two earthquakes struck both Myanmar and Italy.
3 - Hi Saskia, i want to help you to fix some mistakes on your resume, i am not better than you but i...
Writing Feedbacksaskia98aidafitria18 - Yesterday
|Children have a tendency to select unhealthy lifestyle, especially to consume hyper-palatable food.
3 - Schools has an essential (...) healthy life since it they teach children about education trend issue => redundancy
you can add...
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|Customer satisfaction and specific aspect of flying experience with airlines in the United States
2 - Courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of ...
courtesy of the flight attendants, gate agents and schedules become a majority which...
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|IELTS WRITING TASK2 SEVERAL EXAMPLE OF INTRODUCTION
4 - Well done, but more improvements are needed in this IELTS writing practice. Let me help you some; The significant rise...
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|'eldest child in my family' - Essays for applying Chevening Scholars
3 - @ichanpants89 Thanks for your assessment. ☺...
ScholarshipAngela NangAngela Nang - Yesterday
|People experience problems while living abroad, especially those in the middle age (35 - 54)
5 - hi, i try to give some feedback for your essay
i think your introduction too long, make it simple The diagram...
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|Both parents and school should obligate to keep the children fit.
2 - @hailun11, This my suggestion: Nowadays --> "Nowadays" is an ancient vocabularies, therefore you need to change this word to be...
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