Undergraduate / Common App. Essay Public Speaking [3]

not five hundred eyes make it five hundred pairs of eyes...i am not good at grammar so cant help much in that. i like your essay but praise yourself a little less. sentences like -Although most of the students that joined the club didn't think or seem to have learned anything form the club, I was determined to make use of that experience.... then it was time to really show off my skills, at my school's annual speech contest. rest i think is good. best of luck