Posts by determinedgirl
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determinedgirl Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate /
MIT admission essay- difficult situation [2]
Wow. A very impressive essay. Written metaphorically, I don't know if that really fits your essay, but it's unique.
Overall, great and uniquely written.
determinedgirl Dec 29, 2009
Undergraduate /
Essay for Harvard, Yale, Stanford - What impression do you get? Is it arrogant? [14]
Thanks for the comment. Definitely helps.
Your essay is wonderful. It paints a very powerful picture of what kind of person you are.
I hope that at university and in life I can share this aspiration with others, the reason I want to step through that lamp-lit golden door.
there needs to an "a" before "university.
The essay spans alot of topics, but I think it works for you. Good luck!
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