Undergraduate / AIF - Honours Arts at the University of Waterloo [2]

HEY So the deadline is 3.17 which is TOMORROW so I really need anybody who is willing to look over my paragraph T^T

Question 1

Reasons for choosing your program and Waterloo

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Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest...

Answer 1
Honours Arts at the University of Waterloo is known to be a cooperative and flexible first-year program. As someone who enjoys exploring a wide variety of interests, I strongly believe that the boundless opportunities available at Waterloo will greatly benefit me in pursuing a degree in Bachelor of Arts. Through the Honours Arts program, not only will I be able to major in my passion for the fine arts, but I will also be able to further develop skills needed to grow and learn to become the best of the best at what I do. In today's society the majority with art degrees are commonly known as "starving artists" or they'll find themselves to be jobless. However, with the help of Waterloo's superior co op program I strongly believe that I can become the minority that rises to success. I believe my life's dream of becoming an art teacher can only be accomplished through Waterloo.