Tania D
Sep 18, 2010
Writing Feedback / IELTS -Weather it is pointless to keep the traditional skills and ways of life alive [16]
I guess yuo are going to take IELTS exam, me too. I want to give you some advice. First of all, you shouldn't start your essay with the same wards that the task has. It shows that your vocabulary is poor and that you are unable to rephrase the task.
Many people in my country believe it is a wise decision to keep them alive since the tradition is the heritage we inherit from our ancestors ----two word with the same root!!!!
It is, however, not an easy job to prove that view is totally true.
Some individuals firmly argue that keeping the traditional skills and ways of life alive makes nonsense.
...,which had been replaced by solar energy, while this method costs more.
Actually, I might have made few mistakes. Sorry! I'm only studying English.
I guess yuo are going to take IELTS exam, me too. I want to give you some advice. First of all, you shouldn't start your essay with the same wards that the task has. It shows that your vocabulary is poor and that you are unable to rephrase the task.
Many people in my country believe it is a wise decision to keep them alive since the tradition is the heritage we inherit from our ancestors ----two word with the same root!!!!
It is, however, not an easy job to prove that view is totally true.
Some individuals firmly argue that keeping the traditional skills and ways of life alive makes nonsense.
...,which had been replaced by solar energy, while this method costs more.
Actually, I might have made few mistakes. Sorry! I'm only studying English.