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Spend money and save money. Discussion of both sides.

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IELTS Task 2 - The government should spend more money on medical research to protect citizens health

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Writing Task 1 - The figure for marriages and divorces in the UK over a period of 25 years

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A street market in summer in a hot climate. Write a short descriptive paragraph.

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