Daughaqu
May 15, 2018
Scholarship / Essay about African-American leader in my field who has inspired me to achieve my goals [2]
In my life I've seen and been through some hard times. I've seen dead people, been homeless, lived right in front of a Drug house whose owner murdered two people, escaped crazy family members, prayed over dead classmates, had the swat team in my back yard, had one neighbor stab his girlfriend, seen another neighbors thirteen year old kidnapped and then found shot in the stomach and head, been stalked, had to get down on the floor to avoid getting shot, been bullied and to top it all of I almost got aborted be but in spite of all that there has been one leader in the African American community that has inspired me to achieve my goals and that is Dr. Andrew Bears an economist that taught at Yale University who teaches in order to advance in this country it is important to know financial literacy.
Can anyone give me some tips on how to improve my Hook Paragraph essay.
an inspiring economist from Yale
In my life I've seen and been through some hard times. I've seen dead people, been homeless, lived right in front of a Drug house whose owner murdered two people, escaped crazy family members, prayed over dead classmates, had the swat team in my back yard, had one neighbor stab his girlfriend, seen another neighbors thirteen year old kidnapped and then found shot in the stomach and head, been stalked, had to get down on the floor to avoid getting shot, been bullied and to top it all of I almost got aborted be but in spite of all that there has been one leader in the African American community that has inspired me to achieve my goals and that is Dr. Andrew Bears an economist that taught at Yale University who teaches in order to advance in this country it is important to know financial literacy.
Can anyone give me some tips on how to improve my Hook Paragraph essay.