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Study Plan for my Canadian study permit application for MSc in Civil Engineering

NEW - Hi guys, I want your assistance in reviewing my study plan. Kindly let me know if it is good...

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Ielts task 2 about moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities

2 - Ezgi, let's start the review of your essay with your grammar mistakes. That way you get to know what...

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Essay about the disadvantages and advantages of taking a gap year. (Ielts writing task 2)

2 - Hoang, the good news is that you have managed to avoid making any grammar or sentence structure errors during...

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GLOCAL EMJMD PERSONAL STATEMENT

2 - @SanamHasnani I read your essay several times and always came to the same conclusion, you failed to respond to...

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Essay on a place where I grew up. 'Do the things you've got to do to, do the things you want to do'

2 - It is very unfortunate Andrea that this essay is exactly what you hoped it would not be. It is...

Undergraduateandrea4116 - 1 day agoHolt - 3 hours ago

Setting Up International Networking (Chevening scholarship).

2 - Bella you have confused an interactive working environment with networking. Being active in engaging one person at Lancaster University...

Scholarshipbellalee - 18 hours agoHolt - 4 hours ago

Ielts writing essay checking

NEW - Hi there, here is my writing task 2 about topic "Some people argue that history is of little and...

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SHORT REPORT ABOUT INTERIOR DESIGN

NEW - this my short research report about design room for children. Can someone look through and give me some comments...

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IELTS essasy Task 2 Young adults seem to prefer to spend their leisure time on shopping

5 - Nguyen, an essay, such as a such direct question essay or combination public pov and personal opinion requires a...

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Need Critique/Advice on Condensing the SoP - Microbiology PhD Program

2 - You can take this down to 1000 words if you simply review the essay and cut down in the...

GraduateMicrobot - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago

What is your greatest skill and how have you developed it over time (UC essay question)

3 - Amanda, you have made a word choice error by using the word "apart" when you mean to say "a...

Undergraduateakb - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago

An essay of IELTS task 2 about the reasons and effects of cosmetics

4 - @Holt @adhananj Thank you a lot. I will review and rewrite it in the most effective way as you...

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The reasons why some persons don't feel safe either at home or outside.

4 - Phuong, since you only wrote the opening paraphrase, I cannot say that you did a good job at it....

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Colour can affect how people feel. How true is this statement?

7 - Hi Ken, on the contrary, practicing by writing, without knowing how to write and what to write about will...

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Essay question - do your examples (cinema, painting) fulfill the mandate for socialist realism?

3 - Hi Berry, I have a different take on the given instruction. Based upon what I know and my experience...

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Why urban areas has led to overpopulation and which are possible solutions for these problems.

4 - Shazia, please review the rules on writing using the subject - verb agreement as this seems to be an...

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An IELTS task 2 essay on noise control

4 - Thanks for commenting on my essay. But, I think I'm not going to and not trying to have a...

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My Common App Essay: Personal Statement about what I have been through

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Discuss the merits and demerits of competitive sports in schools

3 - First thing I would do is change the word infants to children, since infants (newborns) can't play sports. I...

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Writing task 2 ielts. Teenage crime issue. 'Why an how' essay.

2 - Hi, I have some comments 1. Nowadays, in many countries, the percentage of criminals who are under 18...

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It seems that being odd isn't that very odd after all - Uchicago supplement

2 - I'm sure this goes without saying, but, "odd" is repeated too many times. Is there a purpose to the...

UndergraduateHeathen5 - Nov 11, 2018Fizzik - 1 day ago

Intrinsic and extrinsic motivation (one para)

2 - ... which is not totally true. I wouldn't use redundant words such as "totally". I would also add a...

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UNC Wilmington Application Essay Critique

4 - @Holt I was twelve years old when I bought my first computer. Little did I know, it would set...

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Human activities on land and in the sea cause extinction of many animal species

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Two-Part Question Food

2 - consuming a particular food There seems a growing mindset the higher its quality will be ... ( I am...

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IELTS Writing Task 2: Problems and Solutions Small Business

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Writing Task 2: Capital City Problems

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Real estate contractor manager - Chevening leadership and influencing skills essay

7 - Chevening may be looking for individuals who will engage with the global Chevening network. Put how will you contribute...

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What a PTDF 2019 overseas scholarship would do for me

3 - thanks for the corrections. I av started the reconstruction of the essay. God bless you...

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An IELTS Task 2 about Young vs Old leaders

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