PrincessNibi
Jan 30, 2010
Undergraduate / Life is short and my ambitions are many-Transfer-Personal statement [7]
Hi,
I would like to get some help revising my personal statement. I'd really appreciate it.
Thanks.
Instructions:Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
During my time at ******** College I have undoubtedly learned important things that will help me through the path of personal and academic growth, but, despite this being a great institution, it does not offer everything I need in order to further develop my skills and be useful to society and the college itself. Life is short and my ambitions are many, therefore I make it an obligation to achieve all my goals and make myself helpful to the ones around me.
My main objective is to become a skilled interpreter who is able to translate to and from many different tongues including Japanese, Spanish and Italian. In doing so, I hope to facilitate communication between people of different backgrounds to eliminate inequalities and dissonances between them. I believe discrimination and hatred are caused by the lack of understanding between people, which is brought on mainly by the secular priesthood of every country. It is my personal hypothesis that if I were able to ease communication and facilitate conversation, I could slowly decrease the existing disharmony and help people understand each other better, which would decrease racism and hatred in the long run. I understand I am only one person and the world is big, but if Martin Luther King and Albert Einstein were able to change the world, so can I.
Because of my family's financial situation I was obligated to enroll at ******** College, and, although it gave me the best financial assistance at the time, it does not facilitate a way to realize my dreams. I have tried to make the best of my time here, but in this case perseverance will not lead to success. After exploring many possibilities, transferring into another institution is the only way I can develop my skills and turn them into something that will benefit me and the world as a whole.
Also, should I include my name at the top?
Thank you so much for your help.
Hi,
I would like to get some help revising my personal statement. I'd really appreciate it.
Thanks.
Instructions:Please provide a statement (250 words minimum) that addresses your reasons for transferring and the objectives you hope to achieve.
During my time at ******** College I have undoubtedly learned important things that will help me through the path of personal and academic growth, but, despite this being a great institution, it does not offer everything I need in order to further develop my skills and be useful to society and the college itself. Life is short and my ambitions are many, therefore I make it an obligation to achieve all my goals and make myself helpful to the ones around me.
My main objective is to become a skilled interpreter who is able to translate to and from many different tongues including Japanese, Spanish and Italian. In doing so, I hope to facilitate communication between people of different backgrounds to eliminate inequalities and dissonances between them. I believe discrimination and hatred are caused by the lack of understanding between people, which is brought on mainly by the secular priesthood of every country. It is my personal hypothesis that if I were able to ease communication and facilitate conversation, I could slowly decrease the existing disharmony and help people understand each other better, which would decrease racism and hatred in the long run. I understand I am only one person and the world is big, but if Martin Luther King and Albert Einstein were able to change the world, so can I.
Because of my family's financial situation I was obligated to enroll at ******** College, and, although it gave me the best financial assistance at the time, it does not facilitate a way to realize my dreams. I have tried to make the best of my time here, but in this case perseverance will not lead to success. After exploring many possibilities, transferring into another institution is the only way I can develop my skills and turn them into something that will benefit me and the world as a whole.
Also, should I include my name at the top?
Thank you so much for your help.