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Aug 8, 2021
Writing Feedback / The bar chart shows the proportion of British people who give money to charity in five age groups [2]
Writing Task 1:
The bar chart shows the proportion of British people who give money to charity in five age groups in 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of people between 36 and 50 giving money to charity is the highest. The percentage of people donating money in 1990 was greater than in 2010. It is also noticeable that the most difference in the proportion of people donating money in two years is in a group of people from 18 to 25.
In 1990, more than 40% of British people between 36 and 50 gave money to charity, it is the highest proportion in the chart, while the least proportion was in a group of people from 18 to 25. In 2010, these figures of both groups decreased to 35% and 14%, respectively. Besides, the percentage of donating of people in the 26-35 age group declined from 32% to 24%.
In 1990, 35% and 32% of people giving money to charity were in the 51-65 and the over 65 age group, respectively. These figures of both groups increased to 39% and 35% in 2010.
Writing Task 1:
the percentage of British people giving money to charity
The bar chart shows the proportion of British people who give money to charity in five age groups in 1990 and 2010.
Overall, it is clear that the percentage of people between 36 and 50 giving money to charity is the highest. The percentage of people donating money in 1990 was greater than in 2010. It is also noticeable that the most difference in the proportion of people donating money in two years is in a group of people from 18 to 25.
In 1990, more than 40% of British people between 36 and 50 gave money to charity, it is the highest proportion in the chart, while the least proportion was in a group of people from 18 to 25. In 2010, these figures of both groups decreased to 35% and 14%, respectively. Besides, the percentage of donating of people in the 26-35 age group declined from 32% to 24%.
In 1990, 35% and 32% of people giving money to charity were in the 51-65 and the over 65 age group, respectively. These figures of both groups increased to 39% and 35% in 2010.
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