|SUMMARY TASK 3 - LEARNING VACATION
3 - Hi Rosa, below are thoughts on your essay. - holiday in the 20th century,
- that offers the trippertraveler to...
Writing Feedbackrosadesianajustivy03 - 07:43pm
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 Satisfaction Level of Customers Airlines
3 - Hi Nurul, below are a few suggestions for your analysis. - satisfied the customers are on traveling
- the figure...
Writing FeedbackIlmi_03justivy03 - 07:17pm
|Why are you interested in pursuing careers in healthcare? (NM Discovery App, 300-500 char)
NEW - Please offer me suggestions on how to improve my essay! My interest first started in a place that is seemingly unrelated...
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Promoting healthy lifestyle for children
3 - Hi Eka, on promoting a healthy lifestyle, I personally think that as much as a parent can suggest what the kids or...
Writing Feedbackekalamarsyari11justivy03 - 07:00pm
|Parents are the best teacher. agree or disagree?
4 - Hi Dipa19, please find the suggested modifications below; Introduction - In the worldA lot of people believe
Writing FeedbackDipa19justivy03 - 06:37pm
|The Roles of Parents and Teachers in Controlling Diet for Children
5 - Hi Hikuma, below are my thoughts on your essay but before I do so, I would like to impart that controlling diet...
Writing Feedbackhirani03justivy03 - 06:21pm
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Parents are the best teacher. Agree or disagree?
4 - Hi Swr10, below are my thoughts on your argumentative essay. Introduction - Most people believe that educational stakeholders are the...
Writing Feedbackswr10justivy03 - 06:06pm
|TED on "Do Schools Kill Creativity?"
NEW - We're now running national education systems where mistakes are the worst thing students can make. They have become frightened of being wrong...
Writing Feedbacksaskia98 -
|Summary : The World English Mania
5 - Hello, Aida. I'm trying to give you some suggestions regarding to direct speech and indirect speech.
I think it'd be better for...
Writing Feedbackaidafitria18saskia98 - 05:48pm
|SUMMARY TASK 4 - WHAT MAKES SMALL BUSINESS SUCCESSFUL ?
NEW - SUMMARY TASK 4
What makes small business successful ? Small business described as a small company where there is no...
Writing Feedbackrosadesiana -
|Essays for applying Chevening Scholars
NEW - 4.Outline why you have selected your chosen 3 university courses & explain how this relates to your previous academic or professional experiences...
ScholarshipAngela Nang -
|Draft PS for Msc AI, asking for advice.
3 - Thank you for your advice, it is really helpful. And Can I ask what do think of my PS, is it...
GraduatePunchwePunchwe - 03:39pm
|TED (What we can do to die well)
3 - hi i am trying to chech your post, hope it will be useful :D Timothy Ihrig says that the American way...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28rosadesiana - 03:06pm
|SUMMARY TED 1, CLIMATE CRISIS - ALGORE
3 - Hi Rosa..
Welcome to Essay Forum. In fact, I am delighted to tell that you have been a right medium to improve...
Writing Feedbackrosadesianaakbarmappiare - 02:43pm
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Parents is The Best Teacher
3 - Question:
Parents are the best teacher. Agree or disagree? Answer: Introduction
Parents play an important role to educate their children....
Writing Feedbackibal28swr10 - 02:37pm
|The general welfare of all its people is a necessary condition for the well-being of a society.
3 - hi :) i'm trying to check the grammar as i can, hopefully it helps your improvisation
For a society...
Writing Feedbackhelmmerosadesiana - 02:33pm
|IELTS Writing Task 2 (Introduction and Conclusion): Major advances in technology over recent decades
3 - Hallo @swr10. You did it good, but I want to give a bit feedback. Introduction:
Development of technology has been...
Writing Feedbackswr10ibal28 - 02:20pm
|my summary video from ted.com which is about agriculture
5 - this is my suggestion
In the episode, the speaker is Pamela Ronald who studies about genetic engineering to make plane saver from...
Writing FeedbackHeru22Dipa19 - 02:18pm
|On the early Wednesday, 24th August, two earthquakes struck both Myanmar and Italy.
3 - Hi Saskia, i want to help you to fix some mistakes on your resume, i am not better than you but i...
Writing Feedbacksaskia98aidafitria18 - 02:03pm
|TASK 2: many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle
3 - Schools has an essential role to lead children gain their healthy life since it they teach children about education trend issue...
Writing FeedbackIforsaekalamarsyari11 - 01:50pm
|satisfaction levels (writing task 1)
2 - Courtesy of flight attendants, courtesy of check in/gate agent and schedules become a majority
courtesy of the flight attendants, gate agents and...
Writing Feedbackayu sasmita08rosadesiana - 01:48pm
|IELTS WRITING TASK2 SEVERAL EXAMPLE OF INTRODUCTION
4 - Well done, but more improvements are needed in this IELTS writing practice. Let me help you some; The significant rise...
Writing FeedbackNaoki28eddies - 01:48pm
|'eldest child in my family' - Essays for applying Chevening Scholars
3 - @ichanpants89 Thanks for your assessment. ☺...
ScholarshipAngela NangAngela Nang - 01:31pm
|Writing IELTS task 1 : Integration problems for people living abroad
5 - hi, i try to give some feedback for your essay
i think your introduction too long, make it simple
The chart illustrates...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48Heru22 - 12:59pm
|Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for s
2 - @hailun11, This my suggestion: Nowadays --> "Nowadays" is an ancient vocabularies, therefore you need to change this word to be...
Writing Feedbackhailun11swr10 - 12:57pm
|IELTS - Writing Task 1 Satisfaction Level of Customers Airlines
2 - Hello, daya23 The chart provides us information about precentage percentage of passangers satisfaction level of US air travel service in 1999,...
Writing Feedbackdaya23Naoki28 - 12:57pm
|Writing Task 1 (US Airline satisfaction level) and Task 2 (The need of healthy meal to children)
2 - The chart and table show the satisfaction level of passangers and aspect point of flying experience of airlines in the US in...
EssaysZiadRasyid24ekalamarsyari11 - 12:53pm
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - GOOD NUTRITION FOR CHILDREN LEARNING ACTIVITIES
4 - hi daya, i read your essay. I think your writing is good. I just find some grammatical mistake and wrong spelling like...
Writing Feedbackdaya23Heru22 - 12:46pm
|IETLS Writing part 2 : Unhealthy lifestyle for children
4 - Hi ashelarisa, let me you a hand, this is my correction 1. Unhealthy lifestyle, especially in food, has affected many children...
Writing Feedbackashelarisa48ZiadRasyid24 - 11:55am
|Writing task 2 Children Unhealthy lifesyle
3 - Hi Fadhilah umar, let me you a hand, this is my correction 1. There are many kind of food that can...
Writing FeedbackFadhilahumar91ZiadRasyid24 - 11:45am