Rabz12
Aug 12, 2010
Graduate / Masters of Law program - the opening paragraph of my statement. [3]
Hello Everyone!
I am writing a statement for Masters of Law program, so far I have written the opening paragraph only. please do let me know of any suggestions or changes to make this paragraph look better.
"I have always been equally interested in Business and Law. I always wanted to pursue a feild that amalgamates both while providing equal opportunities. At first, I did not know what to do with this passion of mine but soon I realized that I was able to incorporate Business into Law in future by specializing in a either Business Law after receiving undergraduate degree in law."
Looking forward
Hello Everyone!
I am writing a statement for Masters of Law program, so far I have written the opening paragraph only. please do let me know of any suggestions or changes to make this paragraph look better.
"I have always been equally interested in Business and Law. I always wanted to pursue a feild that amalgamates both while providing equal opportunities. At first, I did not know what to do with this passion of mine but soon I realized that I was able to incorporate Business into Law in future by specializing in a either Business Law after receiving undergraduate degree in law."
Looking forward
