Undergraduate / Common Application Essay - Topic of your choice - Dreams Deferred [40]

the sentence isn't awkward at all and yes it should be a new aragraph. over all i enjoyed you essay! :) nice work

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Undergraduate / Common Application Essay - Topic of your choice - Dreams Deferred [40]

(Should this be a new paragraph, or can I keep it attached to the few sentences before) --- yes break it up, but...

on the previous paragraph your should write: This was the case my junior year of high school.

begin new paragraph with: I qualified for the National Forensics....