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dreamof90   
Mar 16, 2017
Writing Feedback / workers commuting to work. IELTS Writing Task 1 - Paraphrasing INTRODUCTION [4]

+ This is the question:
The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030.

+ And this is my answer:
Allocated is the chart revealing how many workers on the average have commuted everyday by three different means of transport, namely car, bus and train over the course of 60 years starting in 1970.

I am not sure about the way paraphrase this question, please correct my grammar mistakes (if any)
THANK YOU SO MUCH! I REALLY APPRECIATE YOUR HELP!
dreamof90   
Mar 16, 2017
Writing Feedback / workers commuting to work. IELTS Writing Task 1 - Paraphrasing INTRODUCTION [4]

@Holt
This is my very first time asking question in this forum. Thank you for your helpful answer. I learnt a lot from your idea.

I just attached a image which is the full question. I prefer writing one-sentence introduction, so please correct my answer. Thank you for your kindness!!!

Allocated is the chart revealing how many workers on the average have commuted everyday by three different means of transport, namely car, bus and train over the course of 60 years starting in 1970 in the United Kingdom.



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