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Causes and measures to overcome overweight.

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Why Georgia Tech essay? - Research Opportunities

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The advertisers use advanced techniques to show their products better and more attractive. TOEFL

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IELTS - The digital and traditional newspapers

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Prompt: Research a person to find information about his/her life and achievements.

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Should government be fully responsible for the underprivileged people?

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Care taking of kids when parents are away

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I feel a sense of pride in being so closely associated with the field of computer science. MS SOP

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IELTS - Artists have more attention than scientists

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The neighborhood I grew up in (grateful for the great influences and for my parents for being there)

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Unprivileged background. USEFP Global UGRAD - my personal statement

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Some countries have a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of elderlies

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IELTS GT Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world.

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Why do we need music? And what about 'traditional' tracks? Aren't they obsolete today?

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What invention in the last 30 years has made the most difference in the lives of people?

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Essay about the charts' summarization - money for children's sports in Britain

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Cover letter for IOM Security Assistant - Hudaydah, Yemen

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Many employers are now offering their employees the option to work from home.

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MOTIVATION LETTER FOR PG COURSE IN GERMANY (Photovoltaics Engineering) at Köthen Anhalt University

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IELTS - useful or harmful chemicals in our food

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Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs: Applicable in to education at all levels

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IELTS; The media should reduce bad news that they write or say

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The youngster population surpass the number of older people in some countries

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Should we allow children to make their own decisions on a common matters (such as food or clothes)

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Some people become famous at young age. Is it good thing or bad thing?

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Many people prefer to use public transportation while others choose personal cars

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Some people think that the teenager years are the happiest times of most people's lives.

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Several advantages of playing sport games

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Some parent allow their children to get busy with paid work

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(CBEST)- A sharp increases in the minimum wage or no

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