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|Why do I want to pursue Coastal Science and Policy? My passion for marine conservation
5 - Thanks Holt I am trying to understand the refernce of family participation you made. There is no mention of...
Graduatesam1982sam1982 - 2 hours ago
|University is the better route than school to reach successful career
2 - @sfiza I have found some grammatical issues throughout your essay. For instance, are effective wayS particular areas: Physicians...
Writing Feedbacksfizashereenzalloum - 2 hours ago
|Urban areas have more crimes. Direct question essay.
7 - Nice essay however, they're were many problems with your grammar. Please check him: UNEQUAL SOCIETIES: INCOME DISTRIBUTION...
Writing FeedbackJimmy879873shereenzalloum - 2 hours ago
|Cover letter for accountant position
NEW - Dear HR Department, I am applying for the position of Receivable Accountant which was currently advertised on vietnamworks.com website....
|Which is better for a country? A few people earning high salary or government limiting?
NEW - In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think this is good for the country,...
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|Personal Statement for UCL Masters Financial Risk Management - why this program and school?
5 - Dear all, please find below my revised personal statement. As always, greatly appreciate any feedback to improve my statement....
Graduatejtankxjtankx - 6 hours ago
|In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV
Writing FeedbackErica Tinsfiza - 8 hours ago
|Focused on the why I want to pursue the master's degree than giving too much of a story
6 - I have added this:- As I detailed in my Statement of Purpose, while scientific research is one of...
Graduatesam1982sam1982 - 9 hours ago
|Personal statement for LSE- Master in risk and finance
Graduateetyu10May54 - 10 hours ago
|We can only see a short distance ahead, but we can see plenty there that needs to be done. Statement
5 - I myself am struggling with writing an SOP but as Holt as mentioned the feedback I have been getting...
GraduateanalyticsGuysam1982 - 13 hours ago
|My appetite for designing led me for this program - CMU Product design
GraduateYashwanth2395sam1982 - 13 hours ago
|Too Little time too many choices - Personal Statement for the MSC program
3 - Thank you Holt, since I did a a different version which talks more about the reason why and focuses...
Graduatesam1982sam1982 - 14 hours ago
|TOEFL: Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom.
5 - You are already providing the reasons on why the teachers shouldn't be providing their views in the essay. The...
Writing Feedbackalwakeelsam1982 - 14 hours ago
|Creating the next Apple Siri - SoP for CMU MS in Language Technologies
3 - Hi Holt. Thanks a lot for those wonderful suggestions. I took them very seriously and I am not sharing...
Graduatevijendra4vijendra4 - 1 day ago
|Need help with the grammar of some sentences from my sop
4 - Mengchen , since you did not post the full paragraphs that needed to be corrected, I am not sure...
Grammar, UsageiOnerionHolt - 1 day ago
|Statement of Purpose for Erasmus Mundus masters program in Materials Science
2 - Alao, your essay needs to be more focused on making you stand out as a candidate. At the moment,...
ScholarshipAlao0702Holt - 1 day ago
|Correction of sentence written in school declaration
3 - @Reikalexis For the second point, it is an equation and you have to know the number of hours to...
Grammar, UsageReikalexisalwakeel - 1 day ago
|Trying new things and taking risks is the cornerstone of success
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your prompt resonse and your help. Yes, I am preparing for TOEFL exam,...
Writing Feedbackalwakeelalwakeel - 1 day ago
|I WANT BAND 8.0 - IELTS2 - FATHERHOOD IS AS MUCH IMPORTANT AS MOTHERHOOD.
Writing Feedbackadin3a1Holt - 2 days ago
|Job Application for a part-time job
2 - Vishnu, the letter that you wrote is not properly developed. You only delivered the most specific prompt requirements as...
LettersriniriniHolt - 2 days ago
|The general picture and percentage about weight of residents who live in Charlestown in 1955 & 2015
2 - Carol, the information in this chart is incomplete and inaccurate. It does not properly inform the reader, neither does...
Writing Feedbackcarol326Holt - 2 days ago
|Complain about the restaurant service.
3 - However shoul have been begun as a new sentence whenever you use it. minutes for food. However,... You can...
Lettershappyfunnyrinirini - 2 days ago
|Do a good dead, stand up and lead
2 - Ahmed , I believe that the first 2 paragraphs are on point in reference to the first 2 questions...
ScholarshipSoliman97Holt - 2 days ago
|Spread the positivity! - Global UGRAD program: Why would you be a great participant?
3 - @Holt Thanks a bunch for your helpful advices and great ideas! I'll revise it and will be posting soon...
UndergraduateLutfianuriLutfianuri - 2 days ago
|Write an essay about someone different from yourself who has made an impact on your life?(My friend)
6 - @michelle1234 Hi Michelle, overall I think your essay just lacks of some depth. First of all, why is your...
Undergraduatemichelle1234Michell20 - Dec 12, 2017
|Writing a letter of recommendation for one of my employees.
Lettersofmoraleofmorale - Dec 12, 2017
|My interest in marketing. Personal Statement for applying a marketing master programme
3 - @Holt Thank you for your kindly help! I think your pieces of advice are really helpful. Due to your...
Graduatexujiayingxujiaying - Dec 12, 2017
|The development of photography has changed the way people see the world. (Causal Effect Analysis)
Writing FeedbackJoe_edeskutyHolt - Dec 12, 2017
|"Why Cornell" Essay - Cosmology and Quantum Theory
2 - Isabella , maybe leave out the reference to the zombie cat at the start? It doesn't sound like it...
UndergraduateIsabellaalmeidaHolt - Dec 12, 2017
|HKU Personal Statement - Journalism
3 - Julie, your essay is indecisive and portrays a high school senior at a crossroads who has not really made...
UndergraduatejuliengHolt - Dec 12, 2017