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Writing task 1: The percentage of 10-15 year-olds chatting online and playing games.

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Is Violence the Result of TV, computers, and video games?

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Persuasive Essay about different issues caused by computers

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Sport amenities as an optimal method of making the public healthier?

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30 year old returning to college, what broad perspective do I bring to the engineering classroom

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Phage Genomics Course Entrance Essay; discovery-based science interest - course participating

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The Identity of Postpartum Depression and Treatments Available

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Parents have a dilemma and are unsure if their children should compete or cooperate with others

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"Why I have chosen invasive cardiovascular technology"

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The prevention on health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine.

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[IETLS writing] In many countries, the proportion of older people is steadily increasing

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Art is considered an essential part of all culture throughout the world. However, these days fewer a

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A lot of young people spend their time sitting in front of the television at home

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Ship for the World Youth Program JAPAN- LEADERSHIP SKILLS AND CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY ESSAY

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Endeavour Scholarship - writing about proposed program, host organisation, etc.

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Cover letter for study permit in Canada at Cape Breton University

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Television influences badly on children's creativity

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Graduate Statement of Purpose for Biomedical Engineering in University of Toronto

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Persuasive Research Paper on Government Cost (Ethical, Financial) of Safety though Surveillance

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IELTS TASK 2: Some people think that the government should pay one of the parents

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Statement of Purpose for Master of Strategic Communication for University of Canberra

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The body of an ielts essay related to personal happiness achievement

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Writing task 1 in ielts about the table of poverty people in Australia in 1999.

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[Ielts task 2] Education's effectiveness in leading people to a healthy eating habit

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Should museums charge for admission? Benefits and drawbacks.

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[TOEFL] INCREASING THE PRICE OF GAS AND ELECTRICITY IS WISE, IN MY OPINION!

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Rates of smoking in Someland

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