Unanswered [8] | Urgent [0]
  

Posts by barkabarx
Joined: Oct 20, 2010		 Last Post: Oct 20, 2010
Threads: 1
Posts: 1  
From: United States of America

Displayed posts: 2
sort: Oldest first   Latest first  | 
barkabarx   
Oct 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / My Struggle to Achieve Greatness: Law School Personal Essay-Looking for feedback [3]

Try not to include I guess in the first paragraph. Other advice is do not begin your essay with this essay will tell you or you will read about. Also do not include like unless you are writing similes and metaphors. The last line of your essay doesn't make sense either ( Ithink you forgot the I in front of am). Even though there are some mistakes, great essay!
barkabarx   
Oct 20, 2010
Writing Feedback / This is my part of my essay about patriotism and fighting for what you believe in. [2]

Patriotism. What is it, really? Yes, it is hanging your nation's flag outside your house, but it is more than that. Patriotism is fighting for your country and what you believe in. Our fore-fathers brought forth this country by hard work and pride. They fought both physically and spiritually for our country, as many other people have brought fought for countries of their own. They bring pride and honour to their countries....
Need Writing or Editing Help?
✖
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳