Undergraduate / "one week to compensate for 7 years of absence" - UF Topic [11]

I like the idea, but so far the essay does not showcase the qualities that make you Gator-material. I think you should talk about how your experience has affected you and how it will benefit your college career.

ps- I'm applying for UF too! It's my number one choice :]

Undergraduate / "one week to compensate for 7 years of absence" - UF Topic [11]

I like how you incorporated your view on opportunities, and how they can be taken for granted. It can be tied in nicely with the "idea of student responsibility" or maybe even "call to service".