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Balance - UBC Tell us about who you are.

3 - @Holt Thank you for the response! This is my first time using this website so I am...

UndergraduateChroma - 6 hrs agoChroma - 3 hrs ago

Overcoming setbacks. UBC personal profile essay : TELL US ABOUT WHO YOU ARE

2 - The problem is that YOU HAVE TO REWRITE THIS ESSAY FROM SCRATCH. Read the prompt and then review your...

Undergraduatelin003 - 10 hrs agoHolt - 4 hrs ago

Living in a foreign country can cause serious social problems

2 - I am not sure what prompt you think you are responding to but, it is not in line with...

Writing Feedbackanduyen0212 - 13 hrs agoHolt - 13 hrs ago

Unsatisfied with my capabilities - how would your friends/family describe you

2 - Well, this is a good attempt but, the problem is that everything is from the first person point of...

UndergraduatePeezsTW - 18 hrs agoHolt - 16 hrs ago

An emerging young adult - UBC Essay Application: Tell us about yourself

2 - Why is that so? Offer an example of your "adulting" skills in terms of being a responsible and...

UndergraduateJaydenzhang0928 - 19 hrs agoHolt - 16 hrs ago

The diagrams show the flooding area and two solutions to cope with that.

2 - Please work on creating more understandable sentences for your essays. In this particular essay, you truly have a problem...

Writing Feedbackgreencoconut - Nov 16, 2021Holt - 20 hrs ago

CHILDCARE BY AN EXTENDED FAMILY OR PARENTS?

2 - Reviews for essays based on IELTS band descriptors are done in a private capacity already. Right now, we only...

Writing FeedbackPhuongnguyen256 - Nov 13, 2021Holt - 20 hrs ago

"The environment is no one's property to destroy..." personal statement essay

2 - You do not need the words of others to impress your ideology regarding the environment upon the reviewer....

Scholarshipalbayyinahp1304 - 21 hrs agoHolt - 20 hrs ago

Networking Is Being With The Right Person - Chevening Networking Essay

2 - I am reviewing your essay upon instructions from the forum moderators. Focus on your professional networking skills and...

ScholarshipLeo007 - Nov 16, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago

Essay about replacing Art, Sport and Music subjects with subjects such as Information Technology

2 - You are referring to this essay in terms of task 1 wording. This is not good to use...

Writing FeedbackWintermarchen - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago

Motivation letter for Ph.D. in Max Planck School of Cognition (Cognitive Psychology & Neuroscience)

2 - You have the ability to control the content of your personal statement, based on what the prompt requirements are,...

Lettersnie007 - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago

Employers should give longer vacations to employees ( writing task 2)

2 - The prompt restatement + opinion is incorrect. It does not contain the original reference points for the topic basis....

Writing Feedbackirvan - Nov 21, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago

IELTS 1 - Next year developments in an airport are illustrated in the maps provided

2 - Please get out of the compressed idea presentation per sentence mindset. The more information you try to add to...

Writing FeedbackQuang Bao - Nov 22, 2021Holt - 21 hrs ago

The chart below show the average proportions of sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in meals

2 - We do not rate the essays based on the IELTS considerations for free. For sectional scoring and assessment, you...

Writing Feedbackhana146 - Nov 23, 2021Holt - 22 hrs ago

Academic (LOR) Letter of recommendation for MS in Energy Systems Engineering

2 - This letter is very unprofessional. It does not contain the wording and phrasing that a high level college professor,...

Letterswaihwake - Nov 25, 2021Holt - 22 hrs ago

Mandatory history courses for students? Relying on the outcomes of the past events is not useful.

2 - This phrase made your opinion statement less than convincing. You are uncertain of your opinion in a set...

Writing Feedbackfarzanehhh - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago

The graph shows the amount of money earned by graduates of different age groups in 2002

2 - Incorrect writing format. You cannot use the task 2 essay format for the task 1 essay. The task 1...

Writing FeedbackCheeseQuang - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago

IELTS Task 1: the information taken from a report on the energy consumption in the USA since 1980

2 - In reality, your summary sentence is not changed enough to be considered an information restatement on your part. This...

Writing Feedbacklingwang - 1 day agoHolt - 1 day ago

Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders

2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...

Research Paperselilucero13 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

WHAT IS IMPORTANT TO YOU? WHY? Knowing my limits

2 - Knowing your limits refers to actually finding out what your limitations are and how you got around it. It...

Undergraduatemo6562 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

These days people in some countries tend to live a lavish lifestyle

2 - Use of a memorized phrase will be a score deduction in the TA section. Avoid using place holder...

Writing Feedbackhahihe15 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

The consumption of sugar based drinks is on the rise. How to tackle this problem?

2 - Incorrect. These are the writer's personal opinions, which are not referenced at all in the original...

Writing FeedbackJoey1805 - 2 days agoHolt - 1 day ago

It is argued that schooling from early age would be ideal for the children' development

2 - While the prompt restatement and opinion is not grammatically accurate, it is still understandable enough for an ENL. Your...

Writing Feedbackhanguyen79 - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago

Motivation Statement for MS Game and Media Technology in Utrecht University

2 - Like is not enough of a reason to want to study this MS course. Unless you can create...

Graduateboringjill - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago

SCHOLARSHIP APPLICATION FOR ERASMUS MUNDUS FOR MASTERS IN MANAGEMENT AND ENG OF ENERGY & ENVIRONMENT

2 - You can strike this totally from the presentation because it does not offer any insight into your motivation....

Scholarshipnere - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago

"A suitable candidate" - Could you help me out with the Stipendium Hungaricum (Scholarship) essay?

2 - Wanting to study for free in a foreign land is not an acceptable reason to apply for the...

Scholarshipkartoshatatosha - 2 days agoHolt - 2 days ago

" It is beneficial for teenagers to receive pocket money from their parents". Do you agree?

2 - There are several problems with your opening statement. The first, is that you used a direct cut and paste...

Writing FeedbackHoang Trieu - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021

IELTS writing task 2. Should students pay for their colleges' tuition fee, or government?

2 - This is highly non-academic in reference. Avoid using too much everyday English words that are informal in presentation....

Writing Feedbackbaudgy - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021

IELTS Task 1: The price of tickets on one airline between Sydney and Melbourne

2 - Two things are missing from your summary overview. The first is the number of charts. The second, is the...

Writing Feedbacknhidinh1231 - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021

IELTS Writing task 2: Children with mobile phone discussion

2 - As a basic rule, you must not begin the discussion of your opinion in the prompt restatement + opinion...

Writing Feedbacksaklovesyao - Nov 25, 2021Holt - Nov 26, 2021