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IELTS writing task 1 on maps / hydroelectric dam

3 - Thank you very much Maria. I'll update my essay based on your comments!...

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Statement of Purpose for MSc in Data Science (Marketing Analysis)

3 - Thank you so much for your comments, really appreciate your help!...

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"Parents should be free to decide whether or not to vaccine their babies" ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

3 - @freshjul287 I suggest that you review usage of articles and other grammar-related words. You should as well look into...

Writing Feedbackfreshjul287 - 19 hours agoMaria - 6 hours ago

ielts task 2: discuss both views of choosing subjects at university

3 - Hi @nhuxuan, here are some points in your essay that should be improved. 1. In the body paragraphs,...

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''Help me with my process: How bricks are produced''

3 - @dungpharma97 I suggest looking into finding better transitions for your essay. Avoid straining your sentences by extending unnecessarily the...

Writing Feedbackdungpharma97 - 14 hours agoMaria - 9 hours ago

One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you

2 - I appreciate how straightforward your letter is. There are a couple of technical suggestions that I would like you...

LettersLoloMahmoud - 12 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago

How this particular study can help me achieve my career goals

2 - I suggest mentioning more than what you have provided here. A well-thought out essay could help boost your applications....

Scholarshipjves - 14 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago

Free University International master - physics

2 - On a technical level, I suggest three things: paraphrasing some longer sentences to shorten them, reviewing usage of capitalization,...

Graduatesunjhi03 - 14 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago

[IELTS] Money on protecting animals vs human well-being

3 - @anhpnguyen To create a more natural flow in your essay, I suggest rephrasing some of your lines. Remember that...

Writing Feedbackanhpnguyen - 16 hours agoMaria - 10 hours ago

IELTS task 2: more young people in society - evaluation of this trend

4 - Hi, I agree that some graders do not want to see a single sentence paragraph, so I would try...

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Letter of Motivation - MSc Economics Universitat Hamburg

4 - General: I revised the first four paragraphs. Revision: I am a 23-year-old Indonesian who graduated from the...

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Is Medical radiation safe?

2 - Bframirez, On a technical level, I suggest that you review the usage of punctuation. There were a few sentences...

Research Papersbframirez91 - 1 day agoMaria - 1 day ago

Tofel writing part 2--whether children nowadays are more difficult to educate that in previous times

3 - Thanks for your help! I will manage to revise my article accordingly....

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MOTIVATIONAL LETTER - EXCHANGE PROGRAM (Leuven KU)

2 - Akurvensc, Your essay already has sufficient information regarding your personal background. It is wise that you mentioned your motivation...

Lettersakurvensc - 1 day agoMaria - 1 day ago

[IELTS TASK 2] Longer Prison Sentences And Other Solutions. Best way to reduce crime rate

2 - In paragraph two, give at least two examples of criminals who were converted into model citizens and cite that...

Writing FeedbackTheshadow - 1 day agoConstance - 1 day ago

Writing task 1 - layouts of a university's sports center

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IELTS Writing task 2: Discuss about advantages and disadvantages of private medical services.

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Build Indonesia's Potential Through Border Economic Potential

3 - Darkknight1995, I suggest that you try shortening your sentences to make your thoughts more comprehensible. While lengthy sentences...

Scholarshipdarkknight1995 - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago

Essay topic: Developments in the field of artificial intelligence - a positive impact for the future

2 - In paragraph one - some individuals... A.I. ....I would argue that the computer can be wiser than humans. ...

Writing FeedbackHuyhuynh2001 - 2 days agoConstance - 2 days ago

"Astana Garden School" program - Motivation Letter for Scholarship

2 - In paragraph one change crucial part of to personal asset to. Also spell out the numbers versus using them...

Lettersanuarine - 2 days agoConstance - 2 days ago

Scholarship essay for Opportunity Fund Program by Usef...any suggestions ?

2 - NirajP, I admire how you started your essay by telling your personal story. Generally speaking, the flow of...

ScholarshipNirajP - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago

When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.

2 - Your manner of writing is good. A lot of readers would appreciate how straightforward you are when it comes...

Writing Feedbackthanhphuong02 - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago

IELTS: Future science will make human almost immortal. Is that good?

2 - Coke, The direction of your essay is sufficient. I simply suggest extending the rationale of your explanations. For...

Writing Feedbackcoke - 2 days agoMaria - 2 days ago

Mental Illnesses and The Causes

2 - Tyson, While your essay is sufficient in terms of expounding details, you should be wary of structuring your...

Research PapersWildmanty - Mar 23, 2019Maria - 2 days ago

IELTS_TASK 2: advantage and disadvantage of shopping online.

2 - Hello TUYET PHAM 1. Word count is 341 which is way too many to jot down in 40 minutes....

Writing FeedbackTUYET PHAM - Mar 23, 2019coke - 2 days ago

Ielt writing task 1 The table below shows key data on the demographics of 4 different countries

2 - Gio1999pt, On a technical level, I would suggest looking into studying more about proper punctuation, subject-verb agreements, and...

Writing Feedbackgio1999pt - Mar 17, 2019Maria - Mar 22, 2019

IELTS Task 2 - Causes and Solutions of Obesity and decreasing Health

3 - Thank you very much for your words of appreciation....

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Goal of study and study plan for Korean university application

3 - Itha20, Looking through your essay, I think it's already better than a lot of others I have personally...

Graduateitha20 - Mar 21, 2019Maria - Mar 22, 2019

Inventing computers as one of the most crucial human's achievements for the last hundred years

2 - In paragraph one should be humans have contributed for the last hundred years or if you want to say...

Writing FeedbackKaraVo - Mar 21, 2019Constance - Mar 22, 2019

IELTS Task 2: The benefits of multigenerational workplace

2 - Just a few questions that when answered will strengthen what has been written. What do you mean by "While...

Writing Feedbackcoke - Mar 21, 2019Constance - Mar 22, 2019