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IELTS Writing Task 2: 'private schools' essay

NEW - Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state...

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SCHOLARSHIP: Short essay on something of personal importance to you

3 - Just recently, two universities in Singapore was were hit by a phishing incident and suffered IT network breaches. the...

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[IELTS Writing part 2] Playing computer games is harmful. Do you agree with it?

4 - Topic: Outline your financial and education needs and how the scholarship would benefit you financial needs. First and...

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IELTS Writing task 1 : The three companies' waste

2 - @Red Moon your writing has explained the graph in a good way. My advice is you could add more...

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Learning nationalism through activities in education, youth, and Indonesian culture

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Essay On Early Childhood Play and Education

2 - Amy, you accidentally placed your thesis statement at the conclusion of the essay. Move it up to the last...

Research PapersAmerzy1588Holt - 16 hours ago

Motivation Letter of Taking M.TESOL program in Monash University

2 - Ahmad, a motivational letter should be short but informative and effective in delivering an overview of your statement of...

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Intended major and future goals and why you have chosen your field of interest

2 - Ngan, this is absolutely the wrong response to the prompt. Your response sounds like a a childish paper written...

Writing FeedbackngannkhHolt - 18 hours ago

Violent Video Games are A-OK

2 - Jason, the first improvement that you can make to this essay is further developing your opening statement to include...

Research PapersjasonlongjrHolt - 18 hours ago

IELTS Writing task 1 : Why young executives are stressed at work and the consequences.

2 - Why did you use "cause or exacerbated"? In my opinion, I think you can use " cause or...

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Share information in scientific research, business and the academic world. Good or bad

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Past or Future. Why not to move just forward?

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Technological skills through computer games? Any other influence?

5 - furthermore this is able to stimulate them - this can stimulate them they do not be easier to...

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The Effects of Video Games on Kids - English 102 Essay

2 - Burton, complete your thesis statement, that it's, your introductory paragraph by closing it with information about what you hope...

Writing FeedbackNegativebob1Holt - 1 day ago

Writing 2: It has been suggested that everyone in the world wants to own a car, a TV and a fridge.

3 - Grammar error? The boosting economic development and growing number ......

Writing FeedbackArlenkevin1983 - 1 day ago

IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Industrial and business center relocation

3 - @Ahmadham However, this might create a new congestion spot ... I think this can be expanded, or...

Writing FeedbackAhmadhamkevin1983 - 2 days ago

[IELTS Writing part 2] Money should be spent on health education instead of medical technology

5 - @mandyduong It is a excellent essay, however, I am not convinced about the conclusion about "Develop countries", for there...

Writing Feedbackmandyduongkevin1983 - 2 days ago

The Importance of Korean Community to The Philippines

2 - Han, what is the point of this essay? The introduction doesn't make any sense. Your first paragraph must properly...

Research PaperszyxpehaHolt - 2 days ago

It is high time to encourage different sources of energy all over the world

2 - Hi sfiza You have answered the question in your writing. And it could have been better if you...

Writing Feedbacksfizaflykitten - 2 days ago

Should foreigners pay more for tourism ? Should the host country require more money ?

2 - @tranvinhquang720 Hi, I would like to give you my brief feedback about the essay. First of all, I assume...

Writing Feedbacktranvinhquang720mandyduong - May 19, 2017

Punishment for Children is important for them to learn the difference between right and wrong?

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Writing Feedbackkevin1983kevin1983 - May 19, 2017

Must the free time of kids be always educational?

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Summary: How can parents help students survive the exam season?

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University of Auckland Scholarship Essay_Skill and Knowledge gained from the study

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Scholarshipkris_2017kris_2017 - May 18, 2017

University Scholarship Cancellation Appeal Letter

3 - @ Holt what portions do you think I should remove?...

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"Tell us about an achievement or ability not reflected in this application."

2 - Patrick, this essay covers more of the requirements for an obstacle you had to overcome instead of an achievement...

Undergraduatepoody11Holt - May 18, 2017

Too much requirements from students? Should they focus strictly on the academic subjects?

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Writing FeedbackyuzukachanAhmadham - May 17, 2017

The line graph: tourists to England who visited four different attractions in Brighton.

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Writing Feedbackbaonhisumandyduong - May 16, 2017

Internet Users as percentage of populations

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PERSONAL STATEMENT ON WHY I SHOULD BE CONSIDERED FOR SCHOLARSHIP AT HERRIOT WATT UNIVERSITY.

4 - @sartajzzz Thank you @startajzzz..,I shall follow that...

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