Undergraduate / Common App - Dear Mom and Dad, DECA campaign [8]

Wow. I just registered for this site so I could comment on your essay. I thought it was brillant.

The only part I'm unsure of is the last two lines (the "please support me in general, not just in my campaign. In general"). I was a little confused because I got the impression they are very supportive of you from the beginning of the essay, even if they don't completely understand DECA.

But overall, it's a stunning essay. I'm jealous :)