Poetry / stair case to no where....5 senses [3]

i don't know where i stand,i look around,
all the same to me , night is day
and day is night,without you it all looks the same
i can smell the single most perfect rose you gave me back then
if it only didnt have sharp thorns
i can taste sour milk, so sour in my mouth
no one to add some sweet sugar,
specially not you
i miss how warm you used to make me feel
like a little kid and how his blanket makes him feel
i feel so cold without my blanket
i hear a loud crowed going wild, cant think,cant move on
all the staircase leads to no where

plzzz help its due tomorrow, i noe its not even one bit good,spelling is sooo bad i noe...hahahah help plzzz??