Undergraduate / Mechanical Engineering to be my professional career [6]

having trouble with this essay because I am not sure of my exact career choice. I plan to study mechanical engineering but to what exact end...I do not know. is this essay to plain? I'm not sure how to proceed here.

Describe your personal and/or career goals after graduating from UIUC and how your selected first-choice major will help you achieve them.* (150 words)

Of course, I want to enter the workforce upon graduation from University of Illinois. A job is what most people want so they can pay their bills. However, I do not want a job. I want a career because it offers more than just money. It is about connecting to the community and how it makes you feel within it. I want to be excited to go to work. Upon graduation, I will seek work at a place that will support me in my goal to have a meaningful impact. Mechanical Engineering is the study of objects and systems in motion, as such, it touches virtually every aspect of modern life. This versatility will allow me opportunities to engage in a career that creates meaningful technological change. This is my ultimate career.