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Writing by a ESL student-Academic Essay on Education (*Has to do with college application! :) )

NEW - Hi I'm a non-native English speaker who is writing essays for college application. My writing can be sloppy and lack in flavor...

Writing Feedbackmarkcho0106 -
"Literature takes us to a better place, a different place." (Archetypal Theory)

4 - Merged: Literature takes us to a different, better place, and connects to our life's.(Archetypal Theory) Formal research essay, therefore it...

Book ReportsLaraibLaraib - 12:40pm
The Internet provides us many valuable things but also cause some problems; IELTS task

NEW - Could you comments on the structure? reminds me of the unprecise expression sentence.This is my first day to use this website, I...

Writing Feedbackmessityy -
What is the greatest love story of all? The speech.

2 - Personally, i do suppose that you need to specify what you are going to write about as your theme's speech, requiring the...

Essaysserendipityyyygiangnt248 - 10:03am
[ielts Task 2] Increasing global demand of oil and gas, should continue explore?

4 - Hi, your essay's ideas are quite good. However, i recommend that you should check carefully the meaning and the usage of each...

Writing Feedbackyon959giangnt248 - 09:48am
IELTS Task 1 essay practice - Population Distribution in two different countries, two different year

4 - Both forecast and forecasted are correct. I think it is more appropriate to use either elderly people or simply elders Considering that...

Writing FeedbackfatmajannaDaniel1998 - 07:59am
IELTS Academic Writing task 2 - The Person Who Should Teach Children

5 - Fahra, welcome to EssayForum :) I am glad to see there are many new members in this forum recently. However, you need...

Writing FeedbackRadhiyahFahraichanpants89 - 06:42am
Fresh tea leaves picking is the first step of manufacturing black tea; IELTS diagram

NEW - Two different methods of manufacturing black tea are depicted in the diagrams. The two of these processes are traditional and modern ways....

Writing Feedbackmadmoiselle -
IELTS; To read or not to read: That is a question - can we learn that way about a foreign country?

3 - but this approach is really suitable for everyone : However is this the best way for... yet for someone who unfamiliar with...

Writing FeedbackVictoria1015madmoiselle - 06:28am
IELTS: VIOLENCE SHOWN ON TV AND IN THE CINEMA MIGHT EXPLAIN YOUNG PEOPLE'S VIOLENT BEHAVIOUR

4 - ... this unpleasant phenomenon ought to be taken so that to reduce the amount of violence faced by our society. I think...

Writing FeedbackDaniel1998giangnt248 - 03:48am
IELTS: WHETHER TRAVELLING AND WORKING ABROAD ARE THE ONLY REASONS TO LEARN A FOREIGN LANGUAGE OR NOT

3 - Hi, Daniel, Here is my comments: Nevertheless, some people claim that learning a foreign language is a good (you may...

Writing FeedbackDaniel1998yon959 - Yesterday
It is sometimes said that borrowing money from a friend can harm the friendship. Do you agree?

4 - Hi, Payal, I think you did not directly answer the question properly (maybe I am wrong). The question is asking how...

Writing Feedbackpayal1982yon959 - Yesterday
We can't affirm that the living certain place is better.

4 - Dear Hien, I think that comments and remarks above have mostly summed up the changes and enhancements, you need to apply...

Writing FeedbackhohienSunrise011 - Yesterday
Study on English-Chinese Translation of JANE EYRE Based on Juliane House's TQA Model

2 - ... huge impact in translation history, they've wentgone through a long period to give anarelatively objective system for translation studies. ... ...

Research PapersSWMGalaxyVictoria1015 - Yesterday
GRE Argument:"WWAC radio station..."

2 - ... likely to choose the Internet rather than the radio station to meet their needs. ... radio station which can supply a...

Writing FeedbacksunshinelybVictoria1015 - Yesterday
ielts- should we provide children in rural communities with more schools or computers

5 - Thank you so much justivy03. Your feedbacks help me a lot. I will put more effort into writing....

Writing Feedbackhuynhngocminh99huynhngocminh99 - Yesterday
Transfer Application to University of Michigan: What unique qualities attract you to this school?

4 - Thanks for reviewing it. It was a little unfinished... Just stuck in a vicious circle of aggravation. Let me know if...

Undergraduatejessawjessaw - Jul 22, 2016
Low GPA - Transfer Admission to Borough of Manhattan Community College

3 - @justivy03 thank you so much! Those small changes make a big difference, especially on the closing. Changes made. Thank you again....

LettersTinamaciasTinamacias - Jul 22, 2016
First hand smokers must not be allowed to smoke in public places. I agree with that statement

NEW - Smoking should be banned in public places The people, who smoke, are increasing/growing day by day through the worldwide/ all over...

Writing Feedbackanuula -
What can you gain from learning cultures? What aspect of french history and culture interests you?

2 - Hi Sean, first of all WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that this is just the start of a great...

Scholarshipsnarkalertjustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
The causes of less productive agricultural land degradation during the 1990s in 3 continents

3 - Hi Naomi, below are my thoughts on your essay. - wasis the main reason - to of land degradation -...

Writing FeedbackTitus14justivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
Disillusionment about the nature of human Power in King Lear and Tempest

3 - Hi Debayan, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that this is just the start of a great...

EssaysLitstudebajustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
Discuss The Effects of Unplanned Urban Expansion

5 - Hi Emin, thank you for considering our suggestion and remarks here on EF, we definitely strive to provide you with the most...

Writing Feedbackeminhaqijustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
In a modern world people always face the dilemma to own a car. Perspective for the next 20 years.

3 - Hi Khaleed, I can see that you received a comprehensive feedback from one of our EF contributors and I hope you follow...

Writing Feedbackkhaleddjustivy03 - Jul 22, 2016
IELTS: The qualities of life of people in big cities are worse. Give causes and measures.

4 - hi Keely, on reading your essay, I found that you have done quite nice job and used a good range of vocabulary....

Writing Feedbackkantyjanghuynhngocminh99 - Jul 22, 2016
IELTS: People live in small family units rather than big family groups. Is it positive or negative?

6 - First of all, I feel confused about what the topic for this essay is since you show two topic in different styles...

Writing Feedbackkantyjangnguyendinhtuong - Jul 22, 2016
Talk about the pros/cons of this era as is full of daily inventions.

4 - Hi Smith, first of all, your essay is very relevant to todays world. You made sure that the information you gathered are...

Writing Feedbacktwidjustivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
IELTS: individuals are more and more dependent or independent.

3 - Hi Keely, as I read along, I notice the trend of your essay, you seem to repeat words that you have used...

Writing Feedbackkantyjangjustivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
TOEFL: a large number of celebrities are not equipped with skills necessary for a politician

3 - Hi Natasha, as I read through your essay, I must say that you are able to convey your message with clarity. I...

Writing Feedbacknatasha_139justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
Payment Disparity in Sports: Sexist or Economic

3 - Hi Julian, indeed WELCOME to the Essay Forum Family. We hope that this is just the start of this great partnership. Here...

Writing Feedbackcrzydude42justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016