Undergraduate / essay on Myself -- characteristics, ambition, school [5]

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Writing Feedback / Television- A Boon or a Bane? [6]

Let's imagine : if one day , one person spends a hour watching TV without gaining any useful information , then in one year he will waste 365 hours and in 10 year is 3605 hours. With that time , you can learn several language as well as finish some studying course. On the other hand , television programme are not always suitable for all ages.Sometimes , there are some movies containing violence which affected the stormy phase of growing of children and teenagers and should not be watched ,even by some adults. It will be extremely dangerous if parents neglect their children to discover the TV programme themselves as they will immediately take influence of what they see . To rectify this situation , parents must supervise their children 's TV watching throughout their childhood and adolescence period. In the aspect of health , spending hours watching TV is harmful to your eyesight . Why don't play some sport and breathe the fresh air .When your eyes are tired , you 'd better let them rest than continue to paste them in the screen.

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Essays / The Country of My Choice Essay (but I've never visited another country) [3]

Thank you for your help.
I researched Google.
I got 8/10 marks on that essay.

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