Undergraduate / The Ideological and Emotional Interconnectedness of Humanity: Common App Main Personal Statement [4]

@gigi_aa Sorry if im too late! After reading this through, I really believe that this an Ivy-league tier essay. It really shows your ethic roots and background, and invokes a lot of powerful imagery throughout that could captivate admission readers. the only thing i would change would be the organization, into a fewer paragraphs just for readibility purposes.

anyways, this was truly a great essay! praying you get into your dream college :)