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nisha1   
Dec 6, 2010
Undergraduate / "about trying out for a team" - Common App Essay- 'And We Took to the Skies' [3]

You did not post if there were any guidelines on words permitted. If there was than stick to the guidelines because they tend to not respond to applicants who do not follow instruction. But overall I thought your essay was interesting. It kept me reading good luck!
nisha1   
Dec 6, 2010
Scholarship / (career position in management) - your career goals and why you need a scholarship [5]

I am new here so I hope I do this right. I have to write a 2-3 paragraph( 75-250 words) describing [/b[b][/b[b]]]your career goals and why you need a scholarship? I never wrote one before but this is what I have so far. I would love some feed back please.

My current career position in management has caused me to recognize that a well rounded person needs to pursue both a life experience as well as an educational experience. Knowing the key is knowledge. I desire to pursue not only an associate degree in business but a bachelor, and then my masters and beyond.

As you can see I have some wonderful goals in mind yet I lack the financial resources to accomplish them. By receiving this scholarship I will be able to begin my journey of fulfilling my dreams of becoming an entrepreneur.
nisha1   
Dec 8, 2010
Scholarship / (career position in management) - your career goals and why you need a scholarship [5]

My current career position in management has caused me to recognize that a well rounded person needs to pursue both a life experience as well as an educational experience. Knowing the key is knowledge. I desire to pursue not only an associate degree in business but a bachelor, and then my masters and beyond.

As you can see I have some wonderful goals in mind yet I lack the financial resources to accomplish them. After all my household expense are paid the amount of money left will not cover the expense of attending college. By receiving this scholarship it will allow me to pursue my journey of fulfilling my dreams of becoming an entrepreneur.
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