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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions

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Many think that artificially intelligence robots will do all jobs eventually. To what extent do you

2 - Todays, technology has developed dramatically and numerous technical devices have been applied in normal life. One of the most...

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prevention is better than cure

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Should countries around the world establish close connections regarding culture and business?

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IELTS writing: TOPIC:the most common mistakes that students make when translating Vietnamese into E

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IELTS task 2: EDUCATION-TEACHERS (both views and opinion)

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The number of family houses built in different US regions in 2006 - 2012. - Describe a line graph

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Write a paragraph (110 - 150 words) about what job would you like to choose in the future.

2 - You do not really prove that your father's occupation and your exposure to it influenced you to become a...

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It is said that children are able to get their goals if they try their best to do it

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People being monitored are often unaware that this is happening - what you think about this?

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Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: IMPRISONMENT

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Computers are believed to be smarter than humans by several scientists in no time

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - SAVING ANIMAL SPECIES

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Some people believe that adverts are conducive to economic development, but others disagree

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Task 2: It is argued that newspapers are an optimal way to learn news - what's your opinion?

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It is believed that money is the key to happiness. One can still feel happy regardless of being rich

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WRINGTING TAKS 2 - NATURAL TALENT OR BEING TAUGHT?

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IELTS Writing task 2 : Gyms and Sports clubs

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IELTS WRITING TASK 2_SELF-DRIVING SYSTEMS FOR VEHICLES

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With increased global demand in oil and gas, undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up

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WRITING TASK 1 : The line graph shows the percentage of New Zealand population from 1950 to 2050

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The role of computers and teachers in education

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Despite cars damage the environment, their manufacture and their use continue to increase

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How to write a comparison essay about shopping online and shopping at stores

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With the help of advanced technology, the qualities of people's life has improve. However...

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IELTS Writing task 2_tourism could endanger local inhabitant and environment

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Writing task1, Expected city visits by country of origin for 2018

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - Compare two maps - development in the layout of a university campus

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The pie chart illustrate what seniors in Beaufort, Westmont and Whitford High School invested on

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